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Posted: 11 years ago
Now I know I'm alive

You hold me close and say my name
You let me go and but your warmth remains
Now I know I'm alive

You carried me when I fell
And when I lied I was alright you could tell
Now I know I'm alive

You let me put my head on your chest
Right there for an eternity I can rest
Now I know I'm alive

You held my hand and we danced the dance of love
No one can see us except the stars and moon above
Now I know I'm alive

Before you I was only allowed to breathe
Now you are my only want, my only need
Now I know I'm alive

Before you my soul wasn't allowed to thrive
But know with you I finally know I'm alive

Done hope you liked it, pls ht like and comment too😊




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Mohit_monaya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesommee!! =D
lovedd it =D
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Posted: 11 years ago
great workπŸ‘ Edited by lavi_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome dear!πŸ˜ƒ words were rhyming! the thought behind each line was reflecting n most importantly you used the words which are nice to read instead of the simple ones!πŸ˜ƒ really impressed!πŸ‘ really it was awesome! i loved it! great job!πŸ‘πŸ˜Š sorry maine kuch zyada hi judge kar diya! wo kya hai na ek poet hi nazar se padha na so comment bhi waise hi kar diya!πŸ˜† hope you will not mind it!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb!!!
I loved it so much!!!
πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
great peom...

u kept it so simple yet so heart touching...

loved it :D

do write more :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

it was awesome dear!πŸ˜ƒ words were rhyming! the thought behind each line was reflecting n most importantly you used the words which are nice to read instead of the simple ones!πŸ˜ƒ really impressed!πŸ‘ really it was awesome! i loved it! great job!πŸ‘πŸ˜Š sorry maine kuch zyada hi judge kar diya! wo kya hai na ek poet hi nazar se padha na so comment bhi waise hi kar diya!πŸ˜† hope you will not mind it!😊


Thanks a lot...and ya it means a lot coming from you di
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved ur ppoem
it was simple den too heart touching great work...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice poem.. Short and sweet. Do continue writing poems and PM me whenever you write anything else.. Thanks for the pm. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
only this much i have to say...
angel, you made my day;
i'm impressed with the feel of your couplets;
and i hope the forum gets,
many more of such brilliant stuff
and i think i have written enough!
for i cant rhyme as effortlessly as you, you see
and this miniature poem has been too much for me.
so i'll just say...wow...wow...wow
and please accept my praise with a bow.
this is medha, signing off, with all my love
cause i dont know anything to rhyme with love, other than dove)!!!