SS "tum jo aaye jindagi me"LAST UPDATE ST15 ON PG43

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Posted: 2013-06-07T21:15:35Z
hi...i am back...actully is baar aane me thoda jyada time lag gya...qki kuchh samjh nhi aa rha tha ki kya alag lekar aau...???..actully...alag ka kya mtlb h??..are bhai koi bhi kahani ho...usme kya hoga..??...do tarah ki situation hogi...ya to ladka ladki milenge..ladenge jhagdenge...pyar hoga ...phir shaadi hogi...ya phir...shaadi hogi...milenge...ladenge jhagdenge...phir pyar hoga...hai ki nahi...ab itni hi kahani ko hum  chahe jitne turn twist deke tod marod k dikhaye...ye hamare upar h...par moral of the story ...milna dosti pyar shaadi yhi hota h...sequence kuchh bhi ho dsnt mttr...to bht sochne k bad mne ye socha ki m sirf ek point utha k ek story bnati hu...aur wo point h..."SITUATION"...do jane hain jinka milna tay hai...jo ekdusre k liye hi bane hain...lekin hamesha kuchh na kuchh aisa hota h ki wo milte milte reh jate hain...but at the end of the day...inka"SATH" inki"KISMAT"me likha h to wo dono mil hi jate hain...but what i want to show???...main ye dikhana chahti hu ki aisi kitni "situation ho sakti h jo inke beech create hui hongi is "sath" ko banane k liye...toh m sirf in situations k upar ye SS likhungi...aaplog pls bore mt hona kyunki ye thoda lamba ho sakta h...mtlb shayad aplogoko lage ki faltu khinch rhi h...but bat ye hai ki mujhe aur kuchh dikhana hi nhi h sirf yhi dikhana h ki kaise dono milte bichhdte ek ho gye...so here i go with my new "short story" on our "beloved"..."rampriya"....hope u all like it...iske nam ka bhi thoda locha tha kuchh samjh nhi aa rha tha kya naam rakhu...??..khair abhi k liye ek nam aya h deemag me phir situations k hisab se dekhenge ki kya hoga...filhal k liye...i am ready with new one...named


"meri zindagi me aate to..."


introduction...

ram aur priya...jinka sath inki kismat me likha hua h...par badi mushkil se mila ye sath inhe...par sau bat ki ek bat kismat koi nhi badal sakta to ye dono har situation se lad jhagad kar finally ek ho hi gaye...aaj dono eksath hain...abhi abhi dono ki shaadi hui h...aur kismat dekho jaise hi dono ekdusre k samne aaye sabse pehle whi situation create hui jo inke milne bichhdne me bht important role play karti h...aur wo h bin mausam ki barish...kai bar is barish ne bhi inka rasta roka...aur phir kai bar rasta banaya bhi...dono barish ko dekh k muskura dete hain aur eksath rambabu k kamre ki khidki jahan se  barish ka view bht achha hota h wha aake khade ho jate hain...


ram...hehehe...phir se barish

priya...wo bhi bina mausam k

ram...ye hamara pechha kabhinhi chhodegi na

priya...lagta to nhi h

ram...par jo bhi ho yar...hum ise ignore nhi kar sakte isne bht bar hamara sath diya h

priya...han aur bht bar sath chhuta bhi h iski wajah se..

ram...kamal h na...i jst dnt believe yar ki hum dono finally eksath hain

priya...finally...but strnz na itni bar mile bichhde par alag nhi hue...

ram...hahaha...ulta aur kareeb aa gye

priya...hmmm...pta h kyun??

ram...kyun??

priya...qki humdono hi sirf ekdusre ko jhel sakte hain...hume koi aur nhi jhel sakta...


they laugh together...

priya...mr.kapoor...chaliye apne naye safar ki shuruat...tay kiye hue raste ki yado pr phir se ek bar chal kar karte hain

ram...ok but story main sunaunga...

priya...nahi main sunaungi

ram...nhi tum hamesha aise hi karti ho...main sunaunga...

priya...mr.kapoor dnt start again...bhs mt kariye m sunaungi...

oye chup karo tumdono...story tumlog sunaoge to main kya karungi...taali bajaungi...chupmar k barish ka maza lo ekdusre ki baho me aur story main sunati hu...to kahani kuchh aise shuru hoti h...are itni jaldi kya h pehle ye to bta du ki charcters & plot are same as serial...baki sabkuchh kahani k hisab se chalega...ha to kahani kuchh aise shuru hoti h...mmm...cmon yar ek hi update me kaise shuru kar du??...kuchh cmmnts  to de do ki start kaisa h???...kam karega ya nhi??? logo ko intrest ayega ya nhi???...tab to kahani sunaungi...pta chala public hhi nhi aur m bina mtlb k bakwas kiye ja rhi hu...toh story agle update se shuru karenge...tab tak...keep smiling...


to b continue...

thoda jyada chahiye...??...to video dekho...




link of updates...

Edited by veena23 - 2013-12-15T11:48:49Z
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Posted: 2013-06-07T22:19:32Z
Start toh achha hain, kaafi interesting bhi, I think u should continue and with that plz PM me, will wait
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Posted: 2013-06-07T23:30:03Z
Big smileVeena ye kaise keh diya ki,sirf hum dono hi. Ek  doosre  ko. Jhel sakthe. Hain?
Rambabu aur Priya ke liye lakhon  aashiq hain jo sirf mauke  ke talaash mein hain,
Khair, lagtha hai aapko bhi Rambabu pe ...aa Gaya.

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Posted: 2013-06-08T00:23:49Z
Very nice start and interesting too with Raya by Veena 
 So please continue   Waiting
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Posted: 2013-06-08T00:51:52Z
Nice start nd interesting too with backdrop barish hmm..
Looking forward to it..continue
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Posted: 2013-06-08T00:56:57Z
Beautifull track nd instrumental music Clap loved the VM Heart
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Posted: 2013-06-08T07:05:20Z
wow new OS from you, loved the introduction Smile looking forward to it.
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Posted: 2013-06-08T08:39:31Z
nice start very interesting OS loved d VM ClapClap
pls continue soon & pls PM me if possible 
Edited by Dsudipa - 2013-06-08T08:56:15Z
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