OS **Ehsaas**updated preview pg-12 | Bade Acche Laggte Hai

sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Guys.. 😊

Back with another work on Raya..😉

I am very thankful to u all for liking my work. It feels so good to read ur comments..

** OS Ehsaas**

Ehsaas..

Ye vo hai.. jo khusi.. gam.. apnapan..

akelapan .. adhurapan.. sab kuch mehsus kara jata hai..

Ehsaas har nayi cheez ka pehli baar hota hai...

Jeevan mein pyaar ka ehsaas.. pehli baar hota hai..

Par Usse khone ka ehsaas.. baar baar hota hai...

Kisi se pyaar paane ke ehsaas.. behad khubsurat ehsaas hota hai...

Yeh ehsaas har pal .. har lamha mehsus karna chahta hai dil... Bahut khudgarz hai yeh dil..

Pata hi nahi chala ki kab iss ehsaas ne bahut kuch de diya...

Ram ne har pal ehsaas karaya hai.. ki pyaar kya hota hai...

Zindagi deti nahi utna jitna le jati hai...

Zindagi ne jaha Ram diya .. vahi zindagi ne... hamri sabse badi khushi chhen li..

Abhi maine iss ehsaas ko jiya bhi nahi tha.. par vo ehsaas kho diya...

Do hit like button if u like it..

And do leave ur comments..

Sagar..

I need a suggestion from u guys..

What u all want..

Os in same way like I write in Os Pehli Barish i.e in Hindi..

or

partial,, i.e. in Hindi & English both..😊

Part-1 pg-1

Part-2 pg-8

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Malati

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Posted: 10 years ago

Accha 'Ehsaas' ko har kisi ke dil tak pahuchaane ke liye jo koi bhi bhaasha use karoge chalega.

But would suggest you to write in Hindi..so that i have a chance to learn n improve😛😛 thodi si selfish ho rahi hoo😉

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sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Accha 'Ehsaas' ko har kisi ke dil tak pahuchaane ke liye jo koi bhi bhaasha use karoge chalega.
But would suggest you to write in Hindi..so that i have a chance to learn n improve😛😛 thodi si selfish ho rahi hoo😉

I too want it to continue in hindi..

Bcz I feel.. it shows much grace in hindi..😊

Thanks for the comment..😛

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Achi shuruwat hai..Ehsaas kehne ko chota sa shabd hai par humari zindagi mein sab kuch inhi ehsaaso se juda hai.. hum zindagi ki har chiz choti se lekar badi tak ek ehsaas se hi mehsoos karte hai... ❤️
Hindi mein hi zari rakhna..usme likhe hue ko padhne ka maaza hi kuch or hai..

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sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Achi shuruwat hai..Ehsaas kehne ko chota sa shabd hai par humari zindagi mein sab kuch inhi ehsaaso se juda hai.. hum zindagi ki har chiz choti se lekar badi tak ek ehsaas se hi mehsoos karte hai... ❤️
Hindi mein hi zari rakhna..usme likhe hue ko padhne ka maaza hi kuch or hai..

Ek fayda hua hai mere hindi mein likhne se..

Kafi log hindi mein rpl karte hai..😉 yeh accha hai..😛

Thanks for the comment..😛

Bilkul Hindi mein jari rakhenge.. aapka hukum sar aankho par..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Ek fayda hua hai mere hindi mein likhne se..
Kafi log hindi mein rpl karte hai..😉yeh accha hai..😛

Thanks for the comment..😛
Bilkul Hindi mein jari rakhenge.. aapka hukum sar aankho par..

Mein try karti hun ki teri OS mein hindi mein hi comment karo par humesha nhi kar pati shabd nhi milte.. 😉 😆
Mera hukum sar ankhon par 😲 chal iss baat ko yaad rakhiyo.. 😉

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ehsaas ho ehsaas karne ke liye dil ka hona zaroori hain aur jis ke paas yeh ho unn tak yeh ehsaas pohaunch hi jata hain, ise nahi toh kisi bhasa ki zaroorat hoti hain aur nahi kisi zabaan ki, bas dil se jud hi jate hain yeh ehsaas, @Sagar, aap kisi bhi bhasha me likho aakhir pohaunch toh dil tak hi jayegi, par phir bhi agar aap raaste chunneko bolenge toh main Hindi ko hi chunungi, har bhasha ki ek alag hi mithaas hain aur jab aap apne matri bhasha me likhte ho toh woh cheez aur bhi khoobsurat ho jati hain, uss 'ehsaas' ki baat hi kuch nirali hoti hain...shuruaat bohot achhi thi, mujhe behaad pasand aya, mujhe aage padna hain.

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
mm good portraite

Thank u 😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Mein try karti hun ki teri OS mein hindi mein hi comment karo par humesha nhi kar pati shabd nhi milte.. 😉 😆
Mera hukum sar ankhon par 😲 chal iss baat ko yaad rakhiyo.. 😉

Ek hindi dictionary kharid le 😉 😆
Hamari yadash kamzor h kuch mamlo mein.. 😉
kal yaad nahi rahega ki yeh line maine likhi hai 😉

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sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Ehsaas ho ehsaas karne ke liye dil ka hona zaroori hain aur jis ke paas yeh ho unn tak yeh ehsaas pohaunch hi jata hain, ise nahi toh kisi bhasa ki zaroorat hoti hain aur nahi kisi zabaan ki, bas dil se jud hi jate hain yeh ehsaas, @Sagar, aap kisi bhi bhasha me likho aakhir pohaunch toh dil tak hi jayegi, par phir bhi agar aap raaste chunneko bolenge toh main Hindi ko hi chunungi, har bhasha ki ek alag hi mithaas hain aur jab aap apne matri bhasha me likhte ho toh woh cheez aur bhi khoobsurat ho jati hain, uss 'ehsaas' ki baat hi kuch nirali hoti hain...shuruaat bohot achhi thi, mujhe behaad pasand aya, mujhe aage padna hain.

apko nazariya hamesha alag par kafi accha hota hai.. 😊

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