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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Start toh achha hain, kaafi interesting bhi, I think u should continue and with that plz PM me, will wait


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Start toh achha hain, kaafi interesting bhi, I think u should continue and with that plz PM me, will wait


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sahana747

😃Veena ye kaise keh diya ki,sirf hum dono hi. Ek  doosre  ko. Jhel sakthe. Hain?

Rambabu aur Priya ke liye lakhon  aashiq hain jo sirf mauke  ke talaash mein hain,
Khair, lagtha hai aapko bhi Rambabu pe ...aa Gaya.


hahaha...aur m in lakho ashiko se bht darti hu...bs thodi si nazre inayat idhar bhi rhe aur kuchh nhi chahiye

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Beautifull track nd instrumental music 👏 loved the VM ❤️



thank u sooo much dear❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

nice start very interesting OS loved d VM 👏👏

pls continue soon & pls PM me if possible 


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Very nice start and interesting too with Raya by Veena 

 So please continue   Waiting



sooo sweet...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
SITUATION ~~1

"mil k bhi hum na mile"


as u all know ki story iski shadi hone k liye created situations pr h...to ye to pta hi h ki shaadi ho chuki h...lekin hui kaise??/...mile kaise???...paas kaise aaye???...pyar hua ya nhi???...nhi hua to kyun shaadi ki???...hua  to kyun itni der se ki???...in sare sawalo k jawab k liye har situation ko dekhna padega...so we start with situation 1...mil k bhi hum na mile...iske bhi peechhe ek kahani h..aur usme barish bhi h...lets start...

scene 1



priya sadak pr khadi hokar wait kar rhi hoti h auto ka tabhi achanak barish hone lagti h..aur luckly priya k pas chhata h..isliye nhi ki use pta tha ki barish hogi...balki isliye ki uske pas har din hi hota h...qki dhup bht tez hoti h to use rakhna padta h  ...khair...barish ki wajah se aaj auto milne me aur der ho rhi h taabhi uske samne ek car aake rukti h..vry obious mr kapoor ki rhti h...ram ka drivr priya se kuchh keh rha hota h par barish ki wajah se kuchh clear nhi ho rha tha upar se treffic bhi tha kafi to gaadiyo ka bhi shor tha...ram sab dekhta rhta h...uska drivr thoda bewkuf  rhta bhi h...lol...khair ram apni window open karta h aur priya ko ek card deta h...

priya...ye kya h???

ram...adress h

priya...itna mujhe bhi dikhta h...par apki himmat kaise hui ye mujhe dene ki...

ram...isme himmat  ki kya bat h??

priya...han ofcourse apke pas to bht paisa h to himmat khareed li hogi...lekin har cheez paise se nhi khareedi jati...ye rakhiye apna card aur yha se nikaliye wrna abhi police ko bulaungi...

ram...are kamal ki ladki ho nhi btana h  mt btao...police ko beech me kyun la rhi ho??/

priya...kya nhi btana h??

ram...address...hum rasta bhul gye hain ...mera drivr tumse puchh rha tha to tumhe samjh nhi   aaya to mne socha shor ki wajah nam nhi samjh aa rha hoga isiliye mne card de diya...

priya...oh shit...i am sorry...mujhe laga...khair dijiye m btai hu

ram...nhi rhne do m kisi aur se puchh lunga

priya...are pls i am sorry...dijiye na m btati hu...

ram muskura deta h aur card deta h...priya rasta bta deti h...

ram...excuse

priya...hmmm

ram...tum mausam vibhag me kam karti ho kya???

priya...nhi to...kyun???

ram...nahi...wo tumne chhata liya h to mujhe laga shayad tum wha  kam karti hogi to tumhe pta chal gya hoga ki aaj bina mausam k barish hogi isiliye tum puri taiyari ke sath  aayi h

priya ram ko ghurti h ram sorry bol k chala jata h...priya muskura deti h...aur sochti h...kitne ajeeb log hote hain kuchh bhi bolte  hai...(achhhaaa...aur tum kya karti ho)...aur main to unse bhi badhke kuchh bhi sochti hu...hey bhagwan...us admi ko samjh na aya ho ki mne uske bare me kya socha...

scene 2...

priya ghar aati hai...kafi bhing gyi h..shipra uspr chillane lagti h...

shipra...ufff ye ladki kabhi nhi sudhregi bhing k aa gyi...kartik ko phone karke bula nhi sakti thi...bimar pad jayegi toh

priya...ma...maaa..pls shant ho jao...pehli bar nhi bhingi hu...kuchh nhi hoga...aur jb aa sakti hu to bina mtlb ko sabko kyun pareshan karu...??..aur aaj tumhe itni chinta kyun ho rhi h merebimar hone ki...

shipra ...kyun na ho...ma hu n main...waise bhi kal tujhe ladkewale dekhne aa rhen  hain...

priya...ufff.. not again...papa aap inhe samjhate kyun nhi h

sudhir...cmon priya...ye to ek na ek din hona hi tha...

priya...ofcourse har bar bina dekhe mna karne ka gudluck to nhi ho sakta...kabhi dekh k bhi to  mna karna chahiye

sudhir...priyaaa..kya tu shaadi nhi karna chahti...??

priya...are mne kab mna kiya pr karne k liye koi milna bi to chahiye...har bar to kuchh na kuchh ho hi jata h

shipra...ha lekin hum baith to nhi sakte na...koshis to karni hi padegi

priya...aaah...m bhsk mood me nhi hu...jo marzi wo kariye  aaplog...

priya apne kamre me chali jati h...udhar ram ghar pahonchta h to wha bhi yhi iklauta topic  chal rha hota h ram ki shaadi...par ram k deemag me to kuchh aur hi chal rha hota h...sab jor jbrdsti se next day ladki dekhne ka programm bna dete hain...

scene 3...

priya abhi bhi soch rhi h...oh god main kitna sochti hu...bechare bande k baare me kya kya soch daala...agr use meri intensn samjh aa gyi hogi to...he bhagwan dubara mat milwana pls...wrna face kaise karungi...pls god ab kabhi na takrau usse...glti se bhi nhi...

ram bhi soch rha h...hey bhagwan kya patakha ladki thi..ek hi bar me kya se kya soch gyi...hhmmhh...lagta h deemag kam hi use karti hogi...isiliye kuchh bhi sochti h...himmat to dekho ram kapoor k bare me aisa socha...ufff...ek din mila  aur m bhi uske hi jaisa ho gya bina sir pair ki bat soch rha hu...use kya pta  ki m ram kapoor hu ki kaun hu...aisi hi duniya ho gyi h to aisa hi sochegi na...khair..pr bas bht h itna...ab dubara kabhi usse samna na ho...glti se bhi nhi...

to b continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOw kya dhamakedaar mulaqaat hui ... aur dono bhagwan se pray kar rhe hai ki dubara na mile par unhe kya pata .. khair its really getting interesting now  ... update soon 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very good start   Very fond of  reading ur situations building up the story
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start, story is looking interesting, looking forward to the next part :)