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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Do patakho ka patakhewali mulaqaat thi, mazaa aa gaya, Priya bhi na kya se kya soch leti hain, waise hum ladkiyon ki dimaag aise hi chalti hain, anyways bhega bhega sa mast update tha, continue ASAP



hehehe...same here mere bhi deemag yhi cheez aati agr ye mere sath hota...lol
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Ok..sorry thoda late ho gya...aur mera sorry ka mantr bhi chalu ho gya...hahaha...kuchh log kabhi nhi sudhrte hain jaise m aur rambabu...pehle glti karo phir mafi mango...khair...moving on updates...ek situation to ho gyi ki mile to sahi pr laga nhi ki mile hain...aur to aur dubara milna bhi nhi chahte...are wah...baap ka raz h kya...??...milna to padega...aur milna bhi aisa aisa hoga ki bs puchho mt...moving on second situation...

SITUATION 2

"mil hi jate ho tum mujhko har mod pr"

scene 4...

Priya subah subah uth k bahar aati h to dekhti h ki uski ovr excited ma pure ghar ko sar pe uthaye hue hai...

Priya...ma kya shor macha rakha h subah subah...

Shipra...are tujhe subah dikh rhi h...9 baj gye hain...

Priya...what???..aur m soti rhi...ye kaise hua??..mera alarm kyun nhi baja???...mujhe late ho jayega...

Priya shipra ko ghurti h...

Shipra...han to...aaj nhi jana h tujhe kahin...

Priya...ufff...ma main kahin ghumne nhi jati hu...coaching classes h meri...bachho ko padhane jati hu...

Shipra..han to kal btaya tha mne to chhutti kyun nhi li...???

Priya...ma...hadh karti ho tum...dekhna dikhana sham ko h to meri classes kyun barbad karu m...this is enough...

Shipra...han to sham ko h to ..baki taiyariya bhi to karni h..prlr bhi to jana h...

Priya...ma mera deemag mt khrab karo...m jaisi hu theek hu...jise pasand karna hoga aise hi kar lega aur m classes ja rhi hu...sham ko aungi..aur beech me phone bilkul mt karna wrna m phone band kar dungi...

Shipra...ye ladki hamesha aise hi karti h...sudhir aap kuchh kehte kyun nhi h...

Sudhir...theek h na shipra...priya bht samjhdar h use pta h kab kya karna h wo mng kar legi tum kyun pareshan hoti ho...

Priya classes khtm karke jaise hi nikalne ko hoti h shipra ka phon aa jata h...bada cntrol kiya tha bichari ne...

Priya...bolo...ghar hi to aa rhi hu

shipra...are ghar mt ana

priya...kyun???..pehle to ghar se ane nhi de rhi thi...ab ghar nhi ane de rhi ho...kya h ye sb???

Shipra...are ladke walo ne last moment pr programm change kar diya ek resturent me bulaya h tu address likh le whi aa jana...

Priya...ab ye kya natak h...tameez se ghar pr nhi dekh sakte the...ye sb tamasha...ufff...bolo address...

Shipra...jaldi ana aur parlour hoti hui ana...

Priya...ma pls...

Priya phone rakh deti h...ab ye address dhundhna bhi ek musibat hi h...but karna to padega hi...kisi trh priya uske aas pas to pahonch jati h pr hotel nhi mil rha hota h...tabhi ek jane se address puchhti h...

Priya...excuse me...(card dete hue)..wo banda mudta h to priya dekh k chaunk jati h...shittt

ram...are ajeeb ladki ho tum..ek cheez k peechhe hi pad gyi ho

priya...areee nhi aap glt samjh rhe hain

ram...main khub samjh rha hu,..itna bhi attitude achhi bat nhi h

priya...are meri bat to suniye..m to address puchh rhi thi..

Ram...oh..i am sorry...mujhe laga us din...khair..do m btata hu

priya...nhi theek h m dhundh lungi

ram...are do na m btata hu...are yha to mujhe bhi jana h...chalo chhod deta hu

priya...nhi aap bta dijiye m chali jaungi...

Ram...jaisi tumhari marzi...aage se left jake..samne hi mil jayega...auto kar lena..thoda dur h

scene 5...

Sabhi aa gye rhte hain finally priya bhi aa jati h...sab kafi bolte hain use ki koi kam time pr nhi karti...bla bla...

Priya...are aa to gyi na...pta nhi ek to kis kone me bula liya upr se mujpr hi chilla rhi ho...aur kahan h tumhare so called ladke wale

shipra...aa..aate honge

priya...dekha papa..

Sudhir...priyaa..janti to h na tu apni ma ko...teri khushi k liye tujhe bhi dantne se baj nhi aati..

Priya...whi to...

Khair sb kafi der tak wait kar rhe hote hain pr kisi ka kahin ata pta nhi rhta h...sabhi priya ki nazar samne wali table pr padti h...jahan ram baitha rhta h...wo jhat se menu card utha k chehre k samne rakh leti h...

Priya...shittt..ise yha bhi ana tha:..aur aake mere hi samne baithna tha...hadh h yar...har jagah mil jata h...goddd pls ab dubara nhi..pls pls...har bar kuchh na kuchh gadbad ho jati h...

Shipra priya ko dekh rhi hoti h...priya...kya kar rhi hai???tameez se nhi baith sakti h???

Priya...han...han kyun nhi...tameez se hi to baithi hu

shipra...card neeche rakh...

Shipra jaise hi card neeche karne jati h ram uthkar priya ki table ki trf aane lagta h...

Priya...ma kya kar rhi ho...padhne do

sudhir..priya seedha to kar le..ulta card kaise padh le rhi h...

Priya...aahh..aa..papa..whi..whi..try kar rhi hu ki ulta card kaise padhte hain...timepass..bht bore ho rha h na...

Ram priya k table k ekdm pas aa jata h wo phone pr bat kar rha hota h..bat karte karte hi wo priya ka card seedha kark..use pakda k chala jata h pr dekta nhi h uski trf..priya use dekhti hi rh jati h...

Shipra...priya...priyaaa...kya hua??

Priya...kuchh...kuchhh nhiii..bs aise hi...are ma kab ayenge yar...aur kitna wait karna padega...mujhe yha se jana h...

Shipra...sudhir pta kariye na kahan h wo log..

Sudhir...han han abhi dekhta hu

priya...papa m jra pani leke aati hu

shipra...are to yha se hi order de de na...

Priya...ma timpas karna h na..to m wha jake le aati hu

shipra...ufff iska kya hoga..kitna gussa ata h ise..

Sudhir...gussa nhi h shipra bs apni frustration chhupati rhti h...

Scene 6...

Priya udhar se bottle lekar aa rhi hoti h tabhi ram se takra jati h aur bottle gir jati h...dono ek sath bolte hain...

Are logo ne dekh kar chalna bhi chhod diya...

Phir ekdusre ki trf dekhte hain...

Ram...tum???

Priya...aap???

Ram...tum abhi tak yhi ho

priya...mtlb???

Ram...mtlb tumhe dekh k lagta nhi ki tum itni der tak resturnt wgrh me ghumti hogi...isiliye puchh diya...

Priya...ghum nhi rhi hu ma papa k sath aayi hu...

Tabhi vikram aa jata hai...ram tu yha kya kar rha h..kab se dhundh rha hu tujhe..aur tu ye phone kabhi to khali rakha kar...achha ab jaldi chal ladki aa gyi h...

Ram jane k liye mudhta h phir ruk jata h priya ki trf dekhta h aur bolta h...

Ram...ek min...isse pehle ki tum apna khali deemag chalao m tumhe bta dena chahta hu ki m bakayda shaadi karne k liye ladki dekhne aaya hu..wo ladki aa gyi h...to apna muh band kar lo

priya jhenp jati h aur smile dene lagti h...kar bhi kya sakti h..aise aise expression jo de deti h...ki khud hi phas jati h...lol..aur rambabu to koi mauka chhodte hi nhi h...

Priya wapas table pr aakr baith jati h...aur ghri sans leti h...

Shipra...kya hua???

Priya...kuchh nhi

tabhi sudhir ka phone bjta h...ladkewalo ka rhta h

priya...kya hua papa??

Sudhir...wo log nhi aa payenge kuchh kam aa gya h..bola h phone karke btayenge..

Priya...dekha...sb nautanki h m to janti thi...unhe ana hi nhi tha isiliye ye sb natak kiya...khamkha hamara itna time wst kiya...ab chaliye ghar

shipra to bht dukhi ho jati h sudhir ko bhi bht bura lagta h pr priya to jaise use kuchh fark hi nhi pada...

Udhar ram bhi ladki walo se milne ja rha tha ki tabhi uska phone aa jata h koi deal cncl ho jati h uski...jiski wjh se wo frstrate ho jata h aur ladki walo se milne se mna kar deta h aur turant office chala jata h...

Priya jb restro se nikal rhi hoti h to uski mulakat us ladki se hoti h jise ram dekhne aane wala tha...wo uski coaching ki student rhti h...bato bato me wo use sab btati h...to priya usse puchhti h ki jb wo janti h ki wo usse itna bada h aur is trh ka uska attitude h aur phir abhi wo khud bhi to chhoti h to kaise shaadi k liye milne ko taiyar ho gyi...tab wo ladki ramkapoor k status aur paise k bare me priya ko btati h...priya sochti h...ajkl ki ladkiya bhi na..paise aur status k liye kisi se bhi shadi karne ko taiyar ho jati h...

Khair sabhi ghar aa jate hain...bekar me hi sab itne pareshan hue...

To b continue...
lalmadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice   Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Zindagi ne kitni baar ishara kiya par phir bhi samajh na paye yeh dono, yehi hota hain, I believe if u r destined to something u will get that, RaYa is in same boat, like the restaurant scene, continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
🤣
Thx for the PM.
Good keep it up..
Visiting Card se shurawat...accha hai ..baar baar mil rahe hai, baar jhagd rahe hai..Yehi nkhre to acche lagte hai..RaYa touch n priya 's beautiful expressions. nice
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ram ne iss baar priya ko bilkul mauka nhi diya kuch bhi ulta pulta soch ne ka . khair mujhe sach me laga tha ki wo dono ek dusre se hi milenge .. lekin yaha toh aur hi kahani nikli ... any ways ab kya hoga update soon ... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice pls continue soon thx 4 PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update jara jaldi diya karo.v.interesting  start.cant wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update... Is baar priya ne visiting cards diya ram ko...ofcourse address puchne ke liye...hahaha
Abhi toh bas shuruwat hai milna toh laga hi rahega.. 😆 😛
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update... sv bhale hi bekar maii etne paresan hue pr hame to bada maza aaya...😆😆