ArHi OS - If I Didn't Have You

Gah! That made me cry!!!

This is beautiful Anju! The way they met, I could totally picture a smitten Arnav and the ever so caring khushi! And then they got married and were happy and the. The accident... 😭

I could feel Arnav's pain quite literally, the way you described him! His anger, throwing things and doing physical damage to take out the anger he has against Khushi's condition. You could feel his guilt, his yearning for her, the hope that she will be okay! I almost thought the ending would be sad, but thank goodness you didn't do that *phew*

At the end, I had happy tears! What a lovely story, teaching us to always be grateful for what we have. We never know what will happen, and accidents such as these are inevitable and painful when it results in loss :( Thank goodness khushi is okay, and they have eachother <3

LOVED IT

simply awesome.loved itc

It's awesome girl.  Edited by riafna - 10 years ago

Ah that was painfully beautifully :') The emotions were so well written and your choice of words is beautiful <3  Edited by WordsUnsaidPM - 10 years ago

Wow! Just wow! It was beautiful..!! :)

amazing os
you've written it so beautifully
just loved it

Lovely <3
Awesome :D

really beautiful...loved it

beautiful os...