Smitar's: Loving Khushi #1 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 7

Congrats on the new story

Really awesome chapter

I can't wait for more

congo fr new

so its not a sequel to other works.. but its good to know that its part 1 is from serial itself although with slight modification 

so it starts huh
really is he kidding me
still using the same ghissi pitti line to stop her
what if it just made things worse for ya mate
and it has hasnt it
to tell ya the truth it was his fault shyam came into her life
not hers to be frank
after all it was the video he released that caused things to slip from his hands
well best of luck mate in wooing her
she shouldnt give in to him easily
well she never does do she
she makes sure that she makes him suffer first then accept him
well lets see what he will do
12 days and your time starts now

A very very beautiful start dear
Continue soon

So happy you posted!

I can't believe he talked about contract now.. Idiot..

Well spoken Khushi, well spoken!

A brilliant start Smita :) Cant wait to see how you shape this track :)