seriously rey wahhh๐๐
THAT WAS MY FAV TOO WHILE WRITING...๐๐
after dat jst fell again in love with rey with his new avtar of a teenage boy...the preparation he was making for their grand anniversary was sooo damn cute...awww then he got that cd also which helped him bt i guess he would have managed without it...bechara rey he was so confused bt loved dat in his excitment also he thought of taani's condition n her would be possible pov...again a sign of a good husband๐ณ๐ณ
REY'S ALWAYSSS ROMANTIC...๐ณ
HAPPY THAT YOU LIKED IT!!๐
and then came the sneek peek of the chapter...the kaali andheri raat jab do dillon ko ek hona tha tab aagayi chudail riya apna kala saaya leke(ohh god i m turning soo filmy๐, acchi khasi romantic story ko horror story bana diya)...bt seriously jiss chiz par pehle taani ka right tha woh uss riya ne le liya๐ก๐ก(and mere naam ki to dhajiyaan uda di๐ญ)
Exactly yeh tho pakka filmy hai...๐๐
"Rey placed his chin comfortably on the crook of her neck and took a deep breathe feeling her scent...her fragrance..He quickly withdrew his chin whispering "It's not lavender.." He could alwayss predict her presence with her lavender scent which added extra essence to her beauty..her feminity..."
jst loved this part...a perfect husband...he could feel her jst with smell of her perfume...wow
Thank you dear...๐
and after dat rey's reaction was superbly described by you...jsst loved it to the core... A few minutes before his hands which were touching and adoring the softness of the flower were now bleeding...
This line was my fav too...thank you for mentioning it...I feel good!!๐
loved dis line n also one very good aspect of life you wrote
Every individual urges to get a bright life...Brightness has never been defined in a negative manner...Brightness defines life...Brighness defines colors...brighness defines hope...For the first time, the sudden brightness oth the living room shattered the hopes, life, colors of 2 souls in its own way...
awesome line would be definately useful in my forthcoming english paper๐thnks nithi
OMG!! Make sure your teacher has no idea about DD!๐๐!!
on the whole it was jst a PERFECT chapter๐๐
plz next tym update soon...take care, stay blessed n thnks for the pm
love,
riya
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