Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED] - Page 39

Originally posted by: try2149

plz don't discontinued this ff.i really liked it & thanx for pm.

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update 😊

Loved the Swaron lovey dovey moments😳 "punching bag n punishment"

Mr. Khan teasing them😆

Swayam has a solution to every problem of Sharon😛

discontinue krne ki sochna bhi mat😡

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Nyc and cute update..!! 😉
Loved it..!! ❤️
But Itni jaldi update karne k liye shukriya!! -_-
Agli baar dare u repeat this..-_-
And dare u say that u r discontinuing this FF..!! I love it yaar! 😭

Originally posted by: VruShan_SwaRon

Hey I just read this FF in one go and I loveedd it so much.

Seriously loved every aspect of it till now.

First the break up phase, then their friendship. SwaRon breakdown- everything is penned down so beautifully and realistically that I couldn't stop myself for reading all the chapters in one time.

Awesome Awesome work.👏

I just cant wait for the next part now.

Please update soon.😃

Originally posted by: kapoormenka

Just read 1st chapter and it's brilliant will comment more after reading whole FF

Originally posted by: vaishu88

just read d whole FF in 1 go.. in love with this ff..

sharon moved on for her dad but her heart still with swayam..

swayam started to live a life of zombie no smile n his life revolves around dance institute.. loved d care KR has for swayam n their support.. swayam s always sharon lover boy..

sharon coming to mumbai ..

swaron becoming friends coz for swayam sharon's comfort s more important that he hid his feelings n was friend to her.. their growing closer was awesomely penned.. kria getting vibes that sharon still loves swayam but doesn't want to talk abt it to swayam thinking he moved on..

that shivam b*****d always troubling swaron .. thank god sharon didn't hear any of this convo with swayam.. loved d care sharon had wen she saw swayam very angry.. loved d face off... awesome.. swaron danced for old times but ended up opening d feelings they think they buried.. wow..

sid s back to spend time with sharon n swayam was again broken into milllion pieces.. sharon found him venting his frustration through dance nwas not able to see him like that left d place.. loved krisha convo following this.. sharon saw d other room filled with swaron n her pics with a solitaire diamond ring which he know ll not b for sharon n sharon saw it n found that he didn't move on n s always hers...

d confession was awesome.. sharon's jealously out burst seeing aashi with swayam n then d night stay was al awesome.. beautifully penned..

swayam always there to help her in her in her need was awww... swayam made her calm down saying her ex-st.louis cultural team s still here n they can help along with his institutes dance performance was awesome... d kiss in d car was magical.. his punishment n sharon's reply saying he s ready to commit mistake if d punishment s like this...

waiting for next part... how sharon ll tell sid abt swaron .. am waiting for next part pm me wen u update..

flashback scenes of them spending time together n d break up scene was well penned.. it held al motions beautifully..

sorry not commenting from start...

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

awesome update dear... 😃 loved it.. 😊

swayam kafi romantic hai... 😆

sharon blushing at Mr Khan question... 😳

overall cute and romantic update... 😳

waiting for next update now... 😊

Originally posted by: nature2

Awosm updatwe lOVe it 

Originally posted by: freya123

Superb part

Originally posted by: uhs313

I have just started to read this ff..superb story ...love it :D  pls pm me :)