OS **Ehsaas**updated preview pg-12

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Posted: 2013-07-25T03:18:00Z
Hi Guys.. Smile 
Back with another work on Raya..Wink
I am very thankful to u all for liking my work. It feels so good to read ur comments.. 

                 ** OS Ehsaas** 

Ehsaas..

         Ye vo hai.. jo khusi.. gam.. apnapan..
                                 akelapan .. adhurapan.. sab kuch mehsus kara jata hai..
Ehsaas har nayi cheez ka pehli baar hota hai...

 Jeevan mein pyaar ka ehsaas.. pehli baar hota hai..
Par Usse khone ka ehsaas.. baar baar hota hai... 

Kisi se pyaar paane ke ehsaas.. behad khubsurat ehsaas hota hai... 
Yeh ehsaas har pal .. har lamha mehsus karna chahta hai dil... Bahut khudgarz hai yeh dil.. 
                                 Pata hi nahi chala ki kab iss ehsaas ne bahut kuch de diya... 
Ram ne har pal ehsaas karaya hai.. ki pyaar kya hota hai... 
             Zindagi deti nahi utna jitna le jati hai... 
Zindagi ne jaha Ram diya .. vahi zindagi ne... hamri sabse badi khushi chhen li.. 

Abhi maine iss ehsaas ko jiya bhi nahi tha.. par vo ehsaas kho diya... 


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Sagar..

I need a suggestion from u guys.. 

What u all want.. 
Os in same way like I write in Os Pehli Barish i.e in Hindi..
or
partial,, i.e. in Hindi & English both..Smile

Part-1 pg-1
Part-2 pg-8
Edited by sinalbest - 2013-11-19T07:39:33Z
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Posted: 2013-07-25T03:41:18Z
Accha 'Ehsaas' ko har kisi ke dil tak pahuchaane ke liye jo koi bhi bhaasha use karoge chalega.
But would suggest you to write in Hindi..so that i have a chance to learn n improveTongueTongue thodi si selfish ho rahi hooWink
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Posted: 2013-07-25T03:47:42Z
Originally posted by bpatil3


Accha 'Ehsaas' ko har kisi ke dil tak pahuchaane ke liye jo koi bhi bhaasha use karoge chalega.
But would suggest you to write in Hindi..so that i have a chance to learn n improveTongueTongue thodi si selfish ho rahi hooWink

 I too want it to continue in hindi.. 
Bcz I feel.. it shows much grace in hindi..Smile
Thanks for the comment..Tongue
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Posted: 2013-07-25T04:10:52Z
Achi shuruwat hai..Ehsaas kehne ko chota sa shabd hai par humari zindagi mein sab kuch inhi ehsaaso se juda hai.. hum zindagi ki har chiz choti se lekar badi tak ek ehsaas se hi mehsoos karte hai... Heart
Hindi mein hi zari rakhna..usme likhe hue ko padhne ka maaza hi kuch or hai..
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Posted: 2013-07-25T04:15:28Z
Originally posted by vironikajain


Achi shuruwat hai..Ehsaas kehne ko chota sa shabd hai par humari zindagi mein sab kuch inhi ehsaaso se juda hai.. hum zindagi ki har chiz choti se lekar badi tak ek ehsaas se hi mehsoos karte hai... Heart
Hindi mein hi zari rakhna..usme likhe hue ko padhne ka maaza hi kuch or hai..
Ek fayda hua hai mere hindi mein likhne se.. 
Kafi log hindi mein rpl karte  hai..Wink yeh accha hai..Tongue

Thanks for the comment..Tongue 
Bilkul Hindi mein jari rakhenge.. aapka hukum sar aankho par..
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Posted: 2013-07-25T04:40:17Z
mm good portraite 
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Posted: 2013-07-25T04:42:56Z
Originally posted by sinalbest


Originally posted by vironikajain


Achi shuruwat hai..Ehsaas kehne ko chota sa shabd hai par humari zindagi mein sab kuch inhi ehsaaso se juda hai.. hum zindagi ki har chiz choti se lekar badi tak ek ehsaas se hi mehsoos karte hai... Heart
Hindi mein hi zari rakhna..usme likhe hue ko padhne ka maaza hi kuch or hai..

Ek fayda hua hai mere hindi mein likhne se..
Kafi log hindi mein rpl karte hai..Winkyeh accha hai..Tongue

Thanks for the comment..Tongue
Bilkul Hindi mein jari rakhenge.. aapka hukum sar aankho par..

Mein try karti hun ki teri OS mein hindi mein hi comment karo par humesha nhi kar pati shabd nhi milte.. Wink LOL
Mera hukum sar ankhon par Shocked chal iss baat ko yaad rakhiyo.. Wink
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Posted: 2013-07-25T05:13:28Z
Ehsaas ho ehsaas karne ke liye dil ka hona zaroori hain aur jis ke paas yeh ho unn tak yeh ehsaas pohaunch hi jata hain, ise nahi toh kisi bhasa ki zaroorat hoti hain aur nahi kisi zabaan ki, bas dil se jud hi jate hain yeh ehsaas, @Sagar, aap kisi bhi bhasha me likho aakhir pohaunch toh dil tak hi jayegi, par phir bhi agar aap raaste chunneko bolenge toh main Hindi ko hi chunungi, har bhasha ki ek alag hi mithaas hain aur jab aap apne matri bhasha me likhte ho toh woh cheez aur bhi khoobsurat ho jati hain, uss 'ehsaas' ki baat hi kuch nirali hoti hain...shuruaat bohot achhi thi, mujhe behaad pasand aya, mujhe aage padna hain. 
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