Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 32

superb part.. loved it 😊... its gr8 Geet was shopping..well said maan.. here people r known for cards..

waiting for next part.. surprise things😊

lovely... but pls update soon...😭

WHAT A CHANGE FOR MAAN

beautiful dear

Another superb update 😊 😛

Just luv the little dialogues you give betwwen Maan nd Geet 😛 😛

Throughly enjoyable, just by reading cud imagne Maan and Geet snuggled up together, and Geet's cute pout, its too good 😛

Luved hw Maan took Geet shopping, the store manager is a really nyce maan, and the last part when Geet went to that store where she was insulted and told them what a big mistake they had made, was the best. 😉

Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: flopsy

Another superb update 😊 😛

Just luv the little dialogues you give betwwen Maan nd Geet 😛 😛

Throughly enjoyable, just by reading cud imagne Maan and Geet snuggled up together, and Geet's cute pout, its too good 😛

Luved hw Maan took Geet shopping, the store manager is a really nyce maan, and the last part when Geet went to that store where she was insulted and told them what a big mistake they had made, was the best. 😉

Waiting for next part.

THANKS SO MUCH DEAR FOR THIS TERRIFIC UPDATE

Edited by maanland - 10 years ago

beautiful update
loved it

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Originally posted by: maanland

THANKS SO MUCH DEAR FOR THIS TERRIFIC UPDATE

 THE MORNING AFTER WAS REALLY BLISSFUL

VERY BEAUTFULLY WRITTEN DEAR

MAAN'S EACH AND EVERY THOUGHTS AND GEET'S GESTURE EVEN IN HER SLEEP WAS WRITTEN WONDERFULLY DEAR

THESE SELF TALKS OR WORDING THEIR THOUGHTS IS THE AREA WHERE U BEAT EVEN THE MOVIE DEAR

 

LOVED MAAN'S BRAIN AND TEEN AGED HEART'S TALKS

LOVE TRANSCENDS EVERYTHING

BE IT BUSINESS TRIUMPS OR BODY PLEASURES

MAAN IS REALISING THIS BUT NOT ADMITTING THIS

GREAT GOING

 

MAANEET SHOPPING WAS REALLY GREAT

READING REALLY IS MORE ABSORBING THAN WATCHING THE SAME SCENE ON SCREEN

YOU TAKE IN EACH AND EVERY WORD

FEEL IT AND ENJOY IT

AND U VISUALIZE IN UR BRAIN

AND THE BEST PART IS MAAN AND GEET ARE THE MAIN LEAD HERE

SO I VISUALIZE GURMEET AND DRASHTI IN ALL  THE SCENCES

SO IT IS MUCH MORE INTERSTING THAN THE MOVIE

😊😊

 

NO COMPAINTS FOR A SHORTER UPDATE

ATLEAST U UPDATED

THAT IS ENOUGH FOR ME

 

AND LOVE UR LOVE FOR ELABORATION😊

AS IT IS MAKING THIS WONDERFUL STORY EVEN MORE AND MORE INTERSTING

KEEP UP UR LOVE DEAR

 

JUST ONE COMPLAINT

WHY DID U WRITE THE PRECAP

NOW HOW WILL I WAIT FOR GEET'S SURPRISE FOR HER MAAN?????????????????????

 

SO PLS UPDATE SOON DEAR