SS: Trust (Virika) on current track Teaser Pg19

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome

viren is back n the confusion abt riya is solved

this track is damn interesting

loved it

pm me when u update please

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nani2630

@nani2630

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Amazing I wish CV woul have got few ideas from you 😛
update soon &plz pm me

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

its awesome dear...luvd it...luvd jeevs spirit & thanks to anwar...the truth is out wow bt wht a story !!! Update soon

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

superb update...loved it

loved hw u portrayed Jeevika's character

nicely written

plz continue soon n do pm me

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vbasdeo

@vbasdeo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Continued...

As both Viren and Jeevika entered their room, Jeevika felt a sigh of relief and happiness that their room was complete once again with the return of her Virenji, her life. As Viren sat on the bed Jeevika handed him a towel "Virenji please go take a shower i'll get you something to eat" she said in her sweet voice smiling at him.
As she was about to walk out he held her hand stopping her, placing the towel on the bed he got up and held her hand close to his heart. "Jeevika i can't thank you enough for what you have done for me , for standing by my side and supporting me, for your never dying faith and trust in me" he said to her with tears in his eyes he kissed her hand.
"Jeevika I don't know how much you faced nor went through these past few weeks and taunts you had to hear from the outside world, but I'm sorry for putting through all this" he folded his hands in front of her in forgiveness. Jeevika heart strucken by his gesture with tears in her eyes she lowered his hands "Virenji please don't do that and why you are sorry its not your fault," she assuered him. "So what if the outside world had bad things to say and everyone was against you, Its my duty to stand by you no matter what." she said softly wiping his tears, "there is nothing nor anyone that can shake that trust, faith,love i have in you Virenji, even if God came himself and told me you were wrong i won't believe him, i rather die than suspect you Virenji" she calmly said as tears uncontrollablely flow from her eyes.
Viren's heart wrienched as the words came out her mouth "I rather die" he placed his hand over her mouth "Jeevika... don't ever say that again if you die hwo will i live? without you life has no meaning i might be off better dead than live a life without you" he cried out making jeevika placed her hand over his mouth as well. They both embraced eachother in a tight hug.
As viren came out the shower he saw Jeevika walking in with food the same time. A hint of smile lite on his face, he embraced this moment to be back home. Just as they sat to eat in their room Viren's mom entered. "Ma..." he said with a smile on face as he got up to go hug her but then he stopped as he remembered what Anwar had told him.
Jeevika seeing this was confused as to why his sudden change of emotions. His mom walked up to him with a hint of a smile her face placing her hand on his cheek " Viren thank god you're back home beta, the house was so slient and sadden without you" she told him viren upset removed her hand and walked towards the bed, Jeevika placed a comforting hand on his mom as she spoke to him. "Virenji please don't be upset with Ma.. she didn't think like the others, accutally Ma was my support when i broke down and gave me the courage to fight this case. Viren Ma not once doubted you" She reassure him. Viren couldn't hold himself again he ran and hugged his mom and just cired his heart out. Jeevika was happy andhad tears in her eyes as she adored the mother-son bonding.

As both jeevika and viren sat and eat dinner, they fed eachother lovingly. Virat and Manvi looking at this from outside the room knocked and entered. Jeevika's expression changed and she was annoyed now, Viren was shocked and annoyed as well but he knew how to keep cool. As they walked in Viren got up and stood infront of them. "Bhai.." "Jiju..." was all they could muster out to say. Placing his hands up to stop them "You guys came to apologize right?" he asked "Or to see if I'm doing ok?, Or you came to see how a cheater gets out of jail and is with his wife?" he asked sacarsticly.
Virat and Manvi was shocked and had tears in their eyes, Jeevika more annoyed now just wanted them out her sight. "Bhai what are you saying?" Virat asked."Oh please Virat don't need to get emotional I don't believe you guys suspected me! ME VIRAT!" he exclaimed, "You believed her! your wife! i dont believe you Virat your own blood your own brother you know me more longer than Manvi and Jeevika yet still you belived your wife and suspected your own brother?!" he said more angrily " Jeevika trust love faith in me brought me out today She doesn't know me well yet but being a wife she stood by me even if i was wrong or right Virat,, but you how could you believe that could murder someone, further more to betray Jeevika? when you were the one that knows jeevika is my life without her i better of dead" he cried out shocking everyone in the room.
Virat and Manvi unable to control their tears pleaded to forgive them. "Bhai please forgive us" the pleaded " fine i can forgive you both cause i'm blined like you 2, you guys can hurt me break me whatever and i will always forgive you.. but i will never forgive you 2 for the pain, and tears and broken trust you both have cause my wife,,Jeevika!" he eclaimed "I will never forgive you 2 for the tears you both brought to her eyes and the hurt, the shame you brought infront of her for suspecting me" he sternly told them

Jeevika shocked and lost for words just held Viren's hand as he told them to leave them alone. Virat and Manvi dishearten by Viren's words made them sadden even more. Jeevika just hugged her husband and cired. "Jeevika i will fight the whole world for your tears, cause they are very special to me, i own't tolorate anyone or anything that brings tears to your eyes and hurt you" he said wiping her tears and placing a kiss on her forehead...

Ok so will continue again hope you guys enjoyed it.

Edited by vbasdeo - 12 years ago

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow! Wow!
Again a piece of good writing!
Why did you stop?
I wanna read more!
Continue soon!!!

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vbasdeo

@vbasdeo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Charucrazy
Wow! Wow!
Again a piece of good writing!
Why did you stop?
I wanna read more!
Continue soon!!!

LOL theres a limit the message box could hold in writing 😆 and thank you !😃 i will continue soon maybe later on today have a meeting to attened today so maybe when i get back i will continue so stay tuned! 😃

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Neetu

@alonelove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Fab update
Loved virens dialogues at the end
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Madhu

@MADHU.BARUN

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Wow such a fabulous update
Why did you stop,?
It was seriously awesome
Loved how virika stand for each other!
And loved how vireb scolded virman 👏
Superb...continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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Sameeha Anwar

@Sameeha.Tacker

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Bale bale!! Again u gave us an amazing update loved to see this side of viren. Ur story is amazing. I am in love with ur story. Plz lend me some of ur thinking powers and in return i wil give u a toffee. Hope u wil like it. Jokes aside the update was really amazing. Thanks for the pm and give us a long update soon.

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