TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 66

sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

WOW!! story is getting more & more interesting...😃

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ParusDivs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

lovely Update 😊 Please continue soon 😳

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ParusDivs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#653

Thanks For the PM 😳

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Nishaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#654

WOW Gargi... I loved the update. So Shaurya aka Uday is finally returning to Manyata...thats GREAT. (I hope he comes and slaughters that stupid Akshit, how dare that fellow dream of marrying Manyata??)

And i am getting mad on DS.."kabab me haddi kahi ki"

Why don't she get married to that Akshit...lolz.

Now jokes apart and seriously I loved the update. Its getting damn exciting..please continue as soon as possible. Will be waiting Gargi.

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kritika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

wat a update maza aa gaya ... gargi now ab mujhe ab ye dekhna hai aa ge kya hone wala hai chandralekha ki love story khatam nhi ho rhi or manyta ki love story shuru nhi ho rhi sari love storys is story mai aake atki hai now who the hell is yakshit ? iski tho mai yha story complete nhi ho rhi or ye thodne ki baat kar rha hai ab jaldi se manyta ko ptha chl jaye hua kya tha fir tho maza aa jayega haa nhi tho ... great job love it 👏 Edited by -Kritika- - 10 years ago

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977457

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

👏👏.👏👏.super duper update but please next time long update dena ...

U know what maine last week tumhari stories read ki aor dono hi books 1 din mai khatam kardie... your concepts are MIND BLOWING... keep writing.. update soon 👍🏼

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rockstar4eva55

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Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Super Duper Awesome update!👏🥱

Can't wait to read what happens next!😆

Bravo Gargi! :D And could you please update the remaining 2 chapters of "A Beautiful Deception" ?

Anyways,Thankyou very much for the pm and continue soon!!!😃

Lots of love <3

Alisha

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andy.a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#658

hi gargi!
How r u?
Loved the update so much!
The starting part where chand cmes to visit shaurya, the love she had for her swami was so well explained.
Manyata voiced her opinion of uday announcing their relation to her father, then why did she agree to the swayamvar. Did i miss anything?

I thought akshit was just a resemblence of shaurya's brother. But he too has reborn, why? Because his LUST for manyata hasnt ended? God! He is creepy, i tell u!

Aw uday wants to be bk to manyata to explain to her truth na. But would he be able to do it? I think, some misunderstandment is bound to take place bw manveer

now we get a better understanding abt the swayamvar scene na
shaurya just wants his princess. But something about him is screaming evil.
Shaurya looks like he have sme hidden agenda.
Maybe am wrong!
Any way great update gargi.
Bw i could nt read ur parud ss yet as am very busy with studies. Will read it in the weekend!
Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon!

Edited by andy.a - 10 years ago

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