asya SS happy ending last chapter pg 60 (22/3)

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey guyz, m going to start my new SS on asya 
it will start from asad announcement of his and tanveer wedding 

guyz i had wrote as per as the spoiler but first i want ur suggestions that shall i post it

regards:-arooba
 
part 1 = below😊
part 2 = page 6
part 3 = page 11
part 4 = page 18
part 5 = page 23
part 6 = page 28
note for pm's = page 28
part 7 = page 35
part 8 = page 41
part 9 = page 48
last part = page 60
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting 
plz post it soon 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1:- 

asad came to the hall holding tanveer's hand where dilshaad,najma and zoya were offering prayer
asad:-ami mujhe apse kuch bat karne hai.
dilshaad:-kaho
asad:-ami mai agla jumma tanveer se nikah karne wala hun.
tanveer smirks but the three ladies get a shock and they stand up ...zoya control her tears and stood silent while dilshaad speak up
dilshaad:-kya yeh tumhara akhri faisla hai asad?
asad:-ji ami.
najma hardly speak up:-theek hai bhaijan to phir ye bhe sunlain k mai apka is nikah mai shamil nahe honge.
asad:-lakin naj...dilshaad intrupted
dilshaad:-sirf najma he nahe asad is nikah ki manzori mai bhe nahe da sakte to tumhe jo karna hai karo lakin is nikah mai shareek nahe honga.
tears drop from asad's eyes but still he was silent on the zoya wiped her tears and moved towards asad
zoya to asad:-congratulations Mr.Khan. I m happy k finally apne koi decision la liye and that's means mai bhe ap logon ko ek gud news de sakte hun.
the four get confused on zoya's word
tanveer(to herself):-iski good news kahen mere liye koi new problem na ban jaye.
najma and dilshaad together:-kaise good news zoya?
zoya:-ya phoppi wo kal jab maine api ko chand mubarak kehne k liye call ki the to api nai mujhe bataya k unhe nai mere liye ek larka pasand kiya hai, api na mjhe uska naam nahe bataya kaha k surprise hai or ye bhe bataya k wo aj shyam india pohachna wala hai or good news ye hai k maine han karde.(mitwa moment)
dilshaad with a shocking expression:-ye kya pagal pan hai zoya, tumne larka k bara mai kuch jana bina han kaise karde.
zoya wipping her tears:-phoppi pichla 1 mahena mai maine api ko bohat dard diya hai ab or nahe or waise bhe api ne kaha hai k mai usse jante hun.
najma:-zoya kya ap sach mai taeyar hain zoya?
zoya:-han najma...kyun k ab mjhe apne choice par aitbar nahe...
zoya gave them a fake smile and left.
dilshaad,tanveer and najma also left while asad was still there, tears were droping from his eyes.but he was helpless.

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in evening
ya ALLAH maine bahar ye jhoot to keh diya hai lakin ab mai kiya karun, api ko bhe samjha diya hai k agar phoppi unse kuch kaha to unhe kiya jawab dena hai, na jana tanveer ka sach samne lana k liye mujhe kiya kiya karna hoga par abhe sabse bade tension ye hai k mai woh larka kahan se dhonda, ya ALLAH please kise ko mere madad ke liye bhej dain.
zoya thought to herself, she was sad and tensed, suddenly door bell rang, zoya wondered who could be on the door...in the hall asad who was sitting on the couch stand up and opened the door...when he opened the door, he saw a young man standing outside...asad made a confusing face because he don't know him.but he remembered that zoya told them that someone will come in evening to meet her
asad:-ji ap kon?
boy:-ara na salam na dua sedha sawal?
asad:-assalam-o-alikum.
boy:-walikum-assalam...ji ye to hum bad mai bataenga k hum kon...pehle ap usse buladain.
asad:-kise usse?
boy:-ya ALLAH mai to naam batana hi bhol gaya, mera matlab tha k zoya ko bulu dain.
that boy starts shouting zoya's name, zoya too hears that someone is calling...she too came out from her room, she too get a shocked when she see him infront of her. but the boy get excited.
boy:-ahhh...to tum yahan ho...he came closer to her and hugged her.
boy:-oh zoya i missed you so much.
they break the hug, zoya asked him.
zoya:-farhan i missed you too but tum yahan kaise?
farhan:-mai to eid celebrate karne aya hun apne khala k ghar zoya gets excited and hugged him 
zoya:-sach?...
farhan:-han or yahan ana se pehle maine api se tumhara address le liya. takai apne childhood friend se mil sakun and you know what mai eid khatam hona k bad bhe kuch waqt india he mai spend karunga to...
zoya:-to kya?
farhan:-to miss zoya hum khub masti karainga jaise newyork mai karte tha.
dilshaad,najma and tanveer also reached there and when dilshaad saw that boy with zoya she thought that "ye zaroor zeenat ki pasand hai"
dilshaad moved towards farhan and farhan ask zoya
farhan:-btw zoya yeh kon hain?
zoya:-ye phoppi hain or yeh najma hai, ye asad phoppi ke bete or ye tanveer phoppi ki future bahu when she introduced tanveer her expression were so wiered... 
dilshaad:-oh to tum ho zeenat ki pasand.
farhan shocked:-pasand?
najma:-han pasand zeenat api ne apko zoya k liye passand kiya hain.
farhan looked zoya with shocking expression.
zoya(to herself):-han shayad farhan se he help lane parage mujhe abhe or koi choice bhe to nahe hai.
she winked and nodded 
farhan(to himself):-lagta hai isne hamesha ki tarah koi nae khichdi banaye hai or hamesha ki tarah mujhe iski help karne hoge.
zoya with loud voice:-han phoppi yahe to hai api ki pasand or maza ki bat to yeh hai k farhan mera childhood friend.
she hitted farhan on his leg😆. farhan also laughed and placed his hand on her shoulders...asad felt awkward
farhan:-aaabaa ji...ji mai isiliye to india aya hun...
asad noticed it
asad(to herself):kuch dair pehle to ye keh raha tha k yahan Eid celebrate karna aya hai...kuch to garbar hai par kiya.
farhan:-oh zoya bohat time hua tumse baat nahe hue kya hum kuch dair akele mai baat karain?
zoya smiled 
dilshaad:-han zaroor...zoya farhan ko uske room mai lejao.
they both left...tanveer was silent in this...but she was smiling
tanveer(to herself):-kiya bat hai...huma to laga tha k zoya jhoot bol rahe hai lakin ye to kuch or he hai...phir bhe pata karna hoga k ye sab kitna sach hai or kitna jhoot.

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part 1 finished
i know it was little messy but soon story will be on the correct path
plz hit like and do comment if you like it otherwise juttas and chappals are welcome😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
woow yaar superb writing 👏
loved reading it 😉
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Its awesm do pm me whn u cont. 
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this was so amazing update... loved it... continue soon,,,
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very nice update 

keep going all the best
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super awesome...plz continue soon...
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very very interesting and fantastic update...do continue soooner
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey tis is superb...
very intereting...
ths fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...pleae continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...
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