Awsm story... You wrote every scenes, every emotions really well... great work... loved their accidental and then that not so accidental kiss...Jeevika and manvis bond is described so well... Vanshika is also a real sweetheart... I hope virat doesnt leave to mumbai without taking manvi with him...The past staring sessions of virat noticed by jeevika was realyyy adorable... virat is already unknowingly in love with our mannu... I have added your new account... want pms ofcourse... pls do pm me fr all your works... and cont soon this story and also the others..Tada... take care...
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nice update and there gone for there 1 date he lost in her beauty and he was jelous when other drooling her so he will take with or he will alone her update soon
the update was mindblowinggg... 😃
virat was staring at her shamelessly hayeee!! ❤️
their first date eekhs!!!!! 😃
virat holding her close to him 🤢🤢
honeymoon suit 🤢
next one jaldi update kar uzma ki bacchi 😛😆 and romantic hona cahiye 😛
chal update asap 😃
Awesome update uzma👏👏👏 i juz loved every bit of it❤️ especially virman romantic date very nice update loved it❤️~~waiting for next part...will be waiting...:D
mind-blowing updateromantic date with romatic dance 😳 kya baat hai oye hoye honeymoon suit- ahem ahem I wonder wat will happen there then 😆ab tho I cnt wait for next part - so plz plz continue soon 😉
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