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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
this was an Arnav update!!!! totally... as if your readers are not already crazy about your Arnav :) not complaining though...

i liked Khushi's explanation for her supporting NK...because she doesnt care what he thinks/says/does...she cares about Arnav. She loves him. Period. someone has done this to me once in the past...and although my anger didnt recede much, it did make me feel good...feel special :)

holy cow!!!! that passionate love making scene!!! i think your 18+ rating should include an additional warning..."not for the faint hearted"...you know why? because all your updates are so well written and your characters are so well portrayed and therefore I am sure your readers like me visualise the scenes like its happening for real...now imagine our plight visualising something like that😳

all that emotional drama over a dishwasher!!! 😆😆 reminded me of the IPK scene where Arnav says something like that..."all this drama because i ordered an A/C?"...

chalo acha hua ki arnav bitwa ne dishwasher order kiya...lots of secrets came out today...

i am not happy with Arnav shutting himself off at the farmhouse and boozing all night without even bothering to inform Khushi😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shree10

My soft corner for Arnav is widened more.
Loved the update Kavi! Thankd God they made up before Amarvilas !! and thanks for 18 + update.

2 things I kind of didn't get-

1)If Khushi doesn't care for NK, then what is the need to defend him? Bcos that actually gived the impression that she does!

2)After all the drama at dining table, How can Arnav just vanish? Khushi is also suffering. He has wife now and he needs to inform her at least. Looks like marriage is yet to sink in fully.

Loved the way Khushi cared for Arnav in farmhouse and the way he let her do it. And the last scene! Wow! Her simple gesture reminded him of his mother!

I am curious how you will bring up Arnav knowing about Sharada's lie regarding Khushi.



both of us commented at the same time...😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: shree10



1)If Khushi doesn't care for NK, then what is the need to defend him? Bcos that actually gived the impression that she does!

2)After all the drama at dining table, How can Arnav just vanish? Khushi is also suffering. He has wife now and he needs to inform her at least. Looks like marriage is yet to sink in fully.



1 - it does give that impression...but you know what...some people are like that...its not about whom they defend...its about whom they feel they have the rights over...she probably doesnt feel a sense of belongingness with NK and doesnt care about him enough to allow his actions/words to hurt her...so she isnt hurt by him...but with Arnav, it is different!

2 - me too totally disagreeing to that...how can he not inform Khushi that he has decided to spend the night boozing at the farmhouse...especially after a night like 'that' the previous night😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Wow amazing chapter
Simply superb
So Kushi I s never going to tell the truth
It will break him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
congrats on new thread.
Superb update.
Thought kushi's truth about going to mumbai will also come out in the arguments.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu.sr



1 - it does give that impression...but you know what...some people are like that...its not about whom they defend...its about whom they feel they have the rights over...she probably doesnt feel a sense of belongingness with NK and doesnt care about him enough to allow his actions/words to hurt her...so she isnt hurt by him...but with Arnav, it is different!

2 - me too totally disagreeing to that...how can he not inform Khushi that he has decided to spend the night boozing at the farmhouse...especially after a night like 'that' the previous night😳



Agreed and accepted!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Wow...
Lovely update...
U r a brilliant writer...I dnt knw hw many times I have said this but seriously I dnt knw anythn else to say...
And I'm very bad in explaining d update...

I knw this much that I loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the update, hope your migranie's never come back again, I liked the way Khushi expressed herself, makes sense, I read the last again and this part to understand her stand, you brought it out wonderfully. I do not expect Arnav to respond to her confession, sometimes he just shows it without words and they did patch up, yeaaa, in the most perfect way

Why do I feel like Mami is responsible for the whole mess indirectly, like the taunting and all made Arnav's mom do what she did 5 years ago?

So many revelations, wow...it had to hit again Khushi again that she was not the only who sacrificed...

She went behind him to the farmhouse, I am in two minds, but I would go with Khushi telling Arnav the reason she went to Bombay, he lost so much already and for him trust is not easy, truth always hurts but that is the best way
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Oky that's really dramatic update u know
Mamiji...Selfish typical woman what i say

Khushi confess her feelings to arnav but he answer it his own way
he cares he always cares his family naniji and akash and even khushi but he shows it his own ways

their love making is passionate and intense
the intensity always from the first day they met
in valley of flowers when arnav saw khushi in rain

he transferred his shares to akash and bought house from mortage
what man his
Kis miiti se bana ha
he buy dishwasher and bring OP home to show everyone his wife is not a servant
kaha milte hai ase husband:)

he loves khushi always loves her but he shows it his own hard way and by controlling his feeling and desire sometimes
i wish his mother understands his feeling
then arnav khushi relationship much better

She care and may be only one who cares and look after him without any issue and greed
that's why she cooks her favourite food and bring it farmhouse by herself
but arnav is wrong khushi is not like her mother
his mother cares arnav but there's selfishness sorry but i feel it when ever i read about arnav mother
HIs trust toward his mom...i scared for him eventually when get to know her mother real face
khushi never goona tell him

what if he check out and match letter writing and khushi writing
means he knows how is khushi writing why not he check and match letter writing with khushi writng


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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was good to see Khushi let him know that it was his words that were affecting her.

I have to ask this, Mamiji se itna gussa? Both DR and VOF have ajeeb (and hatable)Manoramas😆. but glad that Arnav showed her place to her.👏 Although raking u the past is utterly bad😡

This chapter was indeed one of revelations. Till now i thought only Sharda was the one who was a manipulator, but Manorama is no less either. This Arnav has been too selfless for his own good and it feels bad to see him being name called even after all this.

Khushi's decision might seem good for Arnav right now but isn't it bound to create rift in the future?😕

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