FIRST NIGHT OF NIKAH: ASYA FF.. pt7,pg24 - Page 2

Originally posted by: aniiee

its really nice👏

Zoya's reaction was hilaruous😆

Asad's confession
(Y cant this person do nythin seedhe seedhe🤣)

In all had a nice tym reading it🤗

Only one thing if u cud write in small letters its better!😳
(Thats just an opinion😳)

Waiting for mre frm u😃




Luv Ani❤️

sure dear, actually while writing it was on caps, bt next i'll take care of it!!!! thanx 4 cmntng dear, 😊

That was nice, short bt sweet one 😊

Nice story especially the ending. One suggestion I have is can you please write the words correctly? It will make your writing more elegant and easier to read without seeing numbers in the middle of words. Otherwise great story and hope you write more.

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

Nice story especially the ending. One suggestion I have is can you please write the words correctly? It will make your writing more elegant and easier to read without seeing numbers in the middle of words. Otherwise great story and hope you write more.

sure..!!! 😊

Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN

sure dear, actually while writing it was on caps, bt next i'll take care of it!!!! thanx 4 cmntng dear, 😊

😛

omg...it was super awsum..plzz continue..nd plzz pm me the next part

Originally posted by: luvushivin1

omg...it was super awsum..plzz continue..nd plzz pm me the next part

sure dear n thanx..!!!! 😊

it was awesome👏👏
plz continue😊

hey gud one dear but plz dont use capitals next tym😊

NEXT DAY..!!!

Asad was asleep, zoya came out from washroom, having her hands in her hair, as she was shaking her head, few water drops from her hair were fallen on asad's face... He woke up n saw zoya standing in front of mirror!!! She was wearing a beautiful red dress. Asad was mesmerized by her beauty.. He started moving towards zoya.. Zoya felt embarassed n smiles... His steps were taking zoya's heart...


Asad. aap bohat achi lag rae hain..!!
Zoya. maine khas apki waja se red colour ka suit pehna hai
Asad. lekn kal raat ko to aap mjhe chor kar, sone chali gayi thin..

Zoya smiles n tries to leave..

Asad holds her hands, n turns her around, asad kept her hand on her wraist..
Zoya's wet hairs covered her half of the face... Asad caressed her hairs slowly, making zoya restless..
Her breathing started bcoming heavier n heavier..
Both were lost in each other's scents, the closeness was so on, both coming close, so clos that there noses touched each other's...

Dilshad came in n turned her face..!!!
Dilshaad. agar tm log busy ho tou men baad men aati hun..
Zoya hints asad to leave her wraist...
Zoya. nahin phupi hum thek hain, i mean hmen koi problem nahin hai.. i mean hum kch nahin kar rae the!!!
Asad. ms. farukhi ye ap kia bol rae hn, khum tou uljhi uljhi hain he, dusron ko b...
Dilshad interupts..!!!
Dilshad. tm log kabhi nahin sudhroge, aj b lar rae ho..
Dilshad. aur asad wo ms. farukhi nhnmrs. khan ya zoya khan bn chuki hn..
Asad blushes n starts to leave
Dilshad. asad pehle zoya ko uske name se bulao, phir jana...
Asad. ji ammi, zoya ap jaldi bahar aayen ammi k sath, smiles n leave..!!!

On the dining table!!!
Najma. so bhaijaan kal kia hua tha????
Asad coughs while drinking black tea..
Zoya. tamatar ye tm kia bol rae ho???
Najma. kch nhn zoya men to bus bhaijaan ki taang kheench rae the..!!!giggles!!!!
Najma. wese bhaijaan ap ne zoya ko unke name se bulana shuru kia ya nhn???
Zoya. han tamatar bare pyar se mr. khan ne mera name liya!!!giggles!!!!

All have done with breakfast!!!
Zoya starts to clean up the table..
Asad. ms... umm zoya.. maine tou apka name lena start krdia hai, i thnk apko b mera name lena chahye..!!!
Zoya smiles!!!
Zoya. agar men naa lun to ap kia karenge mr. khan????
Asad. men wo karun ga jo soch b nhn sakti..!!!
Zoya. kia karenge ap????
Asad starts cumng closure...


TO BE CONTINUED..!!!! 😉
IF U FEEL ANY MISTAKE, POINT IT OU N APOLOGIES 😊
Pleas like n cmnt!!!! 😊 Edited by KaBhi-FAN - 11 years ago