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Prologue

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Maan


Dev: bro geet aapki patni hai

Aap dono toh ek dusre se itna pyaar karte hai

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He : sir sameera sch kh rhi hai

Sameera : Maan I love you

Geet : Maan aap toh hmare rishte ko mante hi nhi

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Please stop all of this...he screamed and close the both eyes...

Maan : leave me alone

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He opened the eyes after few minutes and see around no one is here...he is alone in own room...

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Maan :  ek taraf asa beeta huya kal hai

Jha maine apne pyaar ko tutte huye dekha hai

Aur aaj whi pyaar firse samne khada hai

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Aur dusri taraf asa bita huya kal hai

Jo mujhe yaad hi nhi

Jha mere sbhi apne khte hai

Mere aur geet ki rishte mein bhut pyaar tha

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Pr mujhe kuch yaad kyun nhi....

 

Geet

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Kaise yaad dilayu mein sb kuch maan ko

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Kaise yakin dilayu apne rishte ke

Apne pyaar ka

Unhe na mein yaad hu...

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Na hamara pyaar

Na wo mujhpe thik se barosha krte hai

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Aaj unka bita huya kal ..unka pyaar (kbhi me hi unka sb kuch thi...)

Tears flow down from her eyes...

Unke samne hai

Jisse wo jante hai

Pechante hai

Sayad aaj bhi pyaa...

She stops in mid...

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Nhi wo sirf Geet ke Maan hai

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Mere babaji unhe mujhse durr nhi kr sakte...

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Please babaji


She fall down on her knees on floor

 


see below post... 


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CONCEPT


 

I start this story from where maan lost his memory...he forget beloved wife geet...

In conference room, he knows about the marriage with geet..he blame geet but dev tell the whole truth to him...

Geet is your wife bro...geet leave the mention but maan stop her...but not accept her as wife...

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part 13 on page 1

part 14 on page 8

part 15 on page 16

part 16 on page 19

part 17 on page 22


part 19 on page 36 & precap on page 38

teaser on page44

part 20 on page 48

part 21 on page 58
 
part 22 on page 68

part 23 on page 75

part 24 on page 83

PART 25 ON PAGE 91


part 27 on page 103

part 28 on page 106


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                    part 13
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She stands near window and see the moon...


(Note: - don't confuse friends; now here I am combining past & 

present scenes together, I hope no confusion happened.)


She thinks about maan... how he denies today for breaking her 

fast.

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Manzilein rusva hain..

Khoya hai raasta

Aaye le jaaye..

Itni si iltaza

 

Geet : ek din tha maan

Jb aap ne mera karvachauth ka fast todne ke liye kya kya nhi kiya 

tha

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She smiles for remembering beautiful past.

Jha pe maan ke pyaar ne un bitti ar kadvi yaad ko mita diya

 

Ye meri zamaanat hai

Tu meri amaanat hai haan..

 

Aaa aa aa..


Maan : geet mein nhi janta

Ek se jyada janam milte hai ya nhi

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Agar milte hai

Toh har janam mein mujhe tumhara hi sath chaiye

 

Mujhko iraade de

Kasmein de, vaade de

Meri duaaon ke isharon ko sahare de

Dil ko thikaane de

Naye bahaane de

Khwabon ki barishon ko

Mausam ke paimaane de

 

She cried or smiled on her fate, today she not understanding.

 

Baba: maula tum dono ki Jodi bnaye rakhe

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Apne karam ki kar adayein..

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

 

How we take sath phere, he promised me.

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Maan : geet aaj jitna rona hai, ro le

Aaj ke baad mein tumhari aankhon mein aansu nhi dekhna chahta

 

 

Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro rahi hoon, main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

 

Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro rahi hoon, main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

 

Yaara.. Aaa..

 

She takes out her wedding dress and cares the dress. Then look into mirror.

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Kurbaan hua...

 

Waqt bhi thehra hai

 

Maan :- geet maine is jaahan ki sari khubsurat cheezo mein sirf tumhe hi dekha hai

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Har baat, har zaare mein, sirf tumhara hi toh zikr hota hai

 

Kaise kyun yeh huaa

Kaass tu aise aaye

Jaise koi duaa

 

She kisses the letter many times.

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Maan : -geet jb bhi tumhari aankhon mein aansu dekhta hu, to ase lagta hai , jaise mera dil katra katra hoke in aansu mein bh jaayenga

 

Tu rooh ki raahat hai

She wipes her tears...

 

Tu meri ibaadat hai..

Aa aaa..

 

Apne karam ki kar adayein..

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

 

Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro rahi hoon, main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

 

How he manofy me,

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How he loves me...

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Aaj kuch nhi rha

 

She lay on bed...

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Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro rahi hoon, main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Yaaraa aa...

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Congrats for new thread..👏
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congrats for the new thread dear
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congrats for new thread
update was awesome
i loved d way u show how geet was remembering d time she spent with maan
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congrats  for the new thread



Beautiful Update
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wow superb.bt painful.hope maan remember everything