AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14 - Page 2

Originally posted by: astonm

You should press edit and change "horrible" to "so amazing that it will make you fangirl"!
You made the scene better by adding the cute thoughts! sho adorableee 😉
Eagerly awaiting the next part! :)

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

This was beautiful. The way you described their emotions, their pain, their happiness was just amazing. Please please update now! I can't wait. I wanna see him finding his name and his shocked yet painful face when he sees her burnt hands! Please please continue soon. This was so well-written.

uh..uh..it was awesome thanks 4 pm

this was beautifully done, it took me back to the episode.

Omg! Omg! Omg! You haves to continue this!!! It was absolutely amazing!! Loved it! :)))

that was beautiful

Loved it!!! Amazing! Continue soon! If you do ...please PM me!! Thank youu :))) LOL but I doubt you'll continue this. But still ..one can only hope! xD

BEAAAUUUTTTIIIFFFLLL ❤️ 

Vry nice as usual! ur writing s so soothing n next part?? today?? :)