*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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vandu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Mind blowing update...

Really I loved Jealous Aranv😆😆 and NK's hindi is really good which angry our ASR more😆. Khushi is thinking to tell Arnav about her feels from him. But I wanted Arnav to tell her 😉. Waiting for next update

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

wow hilarious at the same time a sensible update!!

Nk is really pavam :( got nicely from rude ASR but whatever kushi thinks is also right!!

She is going to confess? really if so she has good guts to do that!!

What will be his reaction then??

Wanting to read more :)

Will see ya soon!!

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Wow! That was a great update. I always looove a jealous Arnav! What a treat!

Haha! NK! Khudkhushi - that was funny! (Thanks for translations!)

That was an awesome scene at the hospital. Kushi spreading laughter and happiness wherever she goes!

Now, obviously, we know something that Kushi does not! But then, why is she letting him kiss her and touch her if it makes no diff to him? Perhaps she should back off so he can realize or confess his feelings for her!

What about Mami and Shyam?? Where is Shyam? And how did Mami know that Shyam had mentioned Khushi? Is ASR going to do anything about it?

Thanks again for the treat. I looove a jealous Arnav!!

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suji5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

nice update..
bechara nk 😆

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jdd1959

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

LOVEDDD ITTT...Once again hilarious...i loved NK'S Hindi ; HAHA...HA...Couldn't stop my laughter at NK'S diolougeS..KHUDKUSI & CHEAP... WOWWW...It's a treat 2 read ur updates. i liked Arnav's jelousy N possesiveness also. IN short i loved everything about this update.

Thanks 4 d PM.

LOTS OF LUV & HUGS 4 MAKE US HAPPY BY UR WRITING. KEEP IT UP.

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Awsummm. Fabolous. Aww arnav ws sooo jealous. Khushi made d employess feel light hearted.