TAAREY SS-LOVE WITH PAIN promo chp 6

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Aimen Iqbal

@flicka

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i am reading it for the first time so

the concept is really good

chapter 1

loved the way rey and taani care for each other

rey is hurt i am feeling bad for him

chapter 2

rey is hurt and taani trys to bring out his pain

and gets hurt

it was really emotional

chapter 3

taani had fever and usay chot bhi lagi

feeling bad for taani as well as rey

but must say that swayams acting was really good

rey is going to meet taani yuppie

update soon

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dh19

@dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome .
just loved it
do cont. soon.

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

super awesome...

mind blowing update.

luvd d way swayam handled d situatn..

update soon

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raddhi

@raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

awsm stry yaar

i luv it i luv swayam haaye

he is cute n thn i luv rey going

to meet taani nice thanks for PM

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aishapie

@aishapie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Jus awsom ss dear...its quite emotional but i luved it...u did grt job...keep on updatin 😃

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radhika

@radhu-taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awww its really amazing n felt very bad for taarey 😭😭 😭 n swayam the best bro evr 😊 loved him n precap is interesting taarey talk n rey cares for taani awwweee so niceee... do continue it soon n pm me

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Kunwar_AJS

@Kunwar_AJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

hi guys thnks 4 the comments and hope you will like this part toh here i go

rey enters in taani's room,taani was sleeping rey sees taani's hand it was hurted alot she was not at all well
rey was hurt by seeing taani like this
rey just went near her and kissed her forehead by this feeling taani wakes up and sees rey in front of her and she just tries to stand up
rey-taani betho u r not well
taani didnt even had energy to speak but by seeing rey she remembered all tht happened and started crying badly
even tears came in rey's eyes
rey cupped her face up
rey-taani stop crying,pls aise mat roo tumhari tabyat aur kharab ho jayegii plsss just stop crying
taani started crying more and while crying
taani-i am sorry rey i am really sorry pls mjhe maaf kar dijiye i am really sorry maine aaap kp thapad mar diya mjhe nahi karna chaye tha pls pls aap mjhe maaf kardo and took rey's hand plss rey maine bahut galti ki plss aap bhi mjhe maroo
rey shocked -taani quitee
taani-nahi aap bhi mjhe marye bahut buri hun maii bahut aapko mjhe marna chaye
rey took her face in his hands-just quite kya bol rahi ho tum ,tum pe kbhi haath nahi utha sakta hun main ,just shut up taani plss stop it just stop
taani didnt had any energy and she hugged rey tightly
she hided her face in rey s chest and still crying
rey caressing her hair
rey-taani tum bahut achi ho forget it aur mjhe bilkul bura nahi laga pls stop crying pls jaan
by listening the last word my jaan taani heart felt relief and she stopped crying bt still hiding her face
rey-taani are you ok
taani-haa
rey-sweetheart kuch khaya tumne
taani-nahi
rey-thk hai main kuch khane k liye lata hun
taani-nahin mjhe nahi khana i am fine
rey very sweetly-mera bacha mere liye bhi nahi khayega
taani-thk hai parthoda sa
rey brings food and make her eat by his hands and taani was just lost in looking at him she dont know wt is happening
rey-taani chalo ye dawai le lo
taani-nahi bahut kadvi hai
rey-plss
taani took it and made faces as its very bad
rey-bahut kadvi thi
taani -haan
rey kissed her both the cheeks and -abhi kadvi lag rahi hai
taani-nahi bahut sweet hai
rey-chalo taani so jao
taani keeps her head in rey's lap and rey caressed her forehead and made her sleep and even her fever was gone he made her sleep on bed and again kissed her forehead and taani was in sleep but still rey kiss brought a swwet smile on her face
rey-my cuteee i love you and went out the whole team waiting outside
swayam-so gayi taani
rey-ha
vicky-u love her still
nil-still matlab kab pyar nahi karta tha ye bataa
neha-jab itna love doing toh breakup kyun
simmi-haan u saw taani tumhare bina kis halat main hai
swayam-aaj tujhe jawab dena hi padega tujhe taani ki kasam aur tu usski kasam kbhi todd nahi sakta toh jijaji batayenge kya baat hai ya main taani ko batauu
rey-no listen ye break up taani se aise behave karna ye sab ek natak tha
swayam-par kyun
rey-kyun ki taani sirf mere baare main sochne lagi thi sirf main hi uski life ka passion future sab kuch tha
srinni-toh galat kya hai
rey loudly wth tears-galat ye hai ki uski life main sirf main hi tha darr lagta tha mjhe ye soch ke k marr gaya toh main wt shhe will do suicide mere bina apni life sochegi nahi wohh hai na
i wanted her to be strong to have her career main hamesha uske saath hun but main chata hun woh strong bane aage badhe mere liye apni life main rukk na jaye all i did just because i love her more than myself i just love her u know uss ke bina apni life ji nai sakta mai each and every day of my life is like hell ,uss se kai jyada hurt hua hunn main i love her and felt on his knees by crying
the whole gang was shocked to listen all this
swayam-bahut jyada hi pyar karta hai tu
all-aur hum sab tumhara saath denge aur taani ka khayal bhi rakhenge
boys-ofcourse bhabhi hai humari abb toh khayal rakhna hi padega
but taani listened all this each and every word

precap-taani singing sunn raha hai na tu ro rahi hunn main
and rey's performane on tum hi ho abb tum hi ho meri aashiqui abb tum hi ho