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Whomst

@Angel-luvs-s

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Now I know I'm alive

You hold me close and say my name

You let me go and but your warmth remains

Now I know I'm alive

You carried me when I fell

And when I lied I was alright you could tell

Now I know I'm alive

You let me put my head on your chest

Right there for an eternity I can rest

Now I know I'm alive

You held my hand and we danced the dance of love

No one can see us except the stars and moon above

Now I know I'm alive

Before you I was only allowed to breathe

Now you are my only want, my only need

Now I know I'm alive

Before you my soul wasn't allowed to thrive

But know with you I finally know I'm alive

Done hope you liked it, pls ht like and comment too😊

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

its awesommee!! =D

lovedd it =D

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Lavi

@cutedollll

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

great work👏

Edited by lavi_taarey - 13 years ago

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

it was awesome dear!😃 words were rhyming! the thought behind each line was reflecting n most importantly you used the words which are nice to read instead of the simple ones!😃 really impressed!👏 really it was awesome! i loved it! great job!👏😊 sorry maine kuch zyada hi judge kar diya! wo kya hai na ek poet hi nazar se padha na so comment bhi waise hi kar diya!😆 hope you will not mind it!😊

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Arbitrator.

@Arbitrator.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Superb!!!
I loved it so much!!!
😃

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@shivi_reylover

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

great peom...

u kept it so simple yet so heart touching...

loved it :D

do write more :)

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Whomst

@Angel-luvs-s

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie
it was awesome dear!😃 words were rhyming! the thought behind each line was reflecting n most importantly you used the words which are nice to read instead of the simple ones!😃 really impressed!👏 really it was awesome! i loved it! great job!👏😊 sorry maine kuch zyada hi judge kar diya! wo kya hai na ek poet hi nazar se padha na so comment bhi waise hi kar diya!😆 hope you will not mind it!😊

Thanks a lot...and ya it means a lot coming from you di