OS-Dil Se Duaa(Pg1&3&6& 11)*COMPLETED*6/6PLate - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

sameer feel lot of guilt inside his heart..
how i meet my eyes to her..
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how i meet my eyes to my litle sister..(he consider riya his yonger sister)
i m responsible who snatched her happiness her arjun..
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Riya eyes still closed..as she was thinking her past memory..
the memory thats hurted her every night..

the chain of flashback memory was break very soon..
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she opened her eyes when she feel rathor pathes her shoulder..
riya hamari destination aa gaye hai..
Trained stoped in goa plateform...
Rathore forward his hand to her..
She hold his hand n rathore helped her to get up..
Its almost eight month yah..
poore eight month ho gaye tumhen gaye..
U hv no idea ..maine ek ek pal kis tarah mar mar ker gujara hai..
her eyes gets moised..
chalen rathore said..
she snaaped her thought..
n tried to hide her tears n nodded in yes..
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She put her one hand on her belly as wanna to give some suport n took very slow step..
Rathore helped her to come out the train..
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RaThore ask r u ok..
riya nodded in yes..
but rathore easly saw pain in her face..
she was tring to hide in whole Journey..
now no one can stop her to reached her destination..
to her...????
TBC-
PRE-LAST PART
SO Dekhate hain riyavke dil ke duaa..use kahan le jaati haii...
mast ya bore...
plz jayada maat rona guys..
verna meri story main flood aa jayegiii..
ok buy..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Awesome dear..

Riya strong belief that Arjun would never break the promise and would return to her..

Rathore cursing himself ...

Emotional update..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Emotional update... Hope Riya's faith turn true... Aww Sam he s blaming himslf for this... Is Riya pregnant??? continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
di
rula diya
lov it
sry like buton nt
wrkin...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
omg what love she had gor him
luv it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
hey lovely dear
cant hit like button its not working
but again a superb story
continue dear n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
awesome update
flashbask was so cute & romantic
riya is waiting for arjun in bridal costume
but what happened to arjun?
why sam is saying like that at the end?
hope nothing bad happened to arjun
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
PIYA DI...
it was a very beautiful update.
Emotional bhi thha...
Parhke mere aakho se aasu aagaye...
It was really beautiful...
Waiting very eagerly for the final part.
Mujhe apne dil pe bharosa hai ki Arjun ko kuch nahi hua hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
again flashback was so nice
aww poor riya she is crying so much😭 we couldn't see her like this😭😭😭
so it's sam's mission arjun took it
8 months passed where is he gone yaar? pls bring him back soon
y r they going to goa? is riya pregnant?
hope she ll reach her destination so soon
cont soon
Edited by madmadona - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
#30
that was such an emotional update :) loved it
feeling so bad for riya ðŸ˜­
poor girl thinks arjun will never break his promise and will come back
flashback scenes were lovely
rathore is cursing himself and feeling guilty ðŸ˜­
seems like riya is pregnant
the song was perfect for situation
hope arjun is alive
can't wait to read next part
continue soon