Abhiya'I accept i do LoVE U!last chap updtd-30july

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Posted: 10 years ago
Whew! And you were nervous about this..it is understandable! Because the emotions that you have written here are too too complex and yet you have explained them so beautifully.
I always love how you describe the pull b/w Abhiya..you always do it perfectly..a flawless execution!
I loved the part where he breaks the glass and then Piya's concern.
They were just so...abhiya! I can't think of adjective for this beautiful piece of writing...so update the next part soon!Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..beautiful..really amazingly written indu..๐Ÿ˜ณ
abhay's anger,feeling,possessiveness was written so wonderfully..๐Ÿ˜›
u r truly an  amazing writer๐Ÿค— 

Edited by ririrararaatry - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
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Indu that was incredible๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
The way you described abhay's pain and his feelings was amazing๐Ÿ˜ณ
that jeh grrr... how dare he๐Ÿ˜ก
but what abhay said to pia was not good ๐Ÿ˜ญ kyon usse itna rudely behave karta hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ
overall the update was fantastic
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res di pls update soon!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
lovely part!!..abhay will never get aparted from his stay away mission...like it's his tag!!'stay away from me...'๐Ÿ˜†
waiting for next
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res.!!๐Ÿ˜Š
Really Excited for the sequel.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Hope you liked My dance.๐Ÿ˜†
Pls Update Soon Indu di.!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress !i cant wait to read it plzz update soon!               dear ,you are just awesome๐Ÿ‘ the way you write the pull towards abhiya๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ !their inner turmoil ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ !!you are one of the top writter of our forum in ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘present๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ !!time!no one can beet you !if somebody ask who is my favourite writter๐Ÿ˜‰ then it will be only you!!ekta mam writter should take lessons from you๐Ÿ˜‰!!i just loved your writting skills๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ !i am glued till the end of the chappy ๐Ÿ˜ณ!btw when i got to know you are writting the sequel!i get really excited ๐Ÿ˜ณ!i used to come every other hour to check that you updated or not๐Ÿ˜ณ !i have read it earlier when the time you updated but i did not comment!sorry๐Ÿ˜ณ!abhay jealous loved it๐Ÿ˜ณ and the dialogs of abhay๐Ÿ˜ณ !!piya feeling uncomfortable ๐Ÿ˜ณand jay kissed her๐Ÿ˜ณ !! Plzz update soon dear ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ‘ hug from me to giving us such a wonderful update ๐Ÿค— btw Edited by vampireking - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Post updated!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Once again u ve left me spellbound wid ur words!!! It was sooo sooo beautiful. I always say d way u describe Abhay's state of mind, it seems i m listening this all from Abhay himself. Abhay's dillemma was described beautifully n jealousy streak was brought out beautifully. Dekhte hain ye jalan kahan le jaati hai Abhay ko๐Ÿ˜‰ Piya as usual trying her best bt our sadu n adamant Abhay raichand is never gonna confess his feelings. Looking forward to d next chappie๐Ÿ˜ƒ. continue asap.Edited by Andromeda001 - 10 years ago