OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37 - Page 4

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

sagar
just awesome dear

the way u emoted each and every feeling was
well emoted 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️

I loved the updt a lot - Thank u for wonderful comments..😛
thanks for pm - U r Welcome..😊
updt soon- Sure..😛

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Awesome yaar sagar... 👏 - Thank u😊
Yaha bhi diary.. 😉 or ram is a writer nd autograph nd all..kya baat hai.. 😉 😆 - Bilkul..😉 Kyu hamesha businessman bane.. writer bhi banna chahiye..😛
But seriously the way u have narrated is outstanding..kudos to u.. 👏- Thank u..😊
Hindi is wajah se hi jaan ayi hai isme.. ek alag hi tarika hai tumhare likhne ka..i loved it in this way only.. 🤗- I was scared reg Hindi point.. but seems u all r enjoying it..😉
Cont soon nd thanx for pm.- Sure..😛 & U r welcome..😊.

Originally posted by: shamavi

good one continue soon😊

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

very nice concept 👏👏 u written beautifully, pls continue soon, thx 4 PM

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Very nice...

Kayi Ehsaas dastak diye hai iss dil pe, 

jab tumne mud ke dekha humein

Ye waqt bhi tham gaya,

jab tumne haath badha diye

autograph to bas naam ka tha,

mujhe khabar bhi kaha thi mai kya likh raha hoon,

bas likha bhi to yahi ki mai 

priya ka Ram Kapoor hogaya hoon.

just trying to narrate and complement u in my way what u wrote😉😉

I m liking ur write up yaar especially the way , i mean shabdoan ko jaise jodte ho i m really really liking it.-- Thank u..😊 But u r writing much better than me.,. U too can write up..😉 That too very well..😛