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Posted: 10 years ago
This is really good! Please continue it !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

am waiting for next update😊

will update asap..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zeylanica

This is really good! Please continue it !!

Thanks for comments..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys Sorry for updating late..😊 Due to health issues i wont be able to update in short span of time..

                                          Part-2

Ehsaas.. jo sab kuch mehsus karata hai.. 
Zindagi ka pehla ehsaas sabse khubsurat hota hai.. har ladki ki tarah mujhe bhi zindagi ka har ehsaas jeene ki tammna hai... 

Meri zindagi ka khubsurat ehsaas mujhe Ram ne mehsus karaya.. 
Yeh ehsaas behad khubsurat hai... yeh vo ehsaas hai.. jo mein baar baar mehsus karna chahti hu.. 
Mujhe nahi pata tha ki pyaar ke ehsaas itna pyaara hota hai..  

Unki aawaz see jab apna naam sunti hu to uska ehsaas... bahut hi khubsurat.. hai.. 
jab pehli baar unhone chua tha.. uska ehsaas shabdo mein bayan nahi kar sakti.. aur shayad aaj bhi jab vo chute hai.. to har baar ek naya ehsaas.. par vahi jaana pehchana apnepan ka ehsaas ... par har baar behad pyaar bhara hua.. 

Vo saath hai.. to jeevan mein sukun ka ehsaas hai.. 
Jab pehil baar mili thi.. tab nahi pata tha..ki kabhi inse zindagi ke sabse khubsurat ehsaas milenge...
Jab yeh mujhe pyaar bhari nazron se dekhte hai,.. uska ehsaas.. 
Inki muskaan mujhe ehsaas karati hai.. yeh khush hai.. Aur inki khushi mujhe meri khushi ka ehsaas karati hai..
 
Priya gehri soch mein dubi hui thi.. chehre par halki muskurahat.. aankho mein sharam.. 
Ram ko Yeh sab bata rahe the ki vo ussi ke baare mein soch rahi hai.. Tabhi Ram aata hai.. dheere se Priya ko peeche se apne aagosh mein leta hai.. 

Priya - Ram .. aap kab aaye.. 

Ram-Jab aap mere baare mein soch rahi thi.. aur dheere se usse pyaar karta hua.. 

Priya ki aankhon ki sharam uske chehre par aa gayi.. jisne bata diya.. ki kitna pyaar karti hai.. vo Ram se..

Vo abhi bhi Ram se mil rahe ehsaas ko sahej rahi thi.. uska dil.. uski dhadkan.. uski saanse.. sab Ram ke ehsaas mein kho chuki thi.. 

Ram ka saath hona hi.. uske liye duniya ka sabse khubsurat ehsaas hai... 

Priya-Hum dono ek baar phir ek dure ke aagosh mein kho gaye.. yeh behad khubsurat ehsaas hai.. behad sukun bhara..  yeh vo ehsaas hai.. jo mujhe mehsus karata hai.. ki Ram mujhe kuch nahi hone denge.. Hum hamesha saath rahenge.. πŸ˜Š

Unki dil ki dhadkan mujhe ehsaas karati hai.. ki vo khush hai.. mere saath.. aur mujhe yeh sukun milta hai.. ki mera ehsaas unhe khushi de raha hai.. 

Hum kuch der aise hi rahe.. Ek baar phir kuch jaane pehchane ehsaas mein kho gaye.. ek dusre mein kho gaye...

Kabhi kabhi kisi aur ki muskaan ek alag sukun mehsus karatai hai.. Ye ehaas sirf pyaar mehsus kara sakta hai..

Ek dure ke aagosh mein the.. Kuch der baad..
Ram- Priya ..tumhe yaad haiki maine tumhe pehli baar kab dekha tha.. πŸ˜‰

Priya- Clg mein..lekin uss din mein bahut dari hui thi... Shruti bhi nahi aayi thi.. sirf ragging ke darr se..
Mujhe itna yaad hai.. ki aapne aur aapke kuch dosti ne meri ragging li thi..  vo ehsaas mein vapas nahi jeena chahti..bahut dari hui thi.. 

Ram- kissed Priya on her cheeks.. Sorry.. par janti ho Priya.. maine tumhe usse pehle dekha tah...jab tumhe dekha tha.. white suit mein.. bikhre baal.. ek haath mein form.. aur dusre haath se apne aap ko dhup se bachate hue.. Sab line mein khade shor kar rahe te.. par tum sirf apne aap mein khoyi hui thi..

                   tumhare chehre par sirf yeh darr tha ki kahi form submit hone se pehle time over na ho jaye...

Aur sach kahu Priya uss din mein chahta tha ki aaj tumhare form admit na ho..taaki kal fir tumhe dekh saku..

Par uss din tumhara form submit ho gaya...

Aur uske baad har roz clg jaldi aata tha.. sirf tumhe dekhne ke liye...
par tum pure ek hafte baad aayi thi.. πŸ˜‰

Priya- to aapne mjhe sabse pehle admission form submit karate dekha tha.😲. par Vikram aur Neha ne to kaha tha ki sabse pehle ragging lete waqt dekha tha...

Ram- Yeh baat unhe bhi nahi pata... Uss din maine tumhe pure ek hafte baad dekha tha..  aur chehre par ghabrahat se bhari muskan ke sath.. to ek baar to soch liya ki tumhari ragging nahi lunga..

Par tumhara naam jaane ke liye aur tumhari aawaz sunne ke liye li.. πŸ˜‰

Aur dusra dosto ko kya bolta ki.. ragging kyu nahi li.. par yaar tumse sabse aasan kaam karvaya tha... 

Priya-Apko batau.. jab aapne roka tha..to maine aapki taraf dekha bhi nahi tha.. Mein darr ke mare zameen ki taraf dekh rahi thi.
Ram- Yaad hai Priya.. mujhe to sab yaad hai.. tum kaanp rahi thi.. Pata nahi kyu.. aankho ko tumhe dekhna accha lag raha tha.. par dil mein dard ka ehsaas tha.. ki meri vajah se tum darr rahi ho... 

Priya- Shayad isliye ki aap mujhe pehli nazar mein pyaar kar baithe the..  Aapne jab kaha ki apne naam batao aur.. ek gaana suna kar chale jao.. tab pehli baar apko dekha tha.. uss waqt bahut dar tha..par tab nahi socha tha... ki zindagi bhar aapke saath bandhne wali hu..

Ram- Par maine soch liya tha.. ussi din .. jis din tumhe pehli baar dekha tha..par tumne galat kiya tha Priya

 Priya- . Ram maine kya kiya tha.😳.  uss waqt mujhe jaldi se aap sab se dur jaana tha.. Par aaj aap se ek pal ke liye bhi dur nahi hona chahti..😊

Ram-Priya to tum bol sakti thi na.. par tumhari aankho mein aansu aa gaye aur mein darr gaya..

Priya-  ha itna darr gaye the ki ragging meri leni thi aur khud de di thi.πŸ˜†. vaise aapne gaana accha gaya tha..πŸ˜‰

Ram- Vo isliye ki tumhari aankho mein aansoo aa gaye the.. aur dekh nahi saka... isliye gaa diya.. aur baad mein sab dost haase bhi the.. r aaj bhi haste hai..πŸ˜’πŸ˜†

Priya-  Ha to pure clg ke samne bola tha.. to koi bhi darega.. Ram aaj phir vo gaana sunna hai.. uss din darte darte suna tha par aaj bina dare.. iss naye ehsaas ko mehsus karna hai☺️

Ram- Aise nahi gaaunga.. pehle kuch energy chahiye..πŸ˜‰

Priya- Kya.. πŸ˜•

Ram- Kuch nahi ek kiss.. fir pakka... πŸ˜‰

Priya- Plz ... mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte aap..

ram-Kar sakta hu bikul kar sakta hu.. par tum kyu nahi kar sakti... 

Priya- Ok.. aap apni aankhein band keejiye.. 

Kuch ehsaas mehsus karna bahut khaas hote hai.. kaise batau apko... Ram..😳

Kuch der baad... Priya- Ram ab to sunaiye plz
..Ram ne dheere se Priya ko bilkul apne paas baitha liya.. .

Ek ajnabi hasina se yu mulakat ho gayi
 Phir kya huwa yeh naa puchho, kuchh aisi bat ho gayi
 Ek ajnabi hasina se...
 
 Woh achanak aa gayi, yun najar ke samane
 Jaise nikal aya ghata se chand
 Chehare pe julfen, bikhari huyi thi, din me rat ho gayi
 Ek ajnabi hasina se...
 
 Janeman janejigar hota mai shayar agar, kahata gajhal teri adao par
 Maine yeh kaha toh mujhse kafa woh janehayat ho gayi
 Ek ajnabi hasina se...

Ram .. Priya yeh lines tab nahi gayi thi.. par aaj yeh gaunga...😳
 
 Khubsurat bat yeh char pal kaa sath yeh, sari umar mujhko rahega yad
 Mai akela tha magar, ban gayi woh hamsafar, woh mere sath ho gayi
 Ek ajnabi hasina se...


I know this part nor up to mark.. Will try my best in next one..

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Sagar
Edited by sinalbest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update.
Ram ne Priya ki ragging li😲...aur khud gana shuru kar diyeπŸ˜†
tabb toh Priya aur bhi darr gayi hongiπŸ˜†
 
arre agar form submit nahi hota toh roz kaise dekh pata...woh kahi aur chali jatiπŸ˜›
hayee...kiss ke baad Ram ne gana bhi sunaya😳 aur line bhi add kar diya
continue soon and thanks for PM😊
Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was good 
update soon and 
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Simply Poetic Sagar..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Ragging liya ramji ne priya ka?  wo pehla  ehsaas jab pehli baar mile the..shayad uss ek ehsaas ne kayi ehsaas ko  janm diya, aur zindagi bhar ka saath bhi..
Well done πŸ‘πŸ‘
No PM...?
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Posted: 10 years ago
 hello sagar .welcome back..how r u?
           Lovely update dear..main bhi apni colg k din pouch gayi thi padte padte.nice concept .thank u for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
mm late update but khubsurat 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifull update sagar.. πŸ‘
Nice song too.. ❀️ par yeh wala zyada acha nhi hota kya..'chehra hai ya chand khila'.. πŸ˜‰ btw u'll not use this song i should have known na..how stupid of me.. πŸ˜‰ 🀣 Oops!! Sorry.. πŸ˜†
Ok..now on serious note tune yeh kab likha or kyun likha??.. 😑
My first reaction was 😑 seeing u have updated ur work..aage tu samjhdaar hai.. πŸ€”
Thanx for pm..Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago