FADING DARKNESS #2..CH27..PG41..28/12/2014 - Page 9

D flashbck of chand hs written b'fully
u hv done justice wid each & every character ... Luved dis emotional updt
keep writing tora.. u r a fab writer :)

tora fabulous update ... flashback scene was awsome
abhay and arjun dialogues were too emotional
felt bad for both
cont soon

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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what to say?!! I felt tears in my eyes while reading it!! 😭 excellent execution of remorse, guilt and hidden truths Tora !!👏 really with your tactful handling of words your projection of every emotion was vibrant wth life! So realistic yet wonderful!!⭐️thank u indu😊

Nobody is directly at fault here. Everyone was more or less like a puppet in the hands of fate! i felt bad every1. Chand, arjun, abhay, haseena, arnab every other character is sum or other way burning in remorce and going through a painful phase of their life and all becz of the misundrstanding that had lead to mistakes dne in their past. yup in a way..it's all because of misunderstandings and bad decisions that they are suffering
i think its late bt still i hope all of them find peace and overcum ths burden they are having inside.let's see😊
Nw am eagerly awaiting haseena- abhay meeting. And ya abhay-pia too!u'll have to wait for the update after next for abhay Piya meeting...and there's a twist before that..hope i wont get tamataars because of it😛
Please update this one soon tora! will update in one or to days i guess😊U have made me too emotional.😔That is the reason i cudnt help bt comment ryt nw!aww..u have no idea how happy this one line made me..😳
cntinue ths quick plz!
And thanks for ths amazing update.🤗and thank u for being such an amazing friend and reader and commentor🤗
p.s. Loved the fb where chand met haseena! That was very beautifully written!!⭐️thank u😊

thank u..yes abhay will meet haseena soon..about abhiya u have to wait for a while😊

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

m glad that abhay talked to arjun and cleared his misunderstandings.

chand has been too egoistic and therefore today he is all alone and even though he loved hasina he let his mind rule over heart.

thanks for pm. looking forward for the next chapter

glad u liked it..😊..in chand's case..actually he acted like a father..though in the process he separated himself from haseena

Originally posted by: siggi

superb waiting for more... update as soon as possible... nd made pia nd abhay meet also...

thank u😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

For the first time, I felt really really bad for Chand. In fact I felt bad for everyone here, Haseena,Chand, Abhay, Arjun...
Gosh!
Fab writing Tora!
Continue soon.


Ps. Loved loved loved the first part in the flashback

thank u shreya..😊yup they are more or less all a victim of circumstances

thank u for liking😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.

fab update
felt really bad 4 Chand.Hope Abhay meets haseena very soon
liked Abhay Chand part

thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: luckdiya

D flashbck of chand hs written b'fully
u hv done justice wid each & every character ... Luved dis emotional updt
keep writing tora.. u r a fab writer :)

thank u diya😊