Originally posted by: payu_taarey
How vould u do this nithi
Its totally unfairBahut gussa aa raha hai tum parU just spoilt the whole aniversaryRiya kaha se aa gayiI thought that ki aniversary would be romantiv but ye toh kuch aur hi ho gayaItni saari planning saari wasteHow can u spoil itN so sorry if i hurted u but m really dissappointedU have wrote one of the most romantiv os ni was expecting smthing like thatKya yaar happy hone ki jagah mera mood off ho gaya..Its gud rey won the deal n father son bond was gudI hope tum happy ending hi dogiSorry but kuch aacha cmnt nhi ho payaI expected a lottt
Originally posted by: aishapie
Not fare yaaar...frm.wer dat bitch riya came?
N the remainin prt waz gud our rey waz super nyc he luvs taani to the core plz dont wait him n us so long.
get dem together asap.
thanx for pm
plz plz plz nxt prt asap.
Originally posted by: taanifan
o my god u r too gud i just don't know what to say... u knoe i m really inspired by ur writing... u r the first one whose story inspired me to write my own...gosh and this was fab... rey winning the deal... the police arresting kundra n all... why was sharon nt convinced?? hmm ?? and and rey's preperations ...facts about taani ...i loved them but rey shattered seeing riya... oh god ab taani ko kya ho gya... kisne kaha that rey loves riya...stupid girl... all n all awesome update soon...
Originally posted by: shreya_VD_AJS
ty fr da link... read it at 1 gp... n its was amazin...
bt sad only 2 more chap left ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญn plz pm wen u update it ๐
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