OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

nice start and different too.

reading next part😊

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

yar ktna accha hai loved it

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

The update is just SUPERB.  Heavenly it is.  -- - Thank u..😊

Waiting for more. - sure 😛  Thanks for the pm.- U r welcome..😊

Originally posted by: sabs0708

nice😉plz continue👏 

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Batao yaar tumne mere update ko iyne mein explain kar diya..😉 Bekar hi maine itni mehnat ki..😆😆- Seekh  rahi hoon main aapse, ya yun kaho i tried to imitate u. 

Jokes apart..

Ur commnet is really nice one..😊- Thank u

Kudos to ur words...👏👏👏 - Itne bade shabd ka prayog na karein guruji mein aap jaiso se seekh rahi hoon likhna. So u r the reason for it. Credit is all yours.

Excellent writing much better than me..😊- Ye to bahut zyada hua yaar..batadu meri hindi bahot kamzor hai, but i simply love hindi 

Guruji aapki kripa bani rahe , hum aise comment karte hi Bade Acche lagte hai😛😛

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

iss baar bhi dairy.-- Yep..😉 I like it.. Kyu style change karu kya..

ram hamesha dairy kyun likte hai-- Diary isliye likhte hai taaki aap sabko padha sake..😉😆

aap lekak bade achhe hai...- - Thank u..😊

hum chahte hai ki aap isko jari rakke-- Jaisi apki marzi..😊

 

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Btw loved ur rpl.. hindi mein...😛