ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

So that's the eating prologue finally put in place !

Arghh.. and all this, just when everything seemed so perfect..

But it was always meant to be like this right ? Arnav and Khushi.. And now, yes.. you did the promos absolutely justice yaara so a big big *bow down* to you for doing this ! But still.. I really really hope you get thodi si fursat from your asli duniya, even if it is purely selfish of me to think so and post the next update !

Arghh ! Dang the past.. Sheesh Mahal.. I dont know, probably, this place will bring them close.. or maybe it has driven them apart a lot already.. But at the moment, my feelings towards this place are a lot less pleasant arghhh !!

I simply loved the lift scene.. *dreamy* It really did bring back the promo right in front of my eyes ! And I never get tired of saying this.. But I just love how the Arnav and Khushi of your story converse through their eyes, those little caresses done innocently yet not so innocently ! I simply love those..

But the past.. and Im curious.. Cause Khushi doesnt seem to be the sort of person who'd do something like this wantedly.. or maybe the circumstances ? Or maybe the whole past thing is a misunderstanding.. maybe a blame she has taken up to protect someone ? I dont know.. And I want to know.. real soon..

But the small convo that played there.. Seems like that was Anjali or was it Arnav's mother ?.. Which also actually has made me realise.. She's been missing all along.. What happened ? USian ? Missing ? Away or worse dead cause of something that happened ?

I really need to know !

Fantastic update ! And I love you for that !

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.caprice.

@.caprice.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Aahh, so now the scene of the prologue?

Oh, I love your titles. The hindi (or should I say Urdu?) amplifies the beauty of the emotion. :-)

Like I said, this Arnav is a frustrating man to read and even more frustrating to try and understand. This past... oh, I can't wait to figure out what happened!

-Sangfroid

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Awee.. Loving this development in thier feeling towards each other..

so Arnav had planned to make her J.. but all his thoughts replaced with hatred when he entered Sheesh Mahal..

We have reached the Prologue now.. Cant wait to see how Khushi reacts to him..

You are busy?😭

Eagerly waiting for the update...

Love you Juhi.. 🤗

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jeya0301

@jeya0301

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Just finished all 6 parts in one go.. Amazing story..:) thnk u..:)

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

An excellent update as always! You sure have kept the past hidden well... That is just rocking!!

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

That was a dhamakar update!!! Started with a bang and ended with an explosion.

The way Khushi went at Arnav in the beginning about her intuition regarding Shyam was awesome. She stood her ground and proved while cleaning the mess up that Arnav needs her as his PA and perhaps more. That was evident in how they started to communicate with each other. Seeing Arnav open up to her was a surprise, I expected him to have his guard up but seems like he wants to move on with her. Just when they were getting close, the past comes back to haunt them especially Arnav. As soon as he got to Sheesh Mahal, he immediately became ASR. I could just imagine his facial expressions walking through the lawn…hayee the angry man we all fell in love with.

The much awaited prologue scene revealed. At least Arnav was thinking of Khushi when he was with Sheetal, not that it makes ok ;) I felt bad for Khushi, she must be heart broken……very much looking forward to the next update for the past to come out and seeing how they move forward.