Kisha OS: Rejection Part 2 pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zoyu i know...i am late...!!!
Bt will be waitin for this part 2 of urs!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: safi_kisha

Zoyu i know...i am late...!!!
Bt will be waitin for this part 2 of urs!!




sure...i didn't think of plot though...but...sochne mei zyada time nahi lagta!!!!!!😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thats good...coz i cnt wait for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS yaar.
I loved it to the core.
Kiya goes missing and stoneface is very concerned for her.😳
Kiya is in trouble and KD comes to her rescue.
And their confession was mind-blowing.
And their comes a twist n the story.
AnSha married OMG!!!😲.
Wonder what happened?.😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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zoyu🤗
again an awesome work from u👏
did i told u that i jst love the way u portray the emotions!! <3
i could feel kiya's pain and hurt :(
and KD's concern and anger and ofcourse love was so damn visible<3
zoyu i love u yaar 🤗
jst amazing , though i hate sad endings :(
but plz plz come back with a part 2 with a kisha happy ending <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wt the hell?! KD n Avantika?!! 😲
Gosh ur ending it without telling y kd married Avantika? Plz don't leave it at dat! :/
Really confusing... 😕
Bt 1 thing is not at all confusing- u r 1 awesum writter! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aahhh...on popular demand...i , the crazy writer...return with Part 2...😉😉 lol...


Krit125: Dear...im writing the RAHI os for you...you were the only one asking for it...and that one
would be dedicated to you...i will update that , probably by next saturday!!!!!!😉😉😉 Until then...


PART 2:




                                                  The wise are wise only because they love.                                                             The fool are fools ,                                                       only because they think                                                        they can understand love.


Kiya wrote and closed her personal diary.Will this feeling ever go...She was thinking about the concert she had today. And today , after 1 year , she saw KD. He looked more fitter and fine than he used to be. She closed her eyes and kept her head on the head rest of the chair. Images of her and KD swarm up in her eyes. She remembered how he was sitting , as a groom , her groom at the mandap and she never came.


Kiya wiped out the tears that fell from her cheeks to her notebook. She knew that now , nothing could be done. Avantika and KD are married since 1 year. "KD might be in love with by now...or maybe..." she thought as her heart started to see the light of hope , but who was she kidding. KD is a married guy. She didn't want to get tangled in his life anymore. Maybe that is why , even after 1 year, she didn't have to courage to stand in front of him , let alone talk to him. She got up and looked out of the window. The weather was awsome and cool , but if one doesn't feel good from inside , how will she feel the goodness of the outside?


As Kiya was looking at her school album , she heard the doorbell ring. She quickly kept the album on the sofa and went to see the visitor. It was none other than Piddhi. She opened the door and smiled brightly , but somehow , it just didn't meet her eyes. Piddhi sighed. Its been 1 year since that tragedy ,  but still it feels as if it happened yesterday. "Piddhi...andar ao na..!!!" Kiya exclaimed softly and he entered. As he was about to sit on the sofa , his eyes fell on the album. "I know you still miss him..." piddhi sighed. Kiya smiled sadly. "Yaa...i do...i miss him a lot...but that doesn't mean that my life will stop right?!" she exclaimed. "But...but why...?? why did you do it...why did your destiny let you do it..." piddhi cried.


Kiya felt bad for piddhi. Piddhi was the only one among all the buddies , who still was in contact with her. Even ranveer broke their friendship after her shameful , disgusting act. She sat beside piddhi and gave him a side hug. "Its ok piddhi...sshh...stop crying...i'll bring some thing to eat for you..." she said , as she was trying to cheer him up. Piddhi nodded and yiped away his tears. As she went to the kitchen , piddhi took the album and was about to keep on the table when he noticed Kiya's personal diary. Though it was personal , piddhi had full access to it. He opened the last page where kiya was writing.



                                          Just because you love someone,
                               doesn't mean you have to be involved with them.
                                       Love is not a bandage to cover wounds.






Piddhi's eyes welled up. "She is going through so much...but still she doesn't utter a word...and KD bhai is healing...avantika has healed almost all the wounds injected by kiya..." he thought as he looked up at kiya , who was busy in the kitchen. "Acha sun...mere yahan aane ki vajah toh tera hal chal puchne ka tha...par ek aur kaaran bhi hain!!!" piddhi exclaimed , as entered the kitchen ,and sat on the counter. "Boliye...aap ki kya khatir daari karun???" kiya smiled. Piddhi pressed his lips into a thin line. "This is gonna be very akward for you but i have to tell you..." Piddhi thought. "Woh...umm...woh..." piddhi stammered. Kiya looked up at him..."Bolo piddhi..." she whispered.


"Woh...umm...KD bhai ka aaj marriage anniversary ka party hain...so i would like it...if you come..." he whispered. The words were like daggers to her heart. But she retained her cool and smiled. "No piddhi...i can't come...you know naa...i have a recording..." she lied. But piddhi could catch it instantly. "Fine...if you don't come...then i will also not go..." he decided. Kiya was shocked to hear this. "What...why...piddhi!!!!" she exclaimed. "Please piddhi...you do know that i can't face him...especially after what i did..." she sighed. "But atleast you could go and talk to him..." piddhi whispered. Kiya sighed and resumed her work in the kitchen. After sometime , she looked at piddhi and asked him "Acha piddhi...does Keshav hates me...". She didn't know why she couldn't bring herself to call him KD anymore. Keshav. The word itself spoke about his nature under that 'KD' shield.


"I don't know...because he never to me or anybody about you..." he sighed deeply. Kiya looked down and then back at piddhi. "ok fine...i will be there..." she exclaimed. She saw how piddhi's face lit up and he jumped down , from the counter and hugged her tightly. "Thanks kiya...thanks for coming..." he thought. Kiya smiled. Its been 1 year , since he had met all the buddies. And today , she will be meeting them. The thought itself was making her nervous. "Be ready...i'll pick you up ok?!" piddhi exclaimed and went away.


As she got ready for the party. As she entered the venue , she saw that hallway was decorated with beautiful lights and white orchids. That's when she spotted ranveer. "Yaa...yaa ok...bring the flowers and put them carefully on the stairs...yes...sab kush sahi se karna..." he warned the workers and soon bumped into kiya. "Tum...tum yahan kya kaar rahi ho???" ranveer lashed on her. "Woh...um...main..." she stuttered. "maine bulaya hain usse..." she saw panchi entering. She was looking beautiful in her dress. "What...??? why moti...do you even know how KD will react..." ranveer yelled. But before panchi could explain , ranveer glared at her and went away. "Im sorry panchi...i shoudn't have come..." kiya exclaimed.


"Toh phir ayi kyun???" she saw bobby asking her. Kiya looked down. "Piddhi requested me...that's.." before she could finish , she felt a familiar feeling. It was the feeling which she thought she would never feel. The softness of the air and the mesmerizing effect it has on her. "Keshav" he heart sighed. She turned around and looked him. He was talking to avantika as the descended the stairs. KD was laughing and avantika was making faces at him. He had grabbed her by the waist and then he looked at intendly. Kiya was watching all this.


"KD...bohot maaza a raha hain na tumhe..." avantika blushed. KD grinned. "Yaa...ofcourse avantu...i love to pull your leg and you know that right!!!!" he winked at her , making her laugh. Ranveer came up to kiya. "Thank God , he is ok...varna...anybody would have committed suicide if they were in his place..." he exclaimed. As the couple descended the stairs , they met the buddies. KD was shocked to see kiya. 'Ms. Gujral...nice to meet you after a long time..." KD said and extended his hand , for a handshake. Kiya took his hands and shook it. "KD...bolo naa...what's my gift...???" avantika jumped. KD smiled. "maine kahan naa avantu...surprise hain...". Avantika pouted , which made KD blush a little.


After the cake was cut , it was time for gifts. "Me first..." KD and avantika exclaimed together. "Me first please..." KD whispered and avantika agreed. He blindfolded her. "Ok...ranveer , bring her gift here..." as he said , ranveer went up and brought Avi front of her. When KD opened her blindfold , she saw her brother. "OH MY GOD...KD how did you know that i was missing my bro so much..." she exclaimed. "Well...you always mumble something or the other in your sleep...so..." he exclaimed and got hugged by avantika. He smiled. "And what's my gift??" KD asked. Avantika smiled and went to bring a big board. It was covered with a satin cloth and she took KD near it. "KD remove the cloth..." she whispered.
 
 
 
 
 
KD did as told. He removed the cloth and saw a huge picture of his own family. Tears formed in his eyes. He blinked away his tears and hugged avantika. "Oh avantu...this is the best gift anyone could give me..." he whispered. And avantika sighed a relief that KD liked it. She was initiallly a bit hesitant about it , as KD's father passed away 6 months ago. But somehow , she felt that this was the only gift , she could give to KD. As he had everything. After all , he was a business tycoon , right?
 
 
 
 
 
 
As the party continued , KD went upstairs , near the balcony to get some fresh air. "KD!!!" he heard a whisper. He turned around to see Kiya standing in front of him. "Kiya...you shouldn't be here , go downstairs and enjoy the party..." he said calmly. "Your not angry that i came to your party..." she asked. KD nodded. "Kehsav..." she kept her hands on his shoulders but he moved away. "No kiya...only avantu has the right to call me keshav..." he whispered while looking into her eyes. "Oh!!" was she could only manage. "Kesh...i mean KD...whatever happened 1 year ago..." "was your fault..." he completed. "Kiya...mandap se tum bhagi thi...my dad had face a lot of humiliation because of that...but im glad that avantu stepped in and saved my dad from more humiliated..." he whispered.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"When did you get married...to her..." she asked. "Our timing was 4:30.p.m...you left at 3...i waited for you till midnight...and till 5:43.a.m the next morning...we were married..." he said , as a matter of factly. "KD...i had a problem...that's why i had to go..." she cried. "Yaa right...it took you 1 month to solve the problem right??" he asked. Kiya remembered , how she barged into his house after one month of that fiasco and saw avantika , in sindoor and mangalsutra. And that's when she understood everything. "Your problem...was your untimely...or maybe i should say timely concert..." he said. KD looked at kiya. "Kiya...im happy with avantu...she has healed me a lot...i didn't even understand , when she entered my heart and took a part of it with her. She was very patient with me from the beginning and never pushed me to the limits..." he said and smiled. "im not angry at you kiya...im just tired and avantu...she helped me...she made me believe in myself...today im a successful bussinessman just because of her faith in me..." he concluded.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Avantu???" kiya asked. "Yaa...i call her avantu..." he said and continued. "I took a lot of time to accept her...but now...im happy...im happy with her...because i feel happy with her and..." he stopped , when he heard the sound of her payal. He saw avantika entering the room with a smile. "Hi guys...umm sorry actually Kiya...piddhi is looking for you..." she said , apologetically. "Yaa...i guess i should get going then..." she whispered and looked at KD , who looked back her. As she about to go , she heard him say "All the best in life Kiya...". She didn't turn back , as she knew , her defenses would break if she looks at him now. She ran out of the room. Avantika was confused by her behaviour and looked at KD. He sighed and smiled.
 
 
 
 
 
                                           May you have love that never ends,
                                            lots of money and lots of friends.
                                            Health be yours, whatever you do
                                      and may God send many blessings to you.
 
 
 
 
ok...here's the end of the story...it was not possible for me to give a happy ending...becoz u can see that AnSha are married...hope you would like it and comment...😭😭
Edited by arshifan2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
sry yaar...ill pakka ill cumment tomm
and thanks a lot for the rahi os
no prob...update by next sat
and call me kriti

unres:
OMG, zoya , it was lovely
u r a born writer
it was sooo good
love piya bond
but y kiya left kd at the last moment???
but still loved ansha too
i just loved it evn thogh kisha werent togetha
kiya's love for kd ...
u just rock
continue writin more and more and more

Edited by krit125 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: krit125

res
sry yaar...ill pakka ill cumment tomm
and thanks a lot for the rahi os
no prob...update by next sat
and call me kriti




no probs kriti...😃😃
hope you liked it...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Zoyu...
y did Kiya leave KD?? confused?
Kya hua tha?
but overall a surprising Ending to it...!!
AnSha i have always found them cute...!!
and they end up togther...although i wont want that in TBP!!
this OS is perfectly penned down..!!
and i must say...i did like it even though it had a sad ending as KiSha didnt end up toghter!!
love
safrens

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