Smitar's: Loving Khushi #1 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 6

Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Smitaji, you n your brilliant ideas...

very touchy scene, you chose it for your FF,
I am happy for it and want to give you Badhaiyan ji.
the whole conversation between Arshi,
the hurt,the pain,the concern and the love..
both are ziddi,egoistic yet love each other more than they Know..
I would love to read, how you put your thoughts regarding this situation and the turmoil of their mind.

Loving Khushi perfect title...
but I agree with Ishu regarding Anjali's part...

thanks for the pm Reshu..
love you my Queens...😛
take care of yourselves.

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533840

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

simply brilliant.loved itc

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Megha

@naughtymallu

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wow !!

Congo Shongo for the new story Di...🥳

I am sorry for being very irregular in commenting...Was busy these days with the classes...But whenever I come online, I open Rashmi Di's PM and read the update...😃

What can I say about the new story?...It is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G..👏

Loved every bit of it...😳

Poor Khushi...😭

Arnav don't be so rude to her...😕..I know Di, you will turn him into a lover boy soon😳..

Now mission wooing Khushi starts from here...

Wanna read next part...Greedy for your stories..😉

Huggs for the new story and thanks for sharing it with us...🤗

Rashmi Di, thanks for posting this story here and tightwala huggswa for the PMs...Waiting for your interpretation...🤗

Love you both...❤️

These pics suits this part...

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ayushma

@aycma98

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Yay!!! New story!!!

Congratulations! I am loving this story. The first chapter is pretty similar to the show, so I am waiting for you to add your sugar and spice to it. :)

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