SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 4

are u sure u are new...I mean this is just WOW!!

awesome starting Edited by captainplus - 11 years ago

Awesome start .
Do pm me and continue soon .

i loved the start😳 wuld love to read more..! continu soon & do pm me😃 

Its a nice starting.  Please continue

i read the first chappy of ur ss!!it was really really good.the whole part was narated so beautifully.the abhiya confrontation were so so good!!and the track is reallly interesting.

Wow nice start...
Were they in a relationship????
Pls do update

Nice 

Loved the First chapter! Continue soon :)

That was very well written n its hard to believe this is your first 😊 Intriguing start n I already have many questions 😃 Its evident that there is an unspoken bond between Abhiya. She wanted him when she was in school and I am sure the feelings would have been mutual from Abhay's side as well. But something went horribly wrong n Chaand died bcoz of Pia. I am waiting to know what could have possibly happened. Abhay seems to pity her more than he hates her. I am sure its not easy for him to forgive the girl who snatched away his dad who was his only family  But y did Pia's family abandon her? Or did she walk away in guilt? 😕 Please continue and PM me 😳