OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37

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Posted: 2013-07-15T06:04:25Z
Hi Guys.. I am back with ananother OS..
Seems like no one wants me to end.. my first OS on this forum.. But this is an totallyt different concept.. Hope u guys like this too..

                          *OS Pehli Barish*

15th july 2013..

Pehli barish... iske apnapan ka ehsaas ... dil ko sakun dene wala ehsaas sabse alag hota hai...
Pehli barish... iski mitti ki khusbu ka ehsaas... usme bheegne ka ehsaas..sabse  alag hota hai..
Pehli barish... ka ehsaas... kuch khaas hota hai... zindagi mein ek nayapan lata hai...
Pehli barish-iski bundo ka ehsaas apni saanso mein... kuch alag hota hai...

Aisa ehsaas jisse zindagi bhar ke liye har koi thamna chahta hai...
Kuch aisa hi ehsaas mehsus hua tha.. jab usse pehli baar dekha tha...
Vo saal ki pehli barish thi.. usse pehli baar dekha tha... barish mein bheegte hue..
Kuch aisa hi mehsus hua tha...
Uss ehsaas ko zindagi bhar ke liye thamna chahta tha.. chahta tha ki hamesha uske sath rahu... 

Uski aankho ki chamak... barish ki bundo ki tarah thi.. jis mein dubna chahta hu...
Uski khusbhu uss gili mitti ki tarah thi.. jise apne mein basana chahta hu...
Uski hassi ki khanak uss tarah jaise tez barish ki aawaz... usse hamesha sunna chahta hu..
           Kuch aisi hi kashish thi usme jo mujhe uski aur khiche ja rahi thi...
 pata nahi kyu nahi rok paya apne aap ko uske kareeb jane se...

Uss ehsaas ko aaj bhi mehsus karta hu...
Uss ehsaas ki khusbu aaj bhi mehsus karta hu..
Uss ehsaas ke apnepan ko aaj bhi mehsus karta hu...



Do hit Like button if u Like it..
<And Do leave ur comments & suggesstion..

Guys totally different..So if u want me to continue this plz let me know..

Sagar..


Part-1 PG-1
Part-2 PG-4
Part-3 PG-11
Part-4 PG-23

Edited by sinalbest - 2013-07-24T02:58:49Z
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Posted: 2013-07-15T06:12:33Z
ek alag start hain, achha laga, kuch rimjhim karti baarishon ki tarah se yeh naya OS, RaYa ki pyaar ko nayi tareeke se pesh karne ki shuruaat me bheeg rahe hain, keep up, and continue ASAP, don;t forget to PM me, looking forward
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Posted: 2013-07-15T08:18:24Z
Nice start..bahot acha likha hai or kafi alag karike se pesh kiya hai..with ur poetry touch..
Barsaat ke masum mein RaYa ke pyar pe agar kuch padhne ko mile uski baat hi kuch or hai..
Cont soon..
Iss bar pm kyun nhi kiya??
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Posted: 2013-07-15T08:51:59Z
Diff one...
update soon
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Posted: 2013-07-15T10:00:29Z
Itna late anyways thanks for pm..
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Posted: 2013-07-15T10:00:39Z
Originally posted by jineejiggs


ek alag start hain, achha laga, kuch rimjhim karti baarishon ki tarah se yeh naya OS, RaYa ki pyaar ko nayi tareeke se pesh karne ki shuruaat me bheeg rahe hain, keep up, and continue ASAP, don;t forget to PM me, looking forward

Thank u for ur wonderful comments..Smile
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Posted: 2013-07-15T10:01:11Z
Originally posted by 123fiza1


Diff one...
update soon
Sure..Tongue
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Posted: 2013-07-15T10:02:15Z
Originally posted by vironikajain


Itna late anyways thanks for pm..
U edited ur comment..ROFL
Was busy with work..Wink
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