My dear Avantika,
As you know, I am not overly fond of romantic FFs, Ariya, Arisha, ArNi, or now Arakshi, for mostly they are dead solemn attempts at portraying a grand passion, and equally often, they start out well and then become either too mushy or too warm, or both, for my fastidious and /or conservative tastes.
But this one of yours is the exception that proves the rule, and I enjoyed it a lot. At one point, it seemed to me that you were drifting towards R rated territory, but I was mistaken, for you stayed well within the bounds of what old fogeys like me think of as being in good taste.
I liked this so much because it is not just un-mushy (sic) but really because the romantic passages display a fine, feisty, half-mocking spirit that seems to mirror the fine, feisty, half-mocking young woman who stars in the aforesaid passages. The best of her wicked sallies was:
And waise bhi, koi bhi cheez khareedne se pehle, ek demo toh banta hai,
na?"
I was in splits, and it is to his considerable credit that Arjun, after reeling from the shock at first, not only takes it in his stride, but makes a quick recover. I am sure this Odd Couple will deal famously together.
Shyamala Aunty
[QUOTE=_Mohabbatgirl_]Heylo dear pankhas, here's my first piece of romance dedicated to Arjun Ji and the newest lady in his life.. 😃
I know, it's probably not that great.. But yeah, just a beginning.. 😉😃
It turned out to be longer than I'd expected.. (BB's stop laughing.. I know, i can't control myself once I start writing..) 😉😆
Wokay then, no more blabbering.. I'll leave you guys to it..
Oh and just so you know, BB's, This one was dedicated to you guys.. 🤗
❤️
~ Of Salvations and Blessings~
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