waiting for some cute private moments 😉
lovely update
d way they both met n come close was totally different n unusual
Sweet part dear but i thought u sepnt lot f time talking about the ring's price which slowed the pace. I would have liked more focus on her career and how he goes about it. But I undretsand especially if this ring is going to be a reason for any MUs going ahead so it is ok...
reading past and present together is still a little confusing for me. Also they portray two different emotions and reading them togther takes away the depth from both. I will suggest you either finish past first or give it as large chunks of flashbacks at appropriate points in the story...Just my suggestion dear. Please don't mind. I like the story and will read it anywyas so but just thought of sharing my POV.
Wonderful update,,, 👏 👏 👏
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