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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

I think.. Maan will get to know slowly how much his Geet has suffered...


yes dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MGRMFFS

AWOSOME PART IT DI...

LOVED IT 😊


thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

Awesome update feeling really sad for geet

How long she wil suppress her sorrows!!
WHere is maans promise now that he will nevel let any tear come in geet's eyes?
Really really very sad :(
How much geet will Suffer !!!


maan forget his promises dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 20

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He knocks on her door.

Geet : maan aap yaha

Kuch chaiye tha aapko

Maan : wo geet

Geet : maan aap kuch khehna chahte hai

Ya fir kuch janana chahte hai

He not knows how to ask from her about baby. He turn to go but geet held his wrist make stop her.

Geet : maan aapko baby ke baare mein baat krni thi

Maan :

Geet : maan aap us baat se pareshaan hai jo aaj evening me huya

.

Maan please aapko khud ko helpless, ya kasoorvaar mt smjhna

Aap thode na mujhe bhulna chahte the

Aapko ek din sb yaad jaroor aa jaayenga

Mujhe pura yakin hai

He absently said "geet tum itni himmat kaha se laati ho"

She smiled and said to him " aapka pyaar aur sath aapki Misthi ko himmat deta hai "

Maan : misthi ?

Geet : hmm

.

Ab please ye mt puchna misthi kaun

Ye toh aapko yaad krna hi padenga

Nhi toh mein gussa ho jaayungi

She sweetly smiled and said goodnight to him.

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At breakfast table

Maan : good morning daadimaa

Daadi : good morning bte

Aaj aap bhut relax lag rhe hai

.

Aapne kal raat geet se baat ki fir

Maan : daadi maa wo thik thi

Daadi : pr hume to laga tha

Maan : nhi daadimaa

Balki kal geet se baat krne ke baat I felt relax

.

Daadi : hmm

Maan : daadimaa she is fine

Aap please tension mt lijiye

Daadi : nakul

Nakul : ji

Daadi : geet kaha hai

Nakul : ji wo toh aaj subh se niche hi nhi aayi hai

Daadi : ok

Hum bulake late hai unhe

Maan : daadi aap baithye

Mein bula ke lata hu

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Geet : babaji ab mein kya karu

.

Mein to kapde bahar hi bhul gyi

.

Geet tu na puri bulakd ho gyi hai

Ek toh phle late ho gyi

Aur ab ye sb

.

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Maan knocks the door, but door already is opened. He came inside and sees all rounds but not see geet anywhere, in this between geet came out from washroom and picks the cloth quickly and turns & bumped on him, before her fall, maan held her by waist.

She wearing the bathrobe, he mesmerize in her beauty, her wet hair, her curved touched his chest pass the current in his veins, he lost in her eyes.

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She placed palm on his cheek, she coming close to him, he loosen the grip on her waist and turn the face.

She felt hurt but what she does. He realize what he do by mistakenly, he turn to look her, and see she wearing the bathrobe and came out from washroom.

Maan : geet

He shouted on her.

Geet : maan kya huya

Aap kyun chila rhe ho

Maan : tum me dimag hai ya nhi

Geet : what?

Maan aap meri baat suniye

Maan : tum meri baat suno

Ase koi washroom se bahar aata hai

Koi room mein aa jaata toh

.

Geet : koi room mein kaise aayenga

Maan : geet door se hi aayenga

Jo tumne open chod rakha hai

Aur upar se tum

Geet : Mr. Maan Singh khurana

Ek aap hi hai jo mere piche, bina soche smjhe khi bhi aa jaate hai

She remembers the moment before he also came like this at the time, she doing job in Indian paints.

Maan : geet

.

Geet

He lightly jerks her shoulder.

Maan : geet you are ok

Geet : maan ase phle bhi huya hai

Ek baar nhi kyi baar

.

Outhouse mein

.

Indian paints ... Jo aapne khridi thi ...taki aap mere pass rh sake

She smiled.

Us waqt aap gussa tha...galati bhi toh meri thi

.

Aapke gusse mein bhi pyaar tha

.

Fir Amritsar mein

Tb aap mujhe

Maan : geet bs

Jaldi ready ho jaayo

Daadi tumhara wait kr rhi hai

Geet : hmm

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Maan : ye ladki bilkul pagal hai

Phle mujhe itna intzaar krwaya

Aur ab khti hai

Office late aayungi

Kuch kaam hai

.

Asa kaunsa kaam aa gya usse

.

He sits in cabin...

Maan ye tujhe kya ho gya hai

Tu geet ki tarah khudse baatein kbse krne laga

.

He relaxes on chair and closed the eyes. Geet face came front into his eyes, her cute & sexy wet look, how she telling our moments, her smile, her blank hurtful eyes.

Geet bs

He opened the eyes swiftly.

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Note :-

@nishamna

dear pyaar to aaj bhi hai...bs khud uss ehsaas se anjaan hai...

Dear I read your all wishes

like #suhana , #ishitairani wants baby track

#jane523 , #richa you wants maan felt jealous.

#jasminerahul you want Vicky track.

Friends I fulfilled your all wishes...but its take time. So, thoda wait kro...

If I forget mentioning any of my friend name so sorry for that ...


precap :- teaser on page44

previous part 19 on page 36 & precap on page 38
Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
priyanka it was amazing. i loved it so much. yes you are right pyaar to abhi bhi hai bas realize karna baki hai. i loved bedroom part. oh my god both were lost. but maan bhi na jaldi hosh mein aa jata hai. it was surprising part when maan was imagining geet. very very exited for next dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab ud dr
geet relaxd maan
bedrum part ws lovely
maan mising geet
ud nxt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful and sweet update dear
maan went to talk to geet .
geet can read his pain . she consoled him
wet geet and lost maan😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ne kitane achhe se Maan ko guilt se bahar nikala... Again with Geet.. he will realize he has truly loved Geet though not remember abt love...Amazing part.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update di
I am living this track too much
Maan got to know about the baby
Abhi 2-3 updates keep lite Sam ko pls dur rakhna di
I want to see Sam reaction after learning that geet is Maan wife
Sorry for not ccommenting was busy in exams
Will be waiting
Cont soon di and a long update this time
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! lovely update! Maan mesmerised bt her! update soon, well written

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