OS Good Luck Miss Call Last Part Page 7 - Page 4

Solid boss! Carry on pleaseee

Oh My GOSH!!!!😳
Seriously love the story 😊
I really hope this happens!
Great update!!!

nice update

Originally posted by: JalebiHearts

Hello Guys!! Im a fan of this show obviously but only came onto IF recently because school has officially finished for the summer! Yay! Now I know how much we all are craving raghu and antara scenes because of the weekend so I thought I could start this one shot idea which continues from the precap. Also im no professional writer so please be nice "/ Obviously im not as what the cvs have planned for this show so im sure it will not go as i have written it but i hope you enjoy it anyway. Thanks!! :)  

Ps Id rather not torture you with my written hindi so please dont mind its in english!! xx 

'Oh God please help me,' Antara looked around for another rikshaw but saw none that were vacant. 'I'm going to be late'  suddenly a gust of wind blew her dupatta onto her face and her vision became pink for a moment before she pulled the dupatta back down and came face to face with Raghu. Of course he would be here, whenever she found herself in a problem Raghu was always there with a solution. Unsurprisingly however, he was often the problem too. As Raghu pulled up in front of Antara he couldn't help but stare at her face, she looked so innocent. So trusting of the world. It was impossible not to want to protect her. He didn't know what he was doing or why he was doing it but with her it somehow just felt right. He shook himself off and looked straight ahead. 'Come. I'll drop you.'  

'No Thanks,' he had a feeling she would refuse.

'Look I'm not up for doing you any favors. There's a lot of traffic at this time of day, so I'm your best chance.'  He looked into her eyes again hoping this would convince her.

Antara knew he was right. She looked around then bit her lip, he wasn't half as bad as being late.

 

'Are you getting in or should I go without you?' Then again maybe he was. She walked towards the other side of the jeep and took a step inside but missed and nearly fell backwards when she felt his hand on her wrist, he pulled her in and let go of her when she sat down. Funny, she liked the feel of his hand on her wrist. It must be the stress. They both looked ahead and decided it was best to ignore whatever they were feeling. 

'So this job interview that you have... Do you really think it will pay enough to pay for your mother's treatment?' 

'You don't really have to make small talk you know.' Deep down she wanted someone to talk to just so she could avoid thinking about how nervous and desperate she was for this job, but the question he asked brought out fears that she had been harboring since she found out the cost of the treatment. She decided to answer his question anyway if only to reassure herself. 'I don't know if it will be enough but I have to try.' Raghu looked over at her as she spoke and felt the need to reassure her, it was obvious she was nervous and the fact that he could do nothing about it made him angry.

'You're always acting so smart and independent; the modern thinking girl. This should be easy for you,' he knew it was a long shot but he hoped she would take it as a compliment.

'And you're always acting like an asshole does that come easy for you?' She couldn't help but retort.

'Of course it does, I'm the bad guy remember? But trust me when I say this, you ain't seen nothin' yet.'

Antara sighed as she remembered her aunts words about Raghu being a bad guy with a good heart. 'Am I supposed to be grateful that you only kicked me out of my house and humiliated my uncle? Is there something else that is within your limits?' She really didn't want to have this conversation with him right now it would only get her more riled up and she wouldn't be able to focus. 

'You know what? Forget it'

Raghu didn't want to let it go though. 'What are you talking about? I didn't humiliate your uncle and if you had only apologised like I asked you to instead of insulting me...' He wanted to make this journey longer and keep talking to her but he realised that it would only make her late and he really wanted her to get this job.

She was going to say something when they arrived at their destination. Antara was quick to get out from the jeep which made him think that she didn't want to be seen with him, he tried to convince himself that this was a good thing but found it difficult. 

Antara walked towards the building and held tightly on her folder. Breath in. Breath out.

'Good Luck Miss Call'

Where did that come from? Antara looked back at Raghu but he was avoiding her gaze. 

'Errm Thanks' Somehow it gave her a lot more confidence than she cared to admit. 

Here goes nothing...

Kudos! I loved it. Superlike! \m/

Originally posted by: FairyTale-Naima

👏 LoveLoveLove it! Thanks for sharing! Are you gonna carry on? 

Originally posted by: 22pundirabhi

Awesome yr ⭐️

Originally posted by: RagXata

Awesome👏can't wait for the next update 

Originally posted by: missChanel

Please continue! Gives us something to read during the weekend and your write really well :)

Originally posted by: Rehana86

haww for me?? ☺️🤗... will read and comment after I break my fast😊... 

*Rejarbed*

*BACK*🤗

you know the BEST thing about your writing is the dialogues you give to the characters... they are straight forward withOUT bullshit 👏... ignoring the technical errors, I loved this one too😊... and glad to know that my stupid ranting about my ways of reading was helpful to encourage you ... and totally agree with you abt the unnecessary romance... they are so outdated no? 🤢... thanks for sharing and will be waiting for the next part 😛... 

luv

rehana

Originally posted by: FairyTale-Naima

Solid boss! Carry on pleaseee

Originally posted by: pampz

just awesome ...carry on plzzz