The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 27

Loved the update, especially the last part 😉

lovely update...i just love reading ur stories...and this one is surely a masterpiece...this is so fresh and new...

that was close for them both
should have known he wouldnt do it
wait this girl he was with was even younger than his wife
seems where ever he goes he is met by even moe young girls
ahhh he stopped in time too
but bit late on his wife way though
and yes khushi growing up is lot more hassle than one thinks
dude its because of what you said she wants to be a woman
but dont take it to heart too much this was bound to happen
ahhh it seems that she is hell bent on growing up
but she still doesnt know what that means
or what having to sleep with her hubby means
and arnie aint helping either
well lets see how it goes from here
cheers for pm

This chapter was adorable
Thank god he didn't do it that too with a 13 year old
kushi is just so lnnocent now when will she grow up literally
I can't wait to see them falling in lovelnnocentd
Thanks for the pm dear 😊 Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 10 years ago

Jenny...this one is also turning out to be awesome!

Wonderful update! I'm so glad that he didn't do it! Awww khushi Is having to grow up fast! All this for a baby!

aahhh you hve brought a humor in a otherwise what would have been a very serious and delicate situation ..

That was a perfectly well written update...love it

Addendum:
Judging by the first few comments, I think I should have made it more clear that he didn't do it...

Just fantastic and a smooth update. You hold every part beautifully. Be it arnav or Khushi going through that night.