lovlyyy update .. m happy tht u listend to ur heart n wrote wht u want as it is u hav nt hurt ny1's religious belif or senti ments so no need to wrry .. good tht u rewrote u m happy n proud of u bass thodaa romnce aur mahi mahi momnts zyada hona chahiye thaa π πππ
hi thanks 4 da pm! Read the edited version! Wonderfully written! Maan was always with her n always der 4 her! He waited 4 her! Eventually she accepted him! She required tym! She was traumatised! well handled!
this time even more interesting she finally came out of her fear and all thanx to his love and support though that wasnt easy was it# but she did and that was just what was needed am glad that you wrote more again cheers for pm
great work... bt i am disappointed by sapna... i knw she is forcd by situation,still couldnt accept her behaviour... lovd maan's characterisation... i wish to hav a person like him in my life...
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