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Anupama

@Anupama.

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Fire place ve!

Sorry sorry for this extra post. I had gotten confused and was trying to res again with 'fireplace ve'. :(
sorry to the one who could have got a seat in the front row ( updates' page ) :(Edited by Anupama. - 10 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

"Phew" Just in time !

Bring it on Foster !

Edited :

Heartiest Congratulations to Mr and Mrs Foster ! ❤️

What a beautiful wedding ... you wrote it with such exquisite detailing i felt i was a part if it.

And of course their journey to becoming one body and soul ...mesmerizing!😳

And i so loved this line :😆 (You know why)

Khushi cried out Arnav's name and heard Arnav swearing colorfully in the background.

Edited by _disha_ - 10 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

res!

unres!

Oh my god!

lets start from the beginning!

those pics are absolutely stunning, i cud really picture arnav and khushi in the church in the first pic!

and wow, the invitation card was so so so beautiful!

how did the chapter end so soon?

i had just started reading and it was already over?😭

I loved the feelings that was displayed during the wedding. the overwhelming feeling that khushi felt while they took the vows!

oh god, absolutely stole away!

Branny was so cute. he was so hyper and excited abt his parents wedding and he being the ring bearer!

im sure he has to be the cutest ring bearer ever!

I loved the little run in the rain!

I am amazed at how beautifully u wrote their souls becoming one!

it was such an amazing chapter!

please update soon this time. cant wait for a week before the chapter!

and pleaseee long chapter!

and also an epilogue maybe?😳

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 10 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

wow what a beautiful and peaceful feelings we got today...wonderful...thankyouEdited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Wow waiting for both als and bwd...excited update soon...

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909720

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

updated

Hey Jenny,

What do I say? And how do I say? I am amazed and bowled over.

I don't want to say anything, I just want to enjoy and linger these moments of utmost joy and happiness of Arnav and Khushi union. It was beyond perfect, everything was so right and satisfying. This was the moment when I felt the whole journey, pain, agony, heartache everything was worth it. This was written so brilliantly that I got so immersed in reading and visualizing that I was holding my breath, and sighed in contentment in the end.😃

I found the following song (by Ronan Keating) perfect for Mr. and Mrs. Foster's wedding

"This I Promise You"

My love, here I stand before you
I am yours now from this moment on
Take my hand, only you can stop me shaking
We'll share forever, this I promise you

And when I look in your eyes
All of my life is before me
And I'm not running anymore
'Cause I already know I'm home
With every beat of my heart
I'll give you my love completely
My darling, this I promise you

My love, I can feel your heartbeat
As we dance now closer than before
Don't let go, 'cause I could almost cry now
This is forever, I make this vow to you

My darling, this I promise you
My darling, this I promise you

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ahoyEtBUuo

This is for you 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 10 years ago

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Res

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Alright I can't help but mention this here... The best thing I look forward to when it rains, is the stretch of white Lillie's that bloom in our garden after the rains... It is a sight that just makes me forget everything else around and finds me an unimaginable pure joy n peace in an otherwise commotion filled morning... Jenny this update just had me there... So beautifully written.. It was so poetic in every possible sense... The wait was long n when it happened it was put forth as the effects of longing that the souls would have felt... Pure joy n no other thoughts (*ahem*) crossed my mind...

I have never been to a Christian marriage but have read n seen in reel a lot... To me this was "the perfect" one I have ever come across... Mr Foster made an ahhh so dapper groom n when he took the vows my heart made an million thuds too... Khushi's tears were expected n felt so realistic... Who wouldn't when put in front of the love incarnate... So romantically written... Jenny my girl you just had me crying on a happy Wala update too...

Ps: I am still hoping that the journey with the Foster's does not end here... Occasional one shots throwing snippets on their life will help us cherish n live in this Foster Family... Think about it Jenny... Only if you feel to keep ALS open as long as you could... Edited by preethi.saseeda - 10 years ago