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This is creepily good. Seriously. 

Lovved it!!! He really NEEDED it!!!!

very very different...nice :)

oh dear arnav has lost it
but what she said was so true
and damn right she had to say this right

beautiful!!! will u be writing more random stuff?
i hope u do.. i would look forward for more...

You nailed it dear, short but just right on the target. Nothing more or nothing less 😊 Superb, khushi indeed deserved this! Fantastic...

Del, I lurve you! I can't believe you actually listened to me! :D

You vented out my frustration too. Last few lines were brilliant...but the entire shot was. Looking forward to this so darn much! :)

Lucid Fall is an apt title. Continue soon. Waiting for the other stuff you've been working on!

Beautifully written ... 

Khushi didnot need to receive a lot ranting which she did not get...

Very well written and beautifuly described the emotions...continue the os...or are u planning to write a series continuation????
khushi's words hurted him as much he hurted her thanx for pm