Thnxx for the note and especially the way you took an example from harry potter!
I've read it full, and now i guess i get your view on sheetal, and lest i do understand atleast, cuz biasness dat i've for Arnav and Khushi can't go away..!
Fluer wasn't bad at all, infact she at a pont was good too! Ginny's view was miffed.. Like mine is!
And please dn't make sheetal like the best of all peoples, it wud make me feel terribke for thnking ill for her and for having her leave Arnav for Khushi!
Just keep her like this!
And about the pace.., i like readin the story and as far i know.. Luv storys don't end up in an update ot two, and like here.. Arnav and khushi might start to feel for each other, yet their way towrds each other and letting the emotion called 'love' come in, is infact surrounded by lots of thngs..
Bth of them hav lots to know, realize and undrstand and learn about each other!:)
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