New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 21

Awesome Chapter so Pia knows Abhay is lonely and he is not accepting it but I think both has started liking each other's company. Waiting for the next update eagerly.

Amazing update 👍🏼
ohh!!poor abhay😔kitna akela hai!!!felt bad for him..😒
love all abhiya scenes..😃
oh god!!Farzia is too much..hating her.

superb update
liked it very much
it is very close to reality...you have shown the reality, power games, tricks, emptiness of glamour world aptly. when you mentioned about farzia i could easily imagine that kind of women working in a corporate house...your writing, the plot of the story...characterization  of abhiya...everything is very believable.
liked the abhiya date n convo...both are lonely ...hope they find some solace in each others company.

hey dear one like from my side... plz dont mind like button not working...

anyway its really great update feel like i am live watching story thanks to ur writing... hey one thing i want to say i dont get y u called farzia khan a villan as u already mention earlier that every character of this story, even leads too have flaws then how could farzia charcter left out its just i feel she is more evil then other and the way everyone think of their own benifit if farzia take advantage of herself 4...

take advantage of herself 4 her growth and survival or may be 4 pleasure and self satisfaction, i dont find any wrong in dis after all its survival war... so dont find any hatered 4 farzia character till this chapter...

as if she is not wat she is then her condition was too like mrs. teresa...



waiting 4 next part...

Awesome..!!! very nice...Waiting for next nTjhanks for the PM!

fantastic update!!!! loved abhiya convo in that japanese restuarant...and also in abhay's flat...!!!!!

Such a light and an entertaining update Tanzi.Totally loved it! It was so heartening to see Pia's blabbering and Abhay convincing just as a normal couple.Thoroughly enjoyed that.And the last scene..Ah!wish for things like that more.Gosh girl you left me hanged by those red colored fonts..Expecting the next update soonish!

Vry vry exciting story,keep writing
waiting fr more

wow... luved ths part tanzi... awesome...

n yes luving office stuff too... plz include it... 😊