My Love is Sin... A Poem 30/5/13

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

so here is my first ever attempt of poetry in english...

this is a poem on love and it beautifully portray the feelings of khushi in my upcoming fiction CALL OF LOVE... which i am gonna start dunno when.

so before that you can read this and enjoy till then...

MY LOVE IS SIN..

I see no chances
of my win
people call my love
is a sin...

may be we are
miles apart
I am bonded to you
with strings of heart...

for all people
my feelings are matter of fact
but only i know
its not just an act...

for you i may
be not a big deal
but only i know
how i hide my pain under the veil...

when i see your eyes
and gaze that i admire
my heart starts burning
in the forbidden fire...

every one say me i live in illusion
i need to be awake
but i wanna know
what if it may lead to my heart break...

my heart is lying
in the pit of dark
you are my light
and let me get your mark...

oh god show me your mercy
and bless me your grace
I know I can't live with him
atleast let me die in his embrace...

howz it guys...😳

fun fact related to this poem...

okay confession time guys i wrote it in 10 minutes and that too during my exam...main exam.😛
I tried to concentrate a lot in writing exam but my mind was wandering...so wrote everything that came into my mind and let of all thoughts get out of my mind...

after writing this i was satisfied and got peace then i continued writing my exam...😳
its written on my question paper...😆

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So guys bubye for now...

Hope you loved the poem...

If you liked it...hit the LIKE button...

Don't forget to post your comments...

Love ya...

Anamika...

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

res for crizal...my poet friend

crizal's comment...😉

OMG like I said before I m in awe with it 😳

Can't express much with words 😳

its soo heart touching 😛

Khushi being in unconditional love with Arnav is shunned by him 😭

Yipeee U r writing story on this one 😃 ...Beware of my Stalking skills 😈

Thank dii fr ressing for me 🤗

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

res for saran

unres,...

for my darling angel... 🤗

to start with...

UR LOVE IS DIVINE... just like ur hrt... 🤗

cum here... * a big bear hug *

🤗

maybe i knw u in and out i felt evry single line stab me to depth...

it was awesum is an understatement...

i gues this poem is wht brought us together some months bck... and here im reading again ur words of beautiful emotions...

i so loved it dear...

so loved it... ❤️

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

its for vaju

unress

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MY LOVE IS SIN

but

i can say only one word

it is not "sin"

it is "sacred"

it is sooo touchy dear

very meaning full

total with a pure love

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how can u write

such a poem

in the examination hall

being a b.tech student

wow

anu

u r awesome

ps: love u for such a beautiful poem

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

haa yeh wala kuts ke liye

*****
very sweet poem Di.. thanks for resing for me..

that's a really touchy one, and written so fast dammit!
am sure your exam went well.. LOL.

thanks again for d pm too..
p.s.-post the other which you once shared with me.. ;)

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Edited by anamika90 - 12 years ago