{|AsYa FF: Chapter Black} THREAD 2 LINK PAGE 142!! - Page 28

Originally posted by: mochhug

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I'm... I mean.. I... 

Ok I've recovered now.. I was just... so... moved. This was by far the best update yet. The best, most insightful, most moving, most heartbreaking chapter of all. 

The way Zoya wanted to stop living at the mere thought and realization that she was no longer a virgin... I just.. I have no words. It was just sooo good. The way your described it. You truly are a gifted writer. 

I was actually expecting her to be comforted by Ayaan, but I thought it wouldn't be until she was home with him. That was an unexpected twist. And Asad blackmailing Ayaan, was both evil, but thoughtful, as twisted as that sounds. But I assume that's what you're going for. 

As for Asad... I just can't form words that will do this part justice. His pain, his need to let out all his emotion.. how for the first time in years, he actually felt his emotions, instead of blowing off steam with a woman. Zoya's words hit him hard.. but I'm still curious as to what happened to his mother... why is he so against rape? Of course it's a crime, but that word hit's him like a ton of bricks every time he hears it or thinks about it. 

I'm seriously ADDICTED to this FF. Looking forward to another emotion packed chapter and hopefully more revelations! 

Please PM me 😳

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

I realized I never commented here😲

How much more stupid can i become🤪

Reserved for the moment. I'll be back soon. Have classes right now.

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

SO I read two updates together and wow bowled over !! 

Amazing yaar you write so well .

I am liking the whole dark side of it and Ayaan is being such a help !

Asads character is so much influenced from his past not that we are all not but his is too much.

Lets see what he does with Zoya in the sense gives her a job or what and how she brings about changes in him and her and Ayaans unique relation would be worth it !! 

And the jealousy aspect would again be cherry on top !

There are so many aspects to this story yaar very well thought off !!

Thanks for the pm really appreciated :)