Arshi FF:- My slave,My family

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evydsena7777

@evydsena7777

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

NEW READER ALERT! HI BUDDY, i m new reader and read all the chapter in one go.. i really like this story..its full of emotions,pain which i luv to read... u knw i was checking out some stuff to read... when i came across your story.. its title force me to have a look and once i start reading,i forget the time... i read single-single line so intensely like i preparing for exam and dont want to miss any thing... u knw when my frnd come and said she want to use my comp.. i told her to wait and she also sat with me and start reading your story and at the end of chapter 17.. she need a lot of tissue and she hug me..after then she stop crying(actually she is quite emotional) She is not a member but she want me to tell you she just fall in luv with your writting... So keep it up! best regards from my side and naggi(my friend)

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

wow

its so so emotional what u wrote

Khushi did the right thing by sleeping on the doormat,cause arnav's action has clearly told her she is no more than a slave.

oneday arnav will remember all these things of khushi treating herself as a servant , sleeping on dorrmat and losing her all hopes becoming a living dead body. he will remember her ICU condition..and her getting afraid of him.

and he will cry like hell

all i can say is that whenever he realises he shud realise that

Even if so what if she cheated him, does she deserve death and such pain for sleeping with karan?? is this so big crime that he didnt care for her life.

carry on the story...and its not necessary to justify to arnav to show him in proper light always.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

awesome

he had succeeded in killing her

he can have her but she is already dead

u can heal a person who is hurt

not the one who is shattered n destroyed

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Jasmeet

@CBrocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Hey...Thanks for the pm😊

This chapter was so heartbreaking...the pain that khushi is feeling..brought tears to my eyes😭

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missmk

@missmk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Poor khushi but loved the update

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---Sonia---

@---Sonia---

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

well, first of all l am sorry l have not comment but l had exams and l could not read any stories and now l am back:)
poor Khushi, she lost her voice and arnav, l feel like he does love her but does not want to show to Khushi because he himself does not know
hope Khushi will recover and arnav will be with her to support her

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Happy that she gain her conciousness back..but this incident brok her completely..please update soon

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nisha2701

@nisha2701

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

when are u gonna update??? Pleaswe update na.it has become a habbit of reading ur updates.soo addictive.pleae tell na,when are u gonna update?:(tell na tell na