YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread3*ch.52 page 141 - Page 84

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Nishtha.Relan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww karina di...
So sorry for commenting so late... I always say i will than i fall to cant do it...
Di the update was
Superb
Cute
Aww zaaine
Virika
Birthday boy
Caring
Starbucks
Movie
Shopping
New memeber coming soon
Mindblowing
awesome
Out of the world...
Kya batao di how much i miss my zaaine and ur updates always wanted to read and give a comment but always faile overflow of work i guess and lazyness in me... Wann wake up at night but could not.. Bed bohot pyaara hain na these days i am like jeevika wanna sleep nd sleep to much of buk buk coming to update di kya batao ur always a really good writer and thanks for updating it.. Cant believe that its last ten updates ... but i also cant wiat to see jeevika getting delivering a angel and my zaaine's birthday cant wait eagerly waiting for it... Thanks di once again... Muwahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww,
My lovely pyaari di...
The update was dammm...
Awesome
Cute
Birthday boy
Sad
Excited
Hurt
Cool
Mindblowing
Outstanding
Out of the world
My jeevika struggling in pain
Viren so supportive
Love
Waky waky zaaine
I hate skul but my zaaine is like viren who loves skulll hehe
Lovely
Di... Thanks for the update just read the previous chapter and here comes a mail that u hve a private message from kays94 hurraay so excited one more to read and one more to comment thanks di...
My zaaine's birthday and both the handsome hunk r leaving my jeevika aww poor jeevika but dont worry i know their will be suspence and they will celebrate the bday really nicely ... Cant wait eagerly waiting for the update... Muwahhh... Di i love uuu tons and tons .. The best writer ever and forever...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres! 
Im so sorry for not unresing soon, got stuck up
Coming to the updates they are fabulous like always, nothing new
Viren jeevika coming to new home with zaine,packing,unpacking everything seems so real, that's the way we do, pulling each others legs and all. Such alovely theme. The getting ready of nursery, zaine not even eating it but preparing it. Its all so perfect. The reunion sounds exciting but the thought of leaving zaine not only made him cry but also me, loved it. Finally his birthday. Jeevika remembering 5 years back moments was awesome and not to mention, the moment she realised about delivery and the way viren relaxed her everything was just si perfect. 

So this story has only 9 updates😭
Why?? I thought moreee
Please write madamji...love this story as much as I love wfl!! Muaaahhh baby love youuu writeee real sooon ok? 
Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
God it's my zaaine's birthday yayayayayayaya
He's 5 wow boy 😃
God the update was awesome😊
Loved the way you described Jeevika's fears 👏
Viren is always there for her 😳 
The way he consoled her for beautiful 
Hehe Viren teasing Jeevika on being slow😆
Lovely ending👏
Better continue soon girl
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing!
Awww poor jeevs getting scared of labor pain :(
Idk y i have a feeling dat the lil baby vl be born on zaaine's bday :P
hope it vl
luved it
all the very best👍🏼
N wonderful kryanlicious siggy😳
Edited by Asr-Ki-Sam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loveddd ittt... superr cutee updateee...zaaineee.. the cutesttt kid ever... keepp continuinggg, eager to read moreee
alll the besttt for ur examsss... 


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Posted: 10 years ago
Ah, omg, the sig is gorgeous!! The update, was perfect. It had humour, and flashbacks and the birthday. And the way she was scared was so natural and cute. Loved it! Thanks for the PM! Good luck for exams!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Grt update...
Awww zaaine forget his because he was soo excited for his sis...
Love the virika part...
It was soo sweet jeevs want to spend time with viren and zaaine...
Update soon...
Best of luck for ur exms..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely siggie ❤️

Thats a good one... But sad to know that its only 9 more :(
Poor Jeevika left all alone... Lol...

Looking forward to viren n jeevika celebrating zaaine's bday..

Good luck for your finals :)
Edited by shweta_14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
amazing
fantastic
just he best
cant wait for more
continue soon
thnx for the pm