Originally posted by: Suvika.
a very very good start Aazeen..Thank u di...πand lots of relations changed too..Hmmm... Tried my hand on Family drama...πreally like that. will read chapters 2 and 3 also and then post my full comments in one shot. Ok! U wait for chap-3 n 4, n I'll wait for ur comments...
for now, i will only say that you have improved by leaps and bounds from your previous FF. Oh! That is a huge compliment...π Improvement is the best thing, one can have... U know, when I had written this 1st chap, it was much before JHUBJ... now when I re-read it, I found somethings so immature, that, i had re-written the entire chap again...πππ
just one question..whats Nidhi's age in this one?? i understood that Ashu is 36..but didn't get a clear pic of Nidhi..Sab kuch 1st chap mein thode hi bata doongi... kuch 2nd chap ke liye bhi toh hoga na... U'll get to know everything... Nidhi's age, how Ashni's relation got arranged, Nidhi's family, ect-ect...π³π³π³
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