My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5

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This is MY MG OS collections...
 
INDEX
 
New OS for Anniversary ...Yaadhein...
 
posted my Character Of The Week Thread OSs...for those who missed them...
 
 
 
Mystery Behind Mishty... pt 1 on pg 19
 
pt 2 on pg 20
 
pt -3 on pg 21
 
Raavan last pt on pg 17
 
Raavan part 2 on pg 15
 
 
 
new OS RAAVAN...posted on pg 14
 
 
 
 
mere papa on pg 13
 
Here's my OS for the Maneet Magazine...posting here for Ur responses...😉    
 
OS 1
 
Ajab Prem Ki Gajab Kahaani...on PG 1
 
OS 2
 
Next OS for 2nd monthly
Behne De Mujhe Behne De posted on pg 3...
 
behne de Mujhe Behne de continued on pg 3
 
  
behne De pt 3
 
Behne De ...concluded...
 
OS 3
 
New OS - Laga Chunri Mein Daag... on pg 5
its different...jaise maggi hot & sweet...😉
woh wala hot nahi...😳
waiting ofr your responses...
 
 
Laga Chunri mein Daaag... part -2 on pg 6
 
 
laga Chunri...patr 3 on Pg 8 
 
concluding part...on pg 9
 
 
 
this is my OS for OS competition...posting here for those who missed it...
 
new OS Ranjhnaa on pg 11
 
 
new OS - Mere Papa
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maaneeet moments were fab
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                                  Ajab Prem Ki Gajab Kahaani
 
 
          Geet Handa comes to Delhi in search of a job. As we know she stays with Pinky and pinky is working at KC.
          Once Geet goes to meet Pinky at KC. Geet is waiting for the lift. Meanwhile she calls Pinky,
          "hare Pinky, mein aagayi hoon, tum kahan ho?"
She is busy chatting, lift arrives and the door opens.
Geet enters still talking without noticing Maan Singh Khurana coming out.
She collides on him and mistakes him for that,
          "andhe ho kya?"
Maan Singh Khurana ko ussne andha kaha toh MSK gets angry,
But she doesn't care and carries on with her gaallies.
          "dikhayi nahi detha ki koi samne hai?
           Itna bhi kya jaldhi hai? "
Maan is really in a hurry and he just pushes her off and walks away followed by his guards.
          "itna akkad? "
Geet feels insulted as he left without bothering her words.
Geet keeps staring at him till he leaves and she too leaves still continuing her gaallies.
At the reception, Pinky is happy to see Geet,
          "Geeet!  tu aagayi?"
Geet is very angry,
          " Pinky ye tere office mein kaise kaise log kaam karte hai?"
Pinky blinks, hare issko kya hua?
          " Geet, itna gussa?"
          "patha nahi yahan aathe hi mera mood karab ho gaya, chalo, hum jaldhi chalte hai"
          "haan chalo, DD bhi nahi hai"
          "kaun?"
          "hare, Maan sir, hummare boss"
          "mujhe laga tum uss Dust Danav ki baat kar rahi ho"
          "nahi re, DD matlab Dhak Dhak, tumne mila nahi unko?"
          "nahi, ek DD se milthe hi mera ye haal hogaya, ab ek aur nahi"
Adi comes,
          "ha ha ha'..", Adi laughs seeing her,
Geet is puzzled,
          "Pinky, tummare office mein sab ajeeb kyun lagthe hai?"
          "ye, ye Adi sir hai"
          "I'm Adi, KC ke accountant, aap?"
          "Adi sir, ye Geet hai, aapko maloom haina? Woh Hoshiarpur wali friend"
          "oohh..' Geet, nice meeting you"
          "aap Pinky ke friend ho?"
          "haan"
          "matlab mere bhi friend ho"
Geet shakes hands'..
          "Geet chalo, mujhe bhook lagi hai"
Adi laughs,
          "haan it's snacking time for Pinky"
          "ye toh har waqt khathe rehthi hai"
          "phir milthe hai Geet"
          "bye Adi sir"
Geet smiles and leaves with Pinky.
Next week,
Geet wants to do a little shopping, but Pinky doesn't have time.
She tries hard to get a day off but MSK ka patha haina, har waqt bas kaam kaam kaam aur no chuti.
Uncleji decides to accompany Geet to the mall.
At the mall,
Geet is surprised seeing the huge mall, she wonders how could one afford all those expensive goods, Geet has got very little money left with her which she uses to get some gifts for Pinky and her papa(uncleji)
          "puthar, isski kya zaroori hai, tum apne liye kuch lo"
          "nahi uncleji aap ye kurtha lijiye"
          "lekhin bte"
          "mein bhi pinky ki tarah aapki beti hi hoona?"
Now uncle couldn't resist.
After shopping Geet asks uncleji to wait at the entrance while she is off to get some chaat for Pinky.
Uncle waits when Maan arrives to meet a client nearby.
Maan steps out of the car and finds a little girl trying to step on the road while her mother is talking on the mobile.
He rushes to stop her and in that hurry he hits uncleji and uncleji's specs drops and breaks.
Geet watches Maan from behind and she is off in a flash to help uncleji.
          "bakthameez gayinka, bhuzurkon ka izzat nahi kartha, najaane kaise isske parivaar issko bardaast karthe"
Maan could hear her while he crosses her but has no time to react, he runs and saves the girl.
Geet helps uncleji and doesn't see Maan helping that child.
When she turns back and looks at him, Maan is scolding the mother for her carelessness.
As usual Geet couldn't keep silent watching him misbehave(?) with a woman.
She goes to help that poor(!) woman,
          "hare tum?" Geet remembers him very well'..
Maan instantly regognises her'..he turns the other side'.
He doesn't want any kind of drama''.
Geet aasaani se chodnewali nahi hai''
          "mujhe pehle hi patha tha ki tum ek no ki kamine ho"
Maan turns back''..he is furious'..
 "kya kaha tumne?"
That women is scared''.
          "aap daro mat, ye toh aaise hi hothe hai, bahut batein karthe aur karthe kuch nahi"
That women takes this opportunity to escape'..
Galthi toh usska hi haina'.
          "thank you behenji, jo bhi ho, ek aurat ki madat toh dusre aurat hi karthi"
          "haan, aap fikar mat karo, mein hoona"
Adi comes and Maan leaves with him''
          "hare, ussko pakdo"
That women holds back Geet''
          "chodo behenji, humme aaise logon se dhoor hi rehna chahiye"
Geet gets really angry'..
          "haan, lekhin kissi na kissi din ye mere haath miltha toh mein ussko"
That Women tries to cool her 'she lifts her daughter'.
          "behenji, aapka bahut bahut shukriya,sweetie, aunty ko bye kaho"
          "aapki bachi hai? bahut cute hai"
          "haan, isskke papa intrezaar karthe honge, hum chalthe hai"
          "bye sweetie"
Uncleji bhi aagaye'..
          "kya hua bte?"
          "aaise logon ko toh jail mein dalne chahiye"
Uncleji tries  to calm her down,
          "beta, ye Delhi hai, yahan toh har tarah ke log rehthe hai, humme aaise logon se dhoor rehna chahiye"
          "lekhin uncleji, aapne dekha nahi? Humme kuch karna chahiye, warna ye log  humme kamzoor samjkke aur tang karenge"
          "chodo ye sab, Pinky hummare intrezaar kar rahi hogi"
          "hummare nahi, gol gappe ki intrezaar kar rahi hogi"
          "haan, chalo"
One evening,
Geet returns after giving an interview,
          "Geet beta, aapka interview kaise chala?"
Geet looks disappointed..
          "ye job bhi nahi mila"
Geet ka paise katam ho gaye hai, ab toh ussko job ki sakt zaroorat hai.
Papaji se kitne paise mangegi, aur Darji ne kaha ki ek mahine mein koi job nahi mila toh seedhe shadhi.
Geet is worried, she should find a job soon.
          "Geet beta, aap niraash mat ho, aapko zaroor naukri mil jayegi"
Uncle brings her tea.
Geet reminds him of his broken glasses and asks him to get ready so that they can get him a new one.
They go to see the eye specialist.
At the hospital'''
It's very crowded and they had to wait a long time before they could see the doctor.
When uncle's turn comes the sister stops him as some VIP has come.
Geet gets angry and argues with the sister that it's not fair as they had already waited for a long time.
It's Savithri Devi who had come and after seeing Geet arguing she asks uncleji to consult first and that she could wait.
Geet is pleased and she helps her find a seat and she stays with her while uncleji goes  to check his eyes.
          "bte aapka naam?"
          "Geet, Geet Handa"
          "aap kahan se hai?"
          "Hoshiarpur se"
          "Hoshiarpur? Hummare bhi wahan bahut jaane pehchaanwale hai"
          "aap Hoshiarpur aaye hai?"
          "nahi, hummare pothe ki koi nayi project wahan shuru honnewala hai"
          "woh kya karthe?"
          "contructions, tum kya kar rahi ho?"
          "mein? Mein abhi job doondh rahi hoon"
          "tum hummare office kyun nahi join karthe?"
          "kya?"
          "haan, Khurana Constructions"
          "Khurana Constructions? Pinky bhi wahi kaam karthi"
          "kaun?"
          "Pinky, meri saheli"
          "that's good, so you would love to work with her"
          "lekhin aap abhi abhi mujhe mille hai?"
          "I like U, U are so sweet, tum zaroor KC join karlo, ye lo mera card"
Dadi calls KC.
          "halo, Adi"
          "gud evening m'am"
          "is there any vacancies?"
          "yah m'am, Maan sir ki secretary ka post vacant hai, infact kal interview hai"
          "cancel the interview, secretary milgayi"
          "m'am?"
          "get the appointment order ready for Geet Handa"
          "Geet?"
          "yah, Pinky's friend"
          "I know m'am. Good choice"
Geet ko job milgaya.
          "thank you m'am"
          "toh tum kal hi join karlo"
          "teek hai m'am"
Uncleji bhi aajaathe,
          "uncleji, ye savithriji hai, KC ke malkin"
          "Namasthe ji"
          "namasthe"
          "aapki Geet bahut samajdhar hai, aur bahut pyaari bhi"
          "uncleji, m'am ne mujhe naukri diya hai, KC mein"
          "ye bahut achchi baat hai, shukriyaji"
          "she deserves it, no need to thank me"
          "teek hai m'am, ab hum chalthe hai"
Geet leaves'.
Maan comes to pick up Dadi'.
He inquires at the reception and Geet spots him,
Geet looks worried'..
          "hare babaji, ye meinne kya kardhi? Ye toh sach mein andha hai, issiliye ussdin bhi itne log usske peeche jaa rahe the aur issiliye ye hamesha kala chasma pehenthe hai"
Geet thinks that Maan is blind.
          "babaji mujhe maaf kardho, mujhse galthi ho gayi, mujhe unsse bhi maafi maangni chahiye, haina?"
She goes to apologize.
          "suniye"
Maan turns back'.ye ? phir se sunane aagayi?
Maan gets angry'..aaj toh mein issko chodoonga nahi, samajthi kya apne aapko?
          "woh , I'm sorry, mujhe maaf kardo"
          "what?"
          "mujhe patha nahi aap sach mein aaise ho?"
          "kaise?"
          "aao, mein aapki madat karthi hoon"
She holds his hand and tries to help'.
          "chodo mujhe"
          "hare mein aapki madat karthi hoon"
          "what nonsense? Tum? Meri madat?"
          "haan, aap andhe haina?"
          "kya?"
Maan takes off his glasses,
          "mein andha hoon? Tum andhi hogi"
Maan stares'.Geet looks into his eyes'
Mameet eyelock'Mahi'..
          "aap andhe nahi ho?"
          "nahi"
          "toh aap jaanpoochkke ladkiyon se takraathe ho?"
          "kya?"
          "haan, mein sab jaanthi hoon"
          "just shut up"
          "meinne dekha, ussdin bhi aap apne galthi ko chupane ke liye uss bechari ko daanta tha, haina?"
Maan closes her mouth'
          "chup'bilkul chup"
Uncleji aathe hai,
          "Geet beta, aap teek toh haina?"
Maan leaves her and goes to see dadi'.
Geet shock mein hai, ussko patha nahi kya ho raha hai'.
Ye Maan ki sparsh ussko bahut disturb kartha'.
          "Geeet"
          "haan uncleji, mein teek hoon, chaliye"
At the bus stop'.
Uncleji had left his purse at the hospital,
          "hare, ye meinne kaise bhoola?"
          "koi baat nahi uncleji, aap yahi raho, mein aapki purse ko lekeh aathi hoon"
          "lekhin Geet, tum akhele kaise jaoogi?"
          "yahi haina, mein abhi aathi hoon, aap fikar mat karo"
So saying Geet leaves'..
Geet just turns the corner and starts walking when some men start following her'.
There is no one else on that street'
Maan is on his way to KC as dadi had left for KM with the driver'.
Maan sees Geet on the road struggling to free herself from that rowdy's hold'.
Maan comes to help'..
After some punches and kicks those men run away'..
          "tum teek toh haina?"
          "haan"
          "chalo mein tumme ghar chodtha hoon"
          "nahi, uncleji wait karthe honge"
          "teek hai, aao mein tumme unkke paas chodtha hoon"
          "nahi, mujhe hospital jaana hai"
Maan loses his temper'..
          "ab tumme kahan jaana hai? pehle decide karlo"
          "aap jao, mein kudh chali jaaongi"
          "tum aaise nahi manoge"
Maan tries to force her '..
          "chalo mere saath"
          "chodo mujhe"
Geet starts walking fast'
Maan follows her walking behind her'..
Geet gets the purse and she looks at him waiting out for her'.
Now she too goes along with him to the bus stop'.
Uncleji thanks Maan'.
Maan too couldn't understand why he did that'.
Geet thinks about him all night and couldn't sleep well'.
She is late on the first day itself'.
          "Geet, tummare waje se mein bhi aaj late ho gayi"
          "hare Pinky, tu chal, mein aathi hoon"
          "lekhin tumme chodkke?"
          "mein kya bachi hoon, tum chal"
          "are you sure?"
          "haan, mein babaji se milkke hi aasakthi, aaj pehle din haina?"
          "teek hai, sambalkke"
          "haan, tum jao"
At KC'..
Geet rushes in the lift'.
She is already late by an hour'..
Maan is inside the lift'..
Geet takes long breaths as she had come running'.
Maan is surprised to see her there'.
          "tum?"
          "aap?"
          "phir se?"
          "babaji, ye mein kahan aagayi hoon?"
          "tumme kahan jaana hai?"
Geet tries to stop the lift'she crazily hits all the buttons'
Maan hold her hand and stops her'.
          "pagal ho gayi ho kya?"
          "rokho isse"
          "kya?"
          "hare mujhe bahar jaana hai"
The lift had struck due to Geet's crazy hitting'.
Maan gets angry''
          "pagal ladhki, ye tumne kya kardiya?"
          "meinne kya kiya? Sab aapke wajhe se hi hua hai"
          "what?"
          "aapne kya kiya?"
          "tum kuch dher chup raho"
          "babaji, mein kahan fasgayi? Mujhe bachao'."
Geet starts shouting'.
          "bachao'koi hai? bachao'"
Maan is embarrassed'.what's she doing?
Maan corners her and closes her mouth '.
          "chup..'bilkul chup"
Maan calls Adi and Adi calls the lift operator to fix it'.
          "tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?"
          "mujhe yahan naukri milli hai"
          "kya? Tumme kissne naukri dhi?"
          "Savithri ji ne"
          "kab?"
          "kal"
          "kal? Toh tum kal hospital meinunko milli thi?"
Maan starts walking towards her'.
" mujhse dhoor hi raho, warna aapki naukri gayi, samje"
          "tum mujhe dhamki dethi ho?"
          "haan, mein savithri ji ko jaanthi hoon, ek call karoon toh aapki chutti"
          "tum mujhe yahan se nikhaaloge?"
Maan stares and gets closer'.
Geet is scared'..
          "mein abhi unko call karthi haaon, dekho"
Maan snatches her mobile'..
          "mera mobile"
Geet tries to get it back and falls over him'.
Maan holds her''Maneet eyelock'..Mahi'..
Lift operates and they get back to the real world from Maneet land'.
Maan goes to his cabin and calls Adi'.
          "Aadiii"
Maan is very angry'.
Adi rushes to his cabin'..
          "ye ho kya raha hai mere office mein?"
          "kaam sir?"
          "Adi"
"sorry sir"
"aajka interview?"
          "cancel ho gaya sir"
          "kya? Kyun?"
          "Dadi ka orders hai sir"
          "what?"
          "haan sir"
          "tumne mujhe bathaya kyun nahi?"
          "Dadi ne bathaya nahi?"
Dadi knows about Maan and that's why she kept quiet'.
Else Maan would have stopped her right there'.
          "Adi, ussko bejhdo"
          "kaun sir?"
          "Aaadiii"
          "sir, nayi employee? Geet?"
          "haan wahi"
Adi leaves'.
Geet goes to meet Pinky'.
          "Geet tumne itne dher kyun kardhi?"
          "hare woh Dust Danav phir se milgaya"
          "Geet, mazak chodo, Maan sir aagaye hai"
          "kaun Maan sir?"
           "Hare Maan sir ko nahi jaanthi?"
          "nahi toh"
          "Geet tum unkke secretary ho"
          "kya? Hare haan woh Maan sir, kahan hai?"
Adi comes''he is tensed'.
          "Pinky'.Pinky'."
          "Adi sir, kya hua?"
          "Maan sir bahut gusse mein hai"
          "Geet, tu toh gayi"
          "kya? Babaji ye mera pehli din hai, aap mere saath haina?"
Geet babaji ke madat lekhe Maan se milne jaathi'..
          "may I come in sir"
          "come in"
Geet peeps in thru the door'..
          "aap?"
Geet shuts the door and runs out'
Everyone is watching her'..
Maan comes out and calls her'..
          "Geeet"
          "ye mujhe kyun bhulathe hai?"
          "ms.Geet handa"
          "mein nahi"
Geet tries to run away'..
Maan chases and catches her'..
Maan takes her in ''
All the staff keep watching with their mouth open'.
Ye Maan sir hi haina?
Maan goes and sits in his chair'..
Geet stands there shivering''
          "toh tum hi meri secretary ho?"
          "nahi, mujhe patha nahi aap woh DD ho"
          "kya?"
          "mujhe laga aap Dust Danav ho, lekhin aap hi Dhak Dhak ho?"
          "kya bakwaas batein kar rahi ho?"
          "nahi, sachi, mujhe patha nahi aap hi Maan sir ho"
          "teek hai, daro mat"
          "mein kissi se nahi darthi"
Maan stares'..
Geet steps back'.
Maan calls Sasha and asks her to guide Geet''.
Maan doesn't disturb her as it's her first day and he gives her time to settle'
Next day'..
Maan calls Geet'.
          "gud morning sir"
Geet is very polite as she doesn't want to loose this job'
          "morning"
          "sir, aapne bhulaya?"
          "haan, Mr.khanna ko quotations ke barein mein inform karna hai"
          "teek hai sir"
So saying Geet leaves immediately'..she wants to show that she is very efficient and intelligent''
          "Geet"
She turns back'.
          "sir"
          "kahan jaa rahi ho?"
          "Mr.khanna ko bhulane"
          "kya?"
          "aap unko kuch bathana chahathe haina?"
          "tumme patha hai ki ye Mr.Khanna kaun hai?"
          "nahi sir, mein yahan kissi ko nahi jaanthi, mein nayi hoona?"
          "teek hai, pehle ek kaam karo, tum sab se milkke aao"
Maan calls Adi and asks him to introduce Geet to all the staff members'.
After an hour Geet comes back''
          "SIR"
          "Mr.Khanna se milli?"
          "nahi sir"
          "kyun?"
          "shayad woh aaj office nahi aaye?"
Maan wonders how could she be so stupid?
          "patha nahi ye ladhki kya kya karegi, kudh pagal hokke mujhe bhi pagal na banade!"
          "sir?"
          "Geeet, woh yahan kaise honge?"
          "kyun sir? Aapne unko naukri se nikhaaldhi?"
          "Geet ,woh yahan kaam nahi karthe"
          "woh mere tarah naye employee hai? aathe hi honge, mein jaakke dekhthi hoon"
          "Dadima, aapko ye pagal ladhki kahan se milli?"
          "sir aapne kuch kaha?"
          "nahi, pehle tum apne bak bak katam karlo"
          "woh mein kya keh rahi thi?"
Maan tries to help her, after all she is scared'..
          "Geet, Mr.Khanna hummare client hai, mujhe unko letter bhejna hai"
          "ab mein samaj gayi, aap letter bhejna chahathe hai"
Geet leaves and comes back with her notepad and pen'..
Maan starts dictating''
Geet tries hard to write but her pen is not working''
She doesn't know what to do'
She looks at Maan and she is lost in his style and looks'
She keeps staring him and admiring him'..
Maan has finished his diction and he asks her to repeat'.
Geet blinks''
          "ye pen''."
Maan couldn't take this anymore'.
          "what?"
          "aapke paas pen hai?"
Maan gives her a pen''.
          "sir"
          "ab kya?"
          "aap ek bar phir dictate kar sakthe hai kya?"
          "geeet, itne dher kya kar rahi thi?"
Maan stares''
          "sir woh 'pen'"
She is so scared '.she struggles to complete her sentence'.
          "pehle kyun nahi bathayi?"
          "aap itne achche dictate kar rahe the toh, aapko disturb kaise kar sakthi?"
          "tum sach mein boli ho ya boli hone ki natak kar rahi ho?"
          "sir, babaji ki kasam, mein bahut achchi hoon"
She tries to defend herself'..she gets closer to him & swears'..
Maan looks at her beautiful eyes and he just couldn't stop gazing them'.
          "Maan sir"
          "haan, likho"
Somehow she finishes her job successfully'.
Next day''
Maan calls her to his cabin'.
Geet comes so fast that she hits the chair and slips'..
Maan who is standing beside holds her'.
Maneet eyelock'.mahi'.
          "gud morning sir"
          "aaj kya problem hai?"
          "kuch nahi sir"
          "toh itne pareshaan kyun ho?"
          "MSK ki secretary banna itna aasaan thodi nahi"
          "kya?"
Maan gets angry'..
          "kuch nahi sir, aapke secretary hoona, toh aapke tarah perfect hona chahiye haina?"
          "toh shuru karein?"
Maan gets near her and looks at her'..
          "sir"
          "hatto"
Geet is standing on his way'.
Maan gets to his seat'.
          "ye lo"
          "kya hai sir?"
          "pen"
          "mere paas haina?"
          "tummare pen? Nahi, mein ek kaam ko do do baar nahi kar saktha"
          "ye aapka hi hai sir, kal aapne diya haina?"
          "teek hai likho"
After finishing''.
Geet is about to leave'..
          "Geet"
          "sir"
Geet had dropped her dupatta while she slipped and fell'..
Maan gets it and gives it to her''
Geet ko bahut sharam aatha''she grabs it and leaves'.
Maan starts liking her innocence and is smitten by her beauty'.
Geet too feels embarrassed when she comes in front of him'..
Both of them keep their feelings within themselves'.
 
Next week Maan's younger brother Vicky comes back from UK'.
Dadi is very happy and she arranges a party welcoming him'.
She asks all KC employees to make the arrangements'.
Party is at KM'..
Adi, Pinky, Manisha, Romeo, Sasha, Tahsa and Geet take charge'.
Maan has given Geet the responsibility of supervising the party'.
Geet takes this opportunity to impress Maan.
Pinky: Geet mein kya karoon?
Pinky asks munching potato chips'
Sasha: tum? Bas kahin dhoor kadhe hokke aaisa hi kathe raho
Tasha: silly girl, ye high class party hai, tum aur tummari behenji Geet , just stay away from this
Sasha: yeah, that's the best thing you can do
Geet gets angry hearing this,
" Maan sir ne ye kaam mujhe saubdhi, tum kaun hothe ho humme rokhnewali?"
Sasha couldn't believe what she heard,
"MK trusts you? Oh God, this is crazy"
Adi comes to call Geet,
" Geet, Maan sir tumme bhula rahe hai"
Maan is waiting in his room'.
Geet knocks'.
" andar aao"
Ye pehle bar ho raha hai ki kissi employee seva Nakul ke Maan ke kamre mein aa rahi hai'..
Geet looks around'.
"beito"
 "sir , aapne bhulaya?"
          "haan, tumne party ki theme decide karli"
Maan keeps looking at Geet and Geet feels uncomfortable sitting inside Maan's room'.
 "nahi sir"
Maan comes closer''.
" pehle tumme Vicky ke barein mein jaanna hoga"
 "haan sir, mein bhi wahi soch rahi thi"
"toh note karo"
Maan keeps staring'..Geet keeps looking down'.
Geet takes her pad and pencil'.
" Vicky ko purane ghanne pasand hai, so the theme may be retro"
 "yes sir, ye aapke chota bhai hi haina?"
Geet is confused kahin ye Maan ki bada bhai toh nahi jo purane zamaane ka hai
Maan gets a little annoyed at this question but keeps cool
" ussko Italian cuisine pasand hai, mujhe bhi"
" haan sir, pasta, aapko pasta pasand hai?"
" sweets, Indian pasand kartha, mein bhi"
 "Indian? Laddu ya Rasgulle?"
"donno aur kaju barfi, badam halwa bhi"
"sweet stall lagana hai kya?"
Maan stares'..Geet gets back to work'
          "kaunsa phool?"
"flowers , haan orchids"
 "aapko bhi wahi pasand haina?"
 "kya?"
 "sir aap donno ki pasand same hai, aap bas aapki pasand bathao"
 "teek hai, lighting dim hone chahiye"
"andhere mein kaise dikhayi dega ki aap kya khathe ho? "
"Geeet"
Geet pens down the list'
 "aur"
 "mujhe safed rang pasand hai, decorations ka backdrop white hona chjahiye"
"safed? Ye bhi koi rang hotha hai kya?"
"Geet, ye tummari shadhi nahi, hummari Vicky ki welcome party hai, samji"
 "aur kuch hai aapke pasand ke list mein"
 "aur haina,  tum"
Maan lets out his mind in a hurry'.
 "sir?"
 "mera matlab hai, tumne drinks kya order kiya hai?"
" fresh juice aur lassi"
" lassi? Aur hard drinks"
 "daru? Babaji ye meri galthi nahi hai, mujhe maaf kardo"
          " Geet ye daru nahi hai"
 "sir ghar ke party mein daru? Ye achcha idea nahi hai sir"
" tum mujhe sikaaogi ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat"
" sir aapko patha hai ki hummare Hoshiarpur mein kya hua?"
" what?, mujhe tummari Hoshiarpur ki kahaani nahi sunni"
" aaise hi ek shadhi mein hummare tali mamaji ne nashe mein kya kiya?"
" kya kiya?"
Maan gets interested in her story'.
" sir dulhan ke samne dulhe raja ko chumma dedi, ek do nahi sir, pure chowbeez"
" kya? Tummare Hoshiarpur ke log aaise honge, ye Delhi hai"
Maan couldn't believe it,
"sir aap Manisha ko bhool gaye ho, pehle hi woh nashe mein goomtha, agar kal Manisha ne aapko aaise kuch kardhiya toh?"
Maan thinks of Manisha kissing him''kitna bhura lagtha sochkke hi, agar sach mein hua toh? Maan gets scared'..
Geet Handa ne Maan singh khurana ko successfully daradhi'..
" nahi nahi, no kissing"
" sir?"
" mera matlab hai no drinks"
" teek hai sir, aap check karlo"
Geet gives the list to Maan''
"aur kuch?"
" nahi, tum jaa sakthi ho"
Geet gets up and steps towards the door'.
Maan stops her''he catches her hand '.
Geet turns back'.looks at him'.
 "sir?"
" Geet tum kuch bhool gayi ho"
Geet checks her dupatta'.woh bhi hai
 "nahi sir"
Maan shows the list'..
"hare, mein bhi na"
Geet  gets it & leaves'.
Everyone helps Geet and Geet is busy ordering food and drinks'.
Romeo helps Geet arrange the hall'
He lifts and arranges the furniture'.
          "Romeo, asise nahi, ussko yahan rakho"
          "yahan?"
          "haan, ye teek hai"
          "Geet, issko kya karein?"
          "issko bahar rakho"
          "Romeo, sambalkke"
Geet too helps him'..
Maan who comes to see the arrangements couldn't tolerate Romeo running around Geet, Maan is jealous'..
He calls Romeo'
          "Romeo'..Romeo"
          "yes sir"
          "tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
          "Geet ki madat kar raha hoon sir"
          "usski koi zaroorat nahi, tum abhi Noida wale sight pe jao, wahan koi problem hai"
          "lekhin sir, sab yahan hai"
          "tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?"
Romeo leaves disappointed'.
Geet comes in search of Romeo'..
          "Romeo'.ye kahan chala gaya?"
Geet wanders in the corridor ''.
Maan pulls her inside the room'.
"Romeo"
"Geet, tum asli romeo ko chodkke duplicate ke peeche kyun padi ho?"
"kya?"
"haan, tummara Romeo toh tummara samne hi hai"
"Romeo kahan hai?"
"meinne ussko bahar bhejdhi"
"kya? Ab mera madat kaun karega?"
"Adi, Manisha aur pandeyji haina?"
"lekhin woh sab Romeo jaise strong nahi hai"
"tumme kitna strong body chahiye?"
Maan strips off his shirt and shows his muscles'.
"ye kaafi haina?"
"magar?"
"abhi bhi yakheen nahi hotha?"
Suddenly Maan lifts her,
Geet looks into his eyes'.Maneet eyelock'Mahi'..
"Maan sir, chodo mujhe"
"Geet mein tummare madat kartha hoon, kaho, kya karoon?"
Maan gets closer and looks at her lips'.
"madat? Aap? Kaise madat?"
"koi bhi madat, tum kaho Geet, shuru karein?"
"babaji, ab mein kya karoon?"
"bathao Geet, mein tayaar hoon"
"nahi, Adi sir, haan Adi sir mere madat karenge, Adi sir'."
"Geet'.hare Geet, pagal ladhki, mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki kitne din aaise bhaagthi hai?"
Geet makes all the arrangements'.
Maan is happy with that'.
Next day'.Vicky comes'..
Geet welcomes him'.
He instantly likes her'..
" bro, who is this beauty?"
Maan ko bhi lagtha ki aaj Geet kuch zyada hi sundar lagthi'.
He keeps staring his mishty'.
Vicky is surprised to see Maan looking at a girl''.
          "bro, ab toh mujhe jaanna hi padega ki ye ladhki hai kaun?"
Maan replies,
"she's Geet handa, my secretary"
 "bro Ur so lucky"
Maan stares'..
 "aapki itni sundar secretary, what a waste?"
 "aathe hi shuru ho gaye ho?"
Party begins''
Geet Vicky ka khyaal rakhthi'.
She asks him to try all the dishes and serves him lassi too'..
          "what's this? Yogurt?"
          "lassi nahi jaanthe?"
          "lasssi? Very nice"
Maan keeps looking at Geet'.Vicky notices the changes in his big brother.
 "bro if U don't mind may I dance with this angel?"
Vicky asks Geet to dance'..
" want to dance?"
Geet looks at Maan'.Maan nods'
Geet dances with Vicky'.
Maan keeps looking at her and Geet too keeps an eye on him'
Maan feels jealous that Vicky has stolen his chance to dance with Geet'
Chalo koi baat nahi, aur bhi kitne party honge
Dadi is also happy to see vicky back'..
Vicky tells dadi about Geet,
          "Dadi aapka bakra tayaar ho gaya hai, aap balidhaan ka intrezaam kar sakthi hai, aapka intrezaar katam"
          "aap kay baat kar rahe hai bte?"
          "Dadi, bro shadhi ke liye tayaar ho gaye hai, wahan dekhiye"
Vicky shows Maan and Geet'..
          "Maan sir, sab teek haina"
          "haan, sab bahut achcha hai, aur tum bhi"
          "aapkke bhai ko pasand aaya haina?"
          "mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai"
          "sir, Dadima"
Geet  has noticed Dadi,
          "Dadima, aapne khana khaya?"
          "haan bte, bahut badiya hai, aapne sabko bahut achche se sambala, hummare party ko bhi aur hummare pothe ko bhi"
Geet ko kuch samaj nahi aaya.
          "thank you dadima"
Sasha is very upset to see Geet getting all the attention'
She mixes alcohol in Geet's  drink'.
Geet loses her senses'.she has almost gone mad'.
She goes and asks Maam to dance with her'.
" Maan sir, come on, let's dance, start music"
Geet Maan ko zabardasthi dance karwathi''.Maan had to dance'.
"bro, aap bhi?"
" Geet, ye sab kya hai?"
Maan tries to control her, he tries to dance and take her away from the crowd'
"Manisha"
Geet calls Manisha,
"haan baby"
Maan stares'..
Manisha escapes'..
"aap isse kyun darthe ho, bechari? Nahi bechara aapko kitna pyaar kartha hai"
" Geet, chup karo"
"ye kya hai? hamesha aaise hi chup'bilkul chup'..Kehkke mujhe chupathe ho, aaj mujhe baat karna hai, bahut sare baat"
Maan manages to take her to  the outhouse'.
He takes her to the bedroom and makes her sleep'..
 "Geet tum yahi sojao"
Geet catches his hand and asks him to stay'.
 "aap bhi yahi raho, mere paas"
Maan sits beside her'..
" teek hai , mein yahi hoon,tum sojao"
"Maan sir meinne aapki sare pasand ko jaanliya, aap Geet ke  pasand ko jaanna nahi chahoge?"
Geet starts behaving like a child'.
" haan, bathao Geet ko kya pasand hai?"
"pehle babaji, phir gol gappe, aur Pinky, Adi sir, aur Maan sir"
Maan ke naam lethe hi geet sharmathi'..
"Maan sir?"
"haan, wahi Mr.Maan Singh Khurana"
"kya?"
" yakheen nahi hotha? Geet  unko bahut chahathi hai,MSK ka gussa ussko bahut pasand hai, aur patha hai MSK Geet ke kitna khyaal rakhthe? aap nahi jaanthe,  DD bahut achche hai"
 "Geet?"
Maan is surprised to hear that'.he is very happy'..sach toh samne aa hi gaya'
Geet signals him to come closer'.
          "DD ka matlab jaanthe ho? Dust Danav, kissi ko bathana nahi"
She leans on his shoulder and keeps blabbering'.
Maan pats her and tries to calm her down'
Geet falls asleep on his shoulders'.
Maan lays her back on the bed'.
Pinky comes'..
" Geeet, tumme kya ho gaya?"
" ssshhh woh so agyi hai, tum ghar jao, Geet subhe aajayegi"
" lekhin sir"
" Geet ko kuch nahi hoga, tum jao, hum sab haina"
Pinky leaves'..
Next morning''Geet wakes up and finds herself at the OH'.
Geet: mein yahan kya kar arhi hoon?
Geet remembers last night's incident'.
" babaji ye meinne kya kardhi? Ab mein Maan sir ka samna kaise karoongi?"
Nakul comes with tea'..
Geet tells him that she is leaving and asks him to inform Maan'.
While she tries to leave without Maan's notice'..she comes across Maan'
Maan  is busy with his tai chi and Geet chup chupkke ussko gurthe rehthi'.
Maan had noticed her'.he quietly comes near her'.
He catches her hand and pulls her towards him'.
" Maan sir?"
Geet tries to run away'.Maan hold her back'..
 "kahan bhaag rahi ho?"
" sir, mujhe ghar jaana hai"
" Geet "
" sir office ke liye dher ho rahi hai, mujhe jaana hai"
" teek hai, office mein milthe hai"
Geet runs away'.
Vicky comes'.
" bro, babhi kya keh rahi thi?"
Maan stares'.
" bro aapne kamaal kardhi, aaise gur gurkhe hi babhi ko manaliya haina?"
" Vicky, tum aaj office aarahe haina?"
" nahi bro, mein kabab mein haddi kaise ban saktha?"
"Vicky?"
" just kidding, aaj mujhe Dadi ke saath appointment hai"
Maan smiles'.
" teek hai"
" bro aap hasthe bhi ho?"
"chal hatt"
That day Geet skips work saying that she is not well'.
But next day she had to go to KC and face Maan'.
Maan calls her to his cabin'.
Geet tries to avoid looking into his eyes and keeps looking down'.
" tum teek toh hona?"
" haan sir"
" tumme yaad hai uss raat tumne kya kaha?"
" nahi sir"
" yaad nahi hai"
" nahi sir"
" Geet mere aankhon mein dekhke bolo"
Geet looks at him'.
" toh tumme yaad nahi hai?"
" nahi"
Geet ko pasinna nikhaltha'.
Maan gets closer'.
Mein yaad dilatha hoon'.
" toh tumme kya kya pasand hai?"
" kuch nahi"
" kuch bhi nahi?"
"" nashe mein aksar log kuch bhi bolthe hai, uss baat pe barosa nahi karthe"
"nahi Geet, nashe mein hi log sach bolthe hai"
" kaunsa sach?"
" tum hi yaad karo, lekhin aaj shaam tak mujhe sare sachayi bathana chahiye"
" sir, aap kya baat kar rahe hai?"
" Geet, ye tum bhi jaanthi ho ki mein kya baat kar raha hoon"
"lekhin sir"
" tummare paas ab panch gante hai"
" sir?"
" you may leave now"
Maan keeps calling her every hour and reminds her that she has lost one more hour''.
" ye kya hai?"
" kya?"
"ye aap teek nahi kar rahe ho?"
" meinne kya kiya?"
" aap aaise har gante mujhe bhulake aaise kyun darra rahe ho?"
" kya? Mein daratha hoon?"
" haan"
" toh tumme itni pareshaani hai toh abhi maanlo ki tumne uss raat sab sach sach bathaya"
" nahi"
" toh teek hai, abhi bhi tummare paas do gante hai"
" mein nahi maanthi toh kya karoge?"
" tum dekhthe raho mein kya kartha hoon"
Geet is scared'.ye kya karenge?
Aaj bhi mujhe piladenge kya?
Maan calls her and asks her to get him black coffee'.
" Geet, coffee achchi hai"
" teek hai, mein jaaoon?"
"hare nahi, tum bhi kuch pilo"
" kya?"
"bloody marry?"
" aap mere mazak udathe ho?"
Maan smiles'.
"aap hasthe kyun ho?"
" babaji ab hasna bhi guna ho gaya kya?"
" ha ha ha itna bole bhi mat banao"
" Geet , ab maan bhi jao"
" nahi, mein kissi ko pasand nahi karthi"
" tum bahut kareeb aagayi ho, bas yaad karo kissko pasand karthi"
" kya?"
" haan, ye itna bhi mushkil nahi hai, mein madat kartha hoon"
" aap mere madat karoge? Itna madat kaafi nahi hai kya?"
Geet yahan aao, mere samne beito
" Maan sir, ye kya kar rahe ho?"
"ab bathao, mein kaun hoon?"
" aap? Maan sir ho"
" aur?"
" aur kya?"
" mein tummara kaun hoon?"
" boss"
" woh KC mein, kal KM mein tumne kya kaha?"
" yaad nahi"
Maan looks into her eyes'..
" Geet tum kitna bhi koshish karo, lekhin ye tummare aankhen kabhi joot nahi bolthe"
" toh kya bolthe hai?"
" wahi jo tum kehna chahathi ho aur keh nahi paayi ho"
" teek hai , ab aapne sun liya haina? Toh mein jaoon?"
" Geet rukho"
Geet chale jaathi
Next day..'Maan has got other plans'..
Maan calls Geet and gives her a ring'.
" ye kya hai?"
" ye hummare khandaani angooti hai, dadi ne diya hai, mere honnewali biwi ke liye"
Geet is overwhelmed'..
 "kya dekh rahi ho? Issko sambalkke rakho, shamko meri woh aayegi toh ussko ye ring pehenana hai, tab tak tum issko sambalkke rakho"
" kya?"
"haan"
Geet leaves in anger''
" meri woh, ye kaun hai?"
Geet is worried'..
Mein issko kya karoon? Geet looks at the ring and decides to wear it so that it's not lost'.
"Geet, ye kya hai?"
"ye Maan sir ka hai"
Tasha is excited'.
" solitaire, tumme kaise mila?
"ye Maan sir ne sambalkke rakhne ko kaha"
"toh tumne pehenli? Silly girl"
Manisha too joins the party,
"baby, it's so cute, mujhe dikhao"
Geet tries to take it off but it won't come'..
"hare Pinky,ye kya ho gaya?"
"Geet, kya hua?"
" Pinky, ye bahar nahi aa raha hai"
" lo, mein try karthi hoon"
" Pinky sambalkke"
" Geet soap try karo"
Geet goes and applies soap'
But it won't come even then'.
Geet is very scared''
Maan calls her'..
Geet hides the ring behind her back'..
" Geet kya chupa rahi ho?"
" kuch nahi, kuch bhi nahi?"
" ring safe haina?"
" haan"
Maan comes and grabs her hand'.
"dikhao"
Maan looks at the ring'..
"woh meinne socha yahi safe hai"
"koi baat nahi"
" lekhin Maan sir"
"kya baat hai?"
" ye ring mere haath mein fussgaya, nikhal nahi raha"
Geet tries to remove it'..
Maan stops her'.
          "lagtha hai ungli ko kaatna padega"
          "kya? Ring aapka hai, lekhin ungli toh meri hai"
          "par ye donno ko alag karna mushkil lagtha"
          "toh?"
          "mujhe kyun pooch rahi ho? Ye tummari responsibility hai"
          "teek hai, aap isski keemat bathao, mein dethi hoon"
          "Geet isski keemat ko jukhane ke liye tumme zindagi bar mere saath dena padega"
          "kya?"
Maan smiles'.
          "haan Geet"
          "ye itna mehenga hai?"
" ye ring toh apna jagah pohunchgaya"
"kya?"
"haan Geet,ye tera hi hai"
" sir?"
Maan gets closer and shuts her mouth'.
" ab tumme kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet"
"Maan  sir?"
" sir nahi, Maan kaho"
" nahi, Maan sir"
" Geet tum meri ho, sirf meri"
Geet bigal jaathi'.
she goes and hugs him''
Maneet passionate hug'mahi'.
Adi and party bahar kushi se nach rahe hai..'balle balle'. Maan sir aur Geet ka rishtha pacca ho gaya'..
Next day''Dadi comes to KC
Vicky ne hi bhulaya hai'.to fix Maneet wedding'..
" Maan, kahan hai hummari bahu?"
Maan calls Geet'.Geet comes'.
" toh ye hai hummari Maan ki dulhan, humne pehle ki faisla kar liya tha, lekhin humme patha nahi ki ye itna jaldhi hoga"
Geet sharmathi''
Aaj se KC mein sirf Mahi mahi hoga, haina babaji?

 Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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awesome OS dear...

OS Ajab Prem ki gazab kahaani

awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet has lost her memory...
but Maan made her fall in love with him again...
and she gets lost seeing him close to her...
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starting new MG FF - Pyaar Kiya Toh Darna Kya?
 
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                                                                BEHNE DE MUJHE BEHNE De………

 

Geet Handa college se wapas aarahi hai…..

Geet is very excited ki kal usske college mein Dancing competition hai…..

Geet aaj full on rehearsal karegi…..

Ranno ko toh Geet ne pehle hi warn kardiya ki aaj koi guests nahi….

Aur mr.Handa is going to be her judge….

Geet unkke suggestions lekhe corrections karegi….

Aaj Geet jaldhi hi college se nikalgayi….

Pinky ko chodkke akhele hi aagayi….

Bus se utharkke apne dress lene masterji ke paas jaathi….

Masterji as usual dher karthe hai…

Geet is very angry…..she is losing her rehearsal time…..

Handaji ne kaha ki woh lekhe aayenge, lekhin Geet ko patha hai ki Geet kudh nahi gayi toh kal ke liye dress tayaar nahi hogi…..

After a long wait Geet gets her dress……

She hops back to the bus stop……

But this time nature plays spoil sport….

It's getting darker and the clouds are getting ready to pour….

Usually Geet ko baarish pasand hai…

Lekhin aaj toh Geet babaji se dua karthi ki ye rain ko thode dher rokhe…..

Geet hears thunder striking and she is afraid of it…..

She looks around and takes shelter in a nearby building….

Aaspaas koi ghar ya shop bhi nahi hai……

Ye koi building under construction hai….

Kisska hoga….KC ka…..toh ye Maan Singh Khurana ka sight hai……

Geet is very carefull that her new dress is not spoiled ….

If it was another day she would have danced in the rain…..

But this time it's scary….it's a bit violent with strong winds and lightning…..

Geet uss building ke andar jaathi hai….ye toh abhi bhi puri nahi hui….

Therefore no electriciry….only a single light chal raha tha…

Par suddenly power shuts down and it's complete dark inside…..

Geet switches on her mobile and stands shivering in a corner…..

She could hear the violent storm and things are  blown away by it…..

She is afraid that she would get hurt and she shuts the entrance door….

She waits for the rain to stop and it slows down a bit….

The clouds clear and the moon shines……

There is an open space at the centre of the building and  she could see the sky clearing from there…

It's still drizzling but it's not scary anymore….

Geet looks up and finds that it's a four storey building and there is no sign of anyone in……

She cannot go outside until the power comes back….

It's still dark and Geet is afraid to step out……

Babaji ye kya ho gaya? mein kal kaise jeethoongi?

Mera competition ka kya hoga?

Geet is now worried about her competition…..

Ab tak toh ussko ghar jaake apne rehearsals shuru karne chahiye……

Lekhin lagtha hai ki ab yahan se jaana mushkil hai……

Kya karein? Geet ko ab thoda dhar lagtha…….

Aaise hi akele beitkke sochegi toh aur dar jayegi……

Geet has got a plan….

Why not practice for the competition here…..

Yahan toh koi nahi hai aur Geet ke mobile pe gaana bhi hai…..

Geet switches on the song and starts dancing in the rain…….

Aaise toh Geet thode dher apne dar ko baga sakthi….

Kyunki dar ke aage jeet hai? haina babaji?

Ab Geet sach mein apne iss katre ko bhool jaathi aur apne ghaane mein kho jaathi…..

Bhene De Mujhe Behne De……

Geet ko nahi patha ki koi ussko dekh raha hai…..

Haan koi Geet ko upar se dekh raha hai….aur kaun ho saktha?

Hummara Maan Singh Khurana hi hai…..

Maan has come to take a look at the work done at that sight…..

Jab Maan aaya tha sare workers kaam katham karkke chale gaye….

Sirf watchman tha……

Watchman ko bhi Maan ne kissi kaam ke liye bahar bhejdiya hai……

Just then it started to rain and as we know Maan hates rain ……..

So he had gone up to escape from the rain…….

As the rain started to slow down Maan looks down and finds someone there….

Maan ko lagtha hai ki watchman hoga….

But after a while Maan hears the song playing and takes a look again….

There he finds some angel dancing in the rain…..

Maan could hardly realise what's happening…..

He is just lost in the song and the dancing beauty…..

After the song ends Maan gets back to his senses and comes down to find who it is…..

Just then Geet plays the song again and starts dancing…..
 

Maan stops and admires her dance…….

Then he finds something strange…….ye mujhe kya ho gaya?

Maan Singh Khurana kab se baarish ko admire karne laga?

Maan is stretching his hands and feeling the rain…….

This is not that bad…..this is good……

Then he moves closer to that angel dancing in the rain……

Maan is not sure if it's his dream or real……

One thing is clear….ye MSK ka sapna nahi ho saktha…..

Kyunki Maan ke jeevan mein hi nahi sapne mein bhi koi bhi ladhki ki jagah nahi hai……..

So this must be real……

Ye kahan se aayi aur yahan mere building mein kya kar rahi hai?

Issko dekhkke toh nahi lagtha ki ye yahan kaam karnewali hai……

Aur aaspaas koi ghar bhi nahi hai toh ye kahan se aayi?

Seedhe aasmaan se aayi koi Pari hai kya?

Nahi nahi, aaise nahi ho saktha?

Maan moves closer and touches her…….

Geet is swirling and she hits him…..

Just then she hears the thunder striking and she hugs him tight…..

 
Maan bhi behgaya……
 

Maan looks at her face and is shocked …….

This is the same girl……

Maan takes another look….

Hare ye toh wahi hai…….

Maan recognizes her…..she had come to KC for some donation……

One week back……
 

Geet being the cultural secretary of their college is busy organizing this dance competition….

Actually this is for a noble cause to help the children suffering from malnutrition…..

That's why Geet is so much involved in this event ….

Koi aur function hotha toh Geet itna takleef nahi lethi….

Ussko sambalne ke liye aur bhi log hai……

Lekhin jaise bhi Geet ko uss bachon ki madat karna padega…..

Issilye toh Geet bhi iss competition mein participate kar rahi hai……

Jaise bhi iss competition ko jeethna hai……

Geet is busy selling tickets for the event…..

Someone tells her about MSK and gives her KC's address….

Next day Geet arrives at KC and she is being kept waiting for a long time before this MSK could come back from his meeting…..

Maan is already tired after a hefty schedule and Geet is equally annoyed and tired of waiting……

When the receptionist asks her to go and meet the MD, Geet just barges in without even bothering to knock….

Maan ka mood pehle hi karab hai toh usska gussa aur badjaatha……

Maan: knock karne ki courtesy bhi nahi hai, aajkal ki ladhkiyan toh

Geet: kya aajkal ki ladhkiyan? Mein toh subhe se intrezaar kar rahi thi, aaj ka din hi waste ho gaya, mujhe bhi aur kitna kaam hai, samje aap?

Maan didn't expect this……

Maan: mere paas tummare kahaani sunne ke liye waqt nahi hai, kaho kya chahiye?

Geet: mein bhi apne liye nahi aayi, bas iss masoom bachon ke liye aayi hoon, warna koi aap jaise Dust danav se madat kaise mangega?

Maan: ye bhi koi tareeka hai donation maangne ki?

Geet: hum koi inaam nahi maang rahe hai, ye dekho humne ek dance competition organize kiya hai, hum sirf usske tickets bhej rahe hai

Maan: toh tummare gang mein aur kitne log hai? tumme sharam nahi aathi aaise masoom bachon ke naam se chori karne ki

Maan just remembers the incident where Dadi was fooled by some college girl selling fake tickets…

Geet: kya? Aap samajthe kya apne aap ko? Aap ko paise nahi dena toh mujhe pehle hi bathathe, aaise intrezaar karwakke insult kyun karthe ho?

Maan: what? Tumme patha hai kit um kisse baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: haan haan, koi sadu kanjoos khurana se baat kar arhi hoon, lagtha hai aaise logon ko insult karna aapka shok hai

Maan: Adi….adiii,

Adi comes running…..

Adi: yes sir

Maan: kissne iss pagal ladhki ko andar bheja?

Adi: sir, she is xyz college student sir

Maan: student ? patha nahi aaise log padkke kya karenge?

Geet: Mr., this is non of your business

Maan: Adi, security ko bhulao

Geet: kya? Mein bbi dekhthi hoon ki mujhe kaun bahar nikhaaltha? Aap ko hummare students ka power nahi patha? Ek call karthi toh pura students aapke kC ke samne honge

Maan: mujhe damki dethi ho? MSK ko?

Geet: abhi dekho, mein kya kar sakthi?

Maan: Adi, ye sab kya hai?

Adi: Ms. Geet, aap ko koi galatfami ho gayi hai, aap please mere saath aayiye

Geet Adi ke saath jaathi….

Adi cools her down and pleads her to leave……..

Geet understands Adi's plight, aaise aadmi ke saath kaam karna toh kitna mushkil hoga?

Bechare  roz roz kaise uss DD ko sambalthe?

Waise Handaji bhi ab tak paanch call kar chukke hai, Geet ko ghar jaana hai….

She leaves but she could never forget that Dust danav…..

Back to the rainy day…..

Now Maan knows that she is not cheating……sach mein kal competition hai….

Geet too recognizes him……..

Geet: tum?

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? woh bhi aaise waqt pe?

Geet: mein yahan baarish se bachne ke liye aayi , lekhin tum yahan kaise?

Maan: ye mera sight hai

Geet: kya? Mujhe pehle hi patha chaltha toh mein yahan nahi aathi

Geet takes her bag and tries to leave….

But the door won't open……

Maan: kissne darwaza band kiya ?

Geet: kyun? Meinne hi band kiya tha

Maan: tumne aaisa kyun kiya?

Geet: mujhe bahut dar laga toh meinne band kardhi

Maan: ab hum bahar kaise jaayenge?

Geet: kyun? Tum darwaza nahi kol sakthe?

Geet takes a look at him and finds him strong enough…….

Maan: ye darwaza nahi kolega

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, issme koi problem hai, issiliye meinne watchman ko bheja tha issko teek karne ke liye aadmi ko lane

Geet: tummara sight haina? Aaisa hi hoga? Ab patha nahi ye roof kab mere uoar girega?

So saying Geet goes out and stands in the open space…..

It's pouring heavily…..

Maan catches hold of her and pulls her in….

Maan: pagal ho gayi ho kya?
 

Geet: chodo, chodo mujhe

Maan leaves her……

Geet: babaji, ab kya hoga? Mujhe iss DD se bachao, koi hai, bachao…bachao….

Maan gets hold of her and closes her mouth….

Maan: chup….bilkul chup…..

Geet looks into his eyes….Maneet eyelock…….

Geet looks at the mobile….it's 6 pm……

Geet usually iss waqt ghar wapas chake  jaathi…..

Geet: mere ghar mein sab pareshaan honge, mujhe jaana hai

Maan: jab tak koi aakke iss darwaze ko nahi kholtha hum bahar nahi jaa sakthe, aur mujhe nahi lagtha itne baarish mein koi aa saktha, tumme toh kal subha tak yahi rukhna padega

Geet: kya? Nahi, koi toh rashtha hoga

Geet climbs up the stairs and goes to the roof….ayhan se khoodkke koi bach nahi saktha…..

Ab kya hoga? Ek raat iss DD ke saath kaise? Nahi nahi, mujhe kuch karna padega….

Maan is still waiting down….ussko patha hai ki yahan se jaane ke koi aur rashtha nahi hai….

Maan kehtha toh ye zaroor nahi manegi, ab kudh check karthi toh koi problem nahi hoga, haina?

Geet wapas aathi…..

Maan: tummare gharwale ko inform kardho ki tum yahan ho

Geet: kaise kar sakthi?

Maan: kyun? Tummare paas mobile haina?

Geet: issme toh balance nahi hai

Maan: kya? Toh tum issko music sunnne ke liye isstemaal karthi? Stupid girl

Geet: tummare paas mobile hoga haina?

Maan: tummare papa ka no. kya hai?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: hare, unko bathana haina ki tum yahan ho

Geet apne papa ka no. bathathi…..

Maan calls Mr.Handa…..

Handaji: halo

Maan: tummare papa ka naam kya hai?

Geet: Mohinder Handa

Maan:  Mohinder ji hai?

Handaji: haan, bol raha hoon, aap kaun hai?

Maan: aapki beti aaj raat ghar nahi aasakthi

Handaji: kya?

Maan: haan, aapko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, woh mere saath hai, kal subha ghar aayegi

Aaise kehkke Maan phone khaattha….

Geet is shocked….aaise bhi koi baat kar saktha hai kya?

Geet: ye tumne kya kaha?

Geet pareshaan ho jaathi….

Handaji toh bahut pareshaan ho jaathe……

He calls back…..

Maan: halo

Handaji: halo, aap mere beti ko kuch nahi kijiye, mein aapko jitna paisa chahiye detha hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: papaji haina?

Maan: tere parivaar mein sab pagal hai kya? Tummare papa ko lagtha ki tumme meinne kidnap kardhi, waise tumme kaun kidnap karega? Ye toh kudh kushi karne ki barabar hai

Geet: snatches the phone…..

Geet: papaji, Geet bol rahi hoon

Handaji: puthar, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: haan papaji, mein bilkul teek hoon, mein aapki Geet Handa hoon, mujhe koi kuch nahi kar saktha

Handaji: achcha puthar abhi tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein yahan tailor ke paas aayi aur baarish mein rashtha band ho gaya, mein kissi building mein fusgayi

Handaji: toh putahr tumne khana toh khaliya haina?

Geet: nahi paapji,  issne toh mujhe kuch nayi khilaya

Maan: what? Tum kya meri mehmaan ho?

Geet: haan, ye tera hi jagah haina?

Maan: iss haalat mein issko khane ki padi hai?

Geet: papaji maa ne kya banaya?

Handaji: Gol gappe

Geet: Gol gappe? Maa ko bhi aaj hi banana tha

Handaji: koi baat nahi puthar kal aap ke liye banayegi

Geet: papaji mere phone ka recharge karwadijiye, woh kya haina? Kissi ki phone pe zyada baat nahi kar sakthi

Maan: teek kaha tumne

Maan gets back his mobile……

Maan: tummara no. kya hai?

Geet: tumme nahi batha sakthi

Maan stares…..

Geet tells her no…..

Geet's mobile beeps……

Maan has recharged her no……

Geet: ye kissne recharge kiya?

Maan: meinne hi kiya tha, ab tum mere mobile pe haath mat lagao

Geet: ye kya? 500 rupaye ka recharge?

Maan: kyun? Kam hai kya? Tum kitna bologe?

Geet: mein toh sirf 100 rupiye ki recharge karthi hoon

Geet searches her bag……

Geet: ye lo

Maan: kya hai?

Geet: mere paas abhi sirf 200 rupiye hai, bakhi kal dedungi

Maan: isski koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: mujhe tummare paiso ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Mr. Khanjoos khurana

Maan gets the money just to stop her bak bak……

Maan: leliya, ab toh apna muh band karo

Dadi calls…..

Maan: halo dadima

Dadi: Maan bete aap kahan ho?

Maan: mein sight pe hoon

Dadi: iss waqt aap wahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet snatches the phone…..

Geet: abhi dekho, tumne mere papa se kya kaha?

Dadi: halo

Geet: namasthe Dadima

Dadi is shocked to hear a girl's voice on Maan's phone……

Geet: aapkke potha aaj raat mere saath rahega, ghar nahi aayega

Tit for tat….

Geet: abhi dekhthi hoon ki kya hotha?

Maan: tummari itni himmat? Mere mobile wapas kardho

Tabhi Dadi calls back….

Geet attends the call……

Dadi: Maan bete, humme koi problem nahi hai , aap chahe toh do chaar din badh bhi aasakthe, lekhin wapas aathe waqt hummari bahu ko bhi zaroor saath layiye

Geet: kya? Lo tum hi baat karo

Geet gives the phone to Maan…..

Maan: Dadi, jaise aap soch rahe ho aaise koi baat nahi hai, mein toh yahan ek pagal ladhki ke saath fusgaya hoon

Geet: kya? Mujhe pagal kehthe ho? tum pagal ho aur tummare Dadi pagal hai

Maan: Dadi mein aapse kal aakke sab kuch bathatha hoon

Ab Geet apne bag se chocolates lekhe khathi…..

Iss Pinky ke bachi ke saath rehne mein yahi faida hai….

Sab ke bag mein kuch na kuch snacks chupakke rakhthi….

Geet: tumme chahiye?

Maan: nahi

Geet: mein paise nahi mangoongi, khalo

Maan takes one, he is also humgry…..

After dinner(?) Geet feels a little cold out there…..

Her dress is wet so she is shivering….

Geet ke paas usska naya dress hai….lekhin woh kal ke function ke liye hai…..

Maan looks at her shivering…..

Maan: tummare paas kapde haina? Tum badal lo

Maan starts to move from there……

Geet: nahi, ye mein nahi pehen sakthi, kal competition haina?

Maan: abhi tum change nahi karogi toh kal dance nahi kar payegi, samji

Geet: nahi, ye mein nahi pehen sakthi

Maan: toh ye loh, isse pehen lo

Maan takes off his shirt and gives her…..

Geet ko lagtha hai ki yahi teek  hai…..

 
Maan  dusre kamre mein chale jaatha…..
 

Maan ko neendh nahi aathi…..

He is still thinking about Geet….

Ab woh kya kar rahi hogi?

He sneaks out and goes to have a look at Geet….

Geet is fast asleep….

Maan wonders how could she sleep under such circumstances…..

Geet dance karthe karthe tak agyi toh sogayi….

Maan ke shirt pehenkke ek choti si abchi ki tarah Geet so rahi hai….

Maan thode dher Geet ko hi dekhthe rehtha….

He also gets back to his room and tries to sleep……

Next morning……

Maan ka alarm bachtha….it's 4'0 clock……

Maan wakes up and finds himself sleeping on the floor…..

Yahan mein kaise? Maan remembers Geet…..

He rushes to find whether everything is Ok…..

Geet is still asleep……

Maan calls the watchman and the workers come and open the door….

Watchman tries to enter ….

Maan remembers Geet wearing his shirt and sleeping….

Maan stops him from entering inside…..

He asks him not to allow anyone inside and goes to wake Geet….

Maan: Geet, uttoo, darwaza khul gaya, sare workers aagaye hai

Geet ye sunkke shock ho gayi…..apne dress ko dekhkke gabragayi….

Geet: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? chale jao

Maan: hare pareshaan honne ki koi baat nahi hai, tum aaram se change karkke aao, yahan koi nahi aayega

Koi nahi aayega? Lekhin Maan kaise aasaktha?

Geet: tum?

Maan just them realizes that he has to leave….he leaves in a hurry…..

Geet change karkke aathi….

Maan: tum aao mere saath, mein tumme ghar chodtha hoon

Sab Geet ko hi dekhthe hai…..

Maan gets angry and shouts…..

Maan: sab apne apne kaam karo

Everyone runs away…..

Geet: mein chale jaoongi

Maan: tumme mein utakke nahi jaanewala hoon, mere paas gadhi hai

Geet  Maan ke saath jaathi….

Maan drops her at home…..

Handaji is getting ready to come and take Geet….

Geet toh wapas aagayi….

Handaji: Geet, tum aagayi? Lekhin kaise?

Geet: mein isske saath aayi

Geet turns back and finds that Maan has left……

That evening……….

Dadi is getting ready…..

Maan: Dadi, aaj aapka kya program hai?

Dadi is always busy raising fund for her charity……

Dadi: aapko patha nahi? aaj xyz college mein dance competition hai, ye bhi hummare bachon ke liye hi kar rahe hai hum

Maan: Dadi chalo mein aapko drop kartha hoon

Dadi is surprised…..ek raat uss ladhki ke saath rehthe hi Maan itna badal gaya?

Zaroor uss ladhki ne koi jadu kiya hai……..

Maan drops Dadi at the college….

Dadi: Maan bete, aap bhi aayiye

Maan: nahi dadi, aap jayiye

Maan gets out and takes a look….his eyes are searching Geet….

Geet comes…….she looks pretty in her new attire……

She finds Maan gazing her…..
 

Geet: tum apne paison ke liye yahan tak aagaye ho? rukho mein abhi aathi

Geet Pinky ke paas jaakke paise lekhe aathi….Maan has left…..

Geet competiton jeet jaathi…..

Dadi is sitting on the stage…..

Maan calls….

Dadi: Maan bete aapko toh aaj yahan aana chahiye, uss lahdki ne kamaal ka dance kiya hai, usska naam kay ahi?

Dadi asks someone near…..

Maan: Geet handa

Dadi: hare, aapko kaise patha?

Maan: meinne toh kal hi usskke performance dekh liya hai

Dadi: toh yahi hai woh ladhki?

Maan: haan Dadi

Dadi: Maan bete aap jaldhi ghar aayiye, aapko aaj ek surprise dena chahathe hai hum, toh bete hum ghar pe milthe hai

Maan: teek hai Dadima

Dadi is very happy…..

After the function Dadi calls Geet…..

Geet has donated her prize money also for the charity….

Dadi: toh Geet aaj aap hummare saath hummare ghar pe dinner karenge

Geet: nahi m'am, mere parents mere liye intrezaar kar rahe hai

Dadi: toh unko bhi bhulayiye, aaj toh aap ke jeet ko celebrate karna hi padega

They go to KM…..

Geet is about to enter…..

Dadi: hare, rukhiye, aap pehle bar hummare ghar aarahe hai, Nakul

Nakul aarthi lekhe aatha….

Geet is confused……but when she finds Maan standing in the balcony staring at her she understands what's this Dadi upto…..

After aarthi Geet enters her sasuraal…..

Geet: papaji mein abhi aathi hoon

Geet climbs up the stairs to see Maan….

She knocks the door……

Maan is surprised to see Geet there…..

Maan: andar aao, tumme knock karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, waise tumme toh knock karne ki aadat nahi haina?

Geet: ye lo tummare paise

She gives him 300 rupees

Maan: tum ye paise lautanne aayi ho?

Geet: haan, tumme kya laga? Mein yahan tumse milne aayi hoon?

Maan: par 300 toh mein kal letha, aaj toh 300 se kaam nahi hoga, tumme interest bhi dena padega

Geet: kya? Ek din ka interest?

Maan: business man jo hoon, har deal mein kuch na kuch faida hona chahiye haina?

Geet: bataho kitna chahiye? 30 ya 50?

Maan: hare mujhe paise nahi chahiye

Geet: toh phir?

Maan gets closer……

Geet fatafat apne chumka nikhaalke Maan ko dethi…

Geet: ye lo, ye kaafi haina?

Maan toh kuch aur hi expect kar raha tha…..

Just then Dadi calls Geet…..

Geet: aathi hoon

Geet thrusts her earring on Maan's hand and leaves…..

Maan: Geet rukho, ye lekhe jao

Geet toh chali gayi…..

Maan Geet ke earring ko dekhkke Geet ke khayaalon mein kho jaatha…..

After dinner….

Geet is ready to leave….

Maan looks at them leaving…..he expects Geet come and say goodbye…….

Ranno finds Geet's chumka missing…..

Ranno: Geet, tummare chumka kahan hai? ek hi hai, dusra kahan hai?

Geet: hare maa, dance karthe waqt kahin girgaya hoga

Dadi: nahi Geet, humne abhi abhi dekha tha, aap pehle bar hummare ghar aaye hai aur apkka chumka kho gaya, ye toh abshagun hai

Dadi calls the servants and they all search the earring….

Maan : Geet, ye dekho,kahin ye tummara chumka toh nahi?

Dadi: shayad aapka chumka Maan ke kamre mein ghir gaya, aap jaakke lelo

Dadi winks…..

Geet upar jaathi….

Maan catches hold of her hand, pulls her in and closes the door…..

Maan: ye lo, isse hi dhoondh rahe haina?

Geet: lekhin ye toh tummara interest hai, tum hi rakhlo, isske badle mein kal tum kuch aur maangtha toh?

Maan: mujhe toh ye chumka nahi isske malkhin chahiye

Geet: kya?

Maan: mein issko apne paas rakh saktha, lekhin Dadima isskke bina tumme wapas nahi jaane denge, phir tumme kal raat ki tarah aaj bhi mere saath rukhna padega, mein toh tayaar hoon, tum mere saath mere kamre share kar sakthi ho

Geet: toh tummara ye plan hai?

Maan Geet ke paas aakke ussko chumka pehnatha…..mahiii…………..

It's rainy season and so it starts to rain now……
 

Thunder strikes….Maan pulls Geet towards him and hugs her tight…..

Maan: Geet, daro mat, mein hoon tere saath

Geet: hatto, mujhe koi dar nahi hai

Maan: kal toh bahut dar gayi thi

Geet: hare kal toh open space tha, yahan toh kuch nahi hoga, dekho

Geet goes and opens the window……

One more thunder strikes…..

Geet runs towards Maan and hugs him…….

Maan:  Geet, mujhe toh pehle baarish pasand hi nahi tha, lekhin ab toh mujhe baarish bahut pasand hai, aaise hi tum mere saath rahogi toh har mosam suhaana hotha…..

Maneet passionate hug…..mahiii…………….

Ab dadi ko apne bahu mil hi gayi……………….
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Behne de so dreamy wow kya one shot tha please iska continuation karo na.. Maaneet shaadi sr and geet expecting ye superhit story h

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                                                Behne De….continued….

 

Geet hugs Maan and Maneet passionate hug…..

Maneet lost in themselves…….

Geeet….Ranno calls……

Geet: chodo mujhe, mujhe jaana hai

Maan: toh jao, meinne  kahan pakda tumme?

Geet realizes that only she is hanging on to him still…..

She is shocked and pulls herself back……

She leaves immediately feeling shy and embarrassed….

Maan: Geet…..

She turns back, shivering….

She just can't wait anymore……this intimacy kills her…..

But she doesn't even know this man…..

He is still a stranger…….but why this strange feeling….

mann kyun itna bechain ho raha hai?….

Dil kyun yahi isske paas rukhna chahatha hai?…..

Maan : gud night
 

Geet doesn't reply….just runs off….

Maan smiles…..he knows her problem…..

He wants to give her some time…..

Let her find out herself…..

That night….

Geet gets into her night suit ….

As usual she goes to the mirror and starts removing her jewels….

When she looks at her earrings, she is drawn back to Maan's memories….

She is hit by the same feeling when Maan touched her to wear her chumkas….

Geet doesn't want to remove them as wants his warmth still lingering in her ears….

She feels shy and covers her face with her hands….

She couldn't stop smiling and she goes to sleep with the sweet memories of Maan….

Next morning….
 

Dadi: toh Maan bete,  kal ki meeting success haina? Aap kahe toh hum Geet ke mabaap se baat akrthe hai

Maan: nahi Dadi

Dadi: kya? toh aap ko ye ladhki bhi pasand nahi aayi?

Maan: Dadi, woh…mere baat nahi hai, Geet

Dadi: toh Geet aapko nahi chahathi?

Maan: Dadi, aap zara mere baat ko suniye

Dadi: hum kitne saal intrezaar kar sakthe? Humne toh faisla kardhiya hai, Geet hi hummari bahu hai, samje aap?

Maan: meinne kab mana kiya tha? Geet hi aap ki bahu banegi, kyunki woh meri hai, Maan ki Geet

Dadi: phir kya problem hai?

Maan: Dadi, Geet toh mujhe jaanthi bhi nahi hai, patha nahi ussko mera naam bhi yaad hoga ya nahi?

Dadi: what? Toh aap uss din Geet se nahi mille the?

Maan: haan Dadi

Dadi: phir? Aapne ussko apna naam bhi nahi batahya?

Maan: kaise bathatha? woh kahan mere baat ko sunthi?

Dadi: ye aap kya keh rahe hai bete?

Maan: Dadi, humme thoda waqt dijiye

Dadi: aur kitne waqt lagega? Lagtha hai ki humme hi kuch karna padega

Adi calls…..

Maan: haan Adi, mein bas nikhal raha hoon, bye Dadi

Maan phir apne kaam mein busy ho gaya?

Maan goes to the sight…..the same sight…..

MSK is always on the move……he is so fast that his staff always struggle to keep pace with him….

But today Maan stops after stepping in….

He is reminded of Geet….

He just keeps looking at the place where she danced….

He goes to the room where she stayed that night…..

His mind is occupied by her thoughts….

Adi follows him everywhere and is puzzled…..

Maan sir kya dhoondh rahe hai?

Adi: Sir, Mr.Sharma upar hai

Maan gets back to his senses….

Maan: mujhe patha hai, chalo

Maan finds it difficult to concentrate on his work….

Wherever he looks he finds Geet…smilimg …dancing….arguing….talking to her babaji….

Mr.Sharma: Mr.Khurana, what happened?
 

Maan: nothing, shall we continue in the evening? At my office?

Adi: but sir, aap hamesha sight pe hi discuss karthe haina?

Maan: Adiii do as I said, Mr.Sharma, I'm sorry, mujhe koi zaroori kaam hai

Adi: par sir, aaj ka aapki aakhri program yahi hai

Maan:Adiii

Mr.Sharma: no problem Mr.Khurana, hum shamko milthe hai

Maan: At KC

Mr.Sharma: sure

That evening …..Maan returns home after meeting Mr.Sharma…..

The sky opens up and it begins to pour just like that day….

Maan is reminded of Geet and he turns back and drives to the sight….

He thought that Geet would be there hiding from the rain…..

He stops the car and rushes in…

Watchman  follows him….

Watchman: sab, sab

Maan doesn't hear nayhting….he just goes to find his Mishty….

To his disappointment Geet is not there…..

Geet has gone home earlier…..

Maan leaves with a heavy heart…..

He drives to her home….

He parks the car far and walks to her house….

Geet is standing in the balcony….playing in the rain….

Maan is relieved to see her and he keeps looking at her till she leaves…..

Maan returns very happy…..he is happy just seeing his Mishty….

Ranno: Geet, ye kya hai? tum toh pura gilli hui ho, jaldhi jao, apne kapde badalkke aao

Geet remembers Maan throwing his coat and asking her to change….

She hops to her wardrobe and finds the coat….

She removes her wet clothes and wears Maan's coat….

She goes to sleep with Maan's dreams…

She feels like resting in his arms…..she remembers the comfort of his embrace…

She longs to see him and she longs for those broad shoulders….
 

She decides to rerurn it to hi  next day….

She doesn't want to part with it, but she wants to see him….

Koi toh bahana chahiye haina?

Next day….

Geet goes to KC to return his coat…..

Adi is surprised to see her again…..

Maan aaj bahut gusse mein hai….

Koi business tension hai….

Adi feels bad for Geet…issko aaj hi aana tah?

Geet:Adi sir, kya mein Mr.Khurana se mil sakthihoon?

Adi: kya? nahi, Maan sir meeting mein hai

Maan just passes by….

He is blasting at everyone…

Maan: Tasha…..ye kay hai?

Maan throws the files….

Tasha stands there with her heads down…

No one dares to speak….

Geet: Adi sir, mein chalthi hoon

Maan hears that voice and he turns back ….

He knows it's Geet…..

Geet is so scared…

Maan: tum? Kahan bhaag rahi ho?

Maan is still out of control….

Geet: mein….Adi sir, mujhe bachao
 

Geet hides behind his back….

Maan:Adiii

Adi jumps and disappears….

Everyone look at Maan…

Maan: aap log yahan kya dekk rahe ho: yahan meri shadhi ho rahi hai kaya?

Sab gayab ho jaathe….

Poor Geet is left alone….

Maan grabs her hand and takes her to his cabin…

Maan relaxes and doesn't want to scare her…..

Geet is still shivering…..

Maan: Geet…Geeet

Geet: haan

Maan: aakhir tum mujhse milne aa hi gayi? Meinne toh kal hi tumme expect akr raha tha

Geet:  mein aapki coat wapas dene aayi thi

She gives it to him…..

Maan: ohhh…toh tum mujhse milne nahi aayi?

Geet: nahi….

Maan gets closer….Geet steps back…..

She hits the wall and stops…..
 

Maan looks into her eyes…Maneet eyelock…..

Maan ko patha hai ki Geet yahan kyun aayi hai?

Lekhin abhi bhi maanne ke liye tayaar nahi hai?

Mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki kab tak aaise chalega?

Maan: mujhe laga kit um issko apne paas hi rakhogi

Geet: kyun? Mujhe kissi ka coat nahi chahiye

Maan: nahi chahiye? Toh aaj raat ko kya pehnoge?

Geet is shocked  how he knew that?

Maan had been stalking her and he was there at her house last night…..haina?

Geet: aapka matlab?

Maan: matlab toh tum bhi achche se jaanthe ho

Maan smirks….Geet feels embarrassed….

Geet: woh….

Maan: tum chaho toh isse apne paas hi rakhlo, tumme isski zyada zaroorat padegi

Maan looks at her and imagines her in that coat….

Geet feels like she is not wearing anything…..

She suddenly adjusts her duppatta and covers herself…..

Maan smiles at her…….he knows how she is feeling now…..

Geet: mujhe jaana hai
 

Geet looks a little scared……

Maan lets her off and she leaves…..

Maan doesn't want to give her pressure….

Let her take her own time….

He is actually going on a business trip…..

This break will make her realise what she wants and what she is missing…..

But it's going to be even more difficult for him to stay away from her….

Maan takes that coat with him as a substitute for his Mishty….

That makes his life more miserable….

That coat and it's unique scent of his mishty make him weak….

Geet too misses him and she has lost her only possession that helped her feel him…..

Feel his emrace and feel his warmth and comfort……

What a fool she is to return it to him?

She yearns to see him but is scared by his intimacy….

He gets so close with so much ease that she could neither resist him nor deny him……

What happens to her when this man is around….

She forgets herself and beraks her limits not knowing how to stop herself …..

She is so scared to face him gain that she decides to stay away from him…

Maan is back in a week and is waiting to see his Mishty…..

He knows that she won't dare to come again…

It's his turn……

He tries to meet her on her way back home….

He waits for her after college…..

But Geet keeps avoiding him….

Either she takes a taxi or runs into the caf , hiding there until he goes…..

She now comes along with her friends and never alone….

Maan is frustrated….this girl is crazy…..

She too is going thru the same pain and anguish but still adamant to accept it…..

Dadi is getting ready for her party….

A small party to appreciate the efforts of the students who collected donations for her children's home….Geet has been the leader of this fund raising project in her college….

That competition was also her idea…..

The students have been raising funds for the past one month and they are handing over the funds raised to dadi today….Dadi wants to show her appreciation by giving them some gifts…..

Maan has a plan…..he knows Geet is the one who deserves it…..

He tells Dadi about his plan…Dadi likes it very much…..

Dadi too is waiting for this only…..

At the party…..

Geet is busy with her friends…..

She never expected Maan there….

She is pleasantly surprised but is also feeling nervous…..

Maan had accompanied dadi and gas come to help dadi…

Aal the girls go gaga seeing MSK in their campus……

Dadi makes an announcement that makes them crazy……

Dadi wishes to thank them and to appreciate their efforts MSK, the most eligible bachelor of Delhi would be taking the winner for a date……

What more would a girl want?...

As of now Geet is the clear winner with more than a lakh to her credit…..

But this dinner has been organized for the elite to contribute….

The girls are after the big shots collecting funds……

Sameera Geet's claamate is always jealous of Geet and after the announcement she wants to win this at any cost….

Till now she is the least bothered about charity and this noble gesture….

But now she wants to go on a date with MSK….

Her father is a business man and he has also come to this event….

She gets a wooping 2 lakhs from her afther and leads Geet …….

Geet is very disappointed….

She just doesn't want to see anyone with Maan……

But how could she get such a huge amount?
 

She tries her best, but she could only get a few thousands more…..

Geet looks disappointed and Maan knows that she is not happy……

Maan comes near her….

Geet tries not to look at him….

Maan gets closer and closer…..

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet:  tum?

Maan: toh tumne mujhe dekha nahi?

Geet: nahi, tum dekh nahi sakthe? Mein thoda busy hoon

Maan smiles…..

Man: achcha? lagtha hai ki yahn koi jal raha hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum usse jalthi ho jo aaj mere saath jaanewali hai

Geet: nahi toh?

Maan: achcha tum hi bathao, tummare college ki beauty queen kaun hai? mein bhi toh dekhtha hoon ki mujhe pasand hai ya nahi?

Geet stares…..she is fuming….

Sameera just comes watchimg Maan talking with Geet…..
 

Sameera: halo, Mr.Khurana, I'm Sameera Khanna, Mr.Rahul Khanna's daughter, you must know him?

Maan: halo, Ms. Kahnna., I know Mr.Khanna, the great industrialist, glad to meet you

Maan shakes hands with her….

Geet looks at him with burning eyes…..

Maan:  you must be the Dashing Diva of your college?

Sam: you look hot Maan

Maan: I'm waiting for my lucky Date

Sam: no one is as lucky as Sameera Khanna

Maan: let's see who's lucky?

Maan winks at Geet……

Geet is getting restless…..

Maan: Geet

Geet: ab kya hai?

Maan: hare, meinne toh tumme kali haath bhejdhi uss din

Geet: haan, khanjoos Khurana

Maan: chalo aaj mein tumme donations detha hoon

Maan takes out a cheque fills it abd shows it to Geet…

Geet: aap ko achanak itna hamdardi kahan se aayi?

Maan: tumme nahi chahiye toh teek hai, mujhe koi problem nahi

Maan pretends to keep it back…..

Geet: nahi nahi, aap detho

Maan: toh tumme mere ssath date pe jaana hai

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, mein sir fuss massom bachon ke liye ye lethi hoon

Maan: magar mein toh sirf tummare liye ye deraha hoon

Geet is eager to know how much he donated….

She tries to snatch it from him….

Maan refuses to give it to her and he himself goes and drops it in her box……

It's result time…….

Sam is leading with 2 lakhs….

Geet share is counted….

Geet's heart pumps fast……

Iss khanjoos khurana ne na jaane kitne paise diya hai?

Geet parys to her babaji…..

Hare Geet usski kya zaroorat hai? Maan be toh ye plan tere liye hi banaya haina?

Geet has collected 11 lakhs……

Maan has donated 10 lakhs…..

Geet is the winner……

Sam jut can't bear it…she leaves…..

Pinky: Geet, tu jeet gayi

Eyery eye is on her……how lucky she is?

Dadi paaises Geet's sincere contributions….

Maan comes behind her and whispers in her ears…..

Maan: toh aaj shamko, tayaar rehna

Maan gives a naughty look….

Geet blushes….she is so happy…..yet a little scared to go with Maan alone…..

That evenng……Geet waits at her house…..

Maan comes and takes her……

Geet looks gorgeous in her white salwar…..

To be continued……