ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 103

congrats load for this magnificent piece of wriiting! its like a piece of art!

loved the way u changed the characters! it was very nice seeing arnav the easy going one who is enjoying life and the work driven khushi who was scared of love and commitment! but it took arnav a mere few hours to change her perspective!

wow the song u chose for arnav to play suited them perfectly and it was kinda of romantic:)

u girls totally deserve a round of applause! it was just mind blowing!

 

SO SWEET

 

HE HAD RAN AWAY TO FIND PEACE N HAPPINESS

 

N AT LAST FOUND HER

 

SHE NEEDED SOMEONE WHO CLD MAKE HER FEEL AGAIN N SHE FOUND HIM

and loved the rain. 

 So many scenes, so many dialogue you incorporated in this story with the show.

 Of course the rain hug, definitely in better version.

Their trip reminded me so many sequences of the nainital trip.

So many things are opposite here.

 Like in nainital Khushi ordered plenty of food, here Arnav did it.

 In nainital Arnav ordered only bottle of mineral water, here Khushi did the same. 

But the funny part is, in your story Khushi is more like Arnav and Arnav is more like Khuhsi.

  Khushi is laconic, she is diebetic, not romantic.

 But on the other hand Arnav is a jolly guy and mischievous like Khushi.

I liked artist and poet Arnav here. He seems really romantic and emotional.

You gave the final jolt in the mishri part. In the show Khushi added mishri in Arnav's car, here Arnav did it.In IPK Khushi did it for La and in your story Arnav did it for himself. But i must say what a master plan he made to get Khushi!

Love at first sight then kiss on the first date,not a date, don't know what should I call this, just amazing.

and your writing is brilliant as usual.

loved the pic of napa valley. wish to go there sometime.